Dimension Expansion

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The author can seriously think about it. People who are still following this book are definitely not here to read some short stories. There are two reasons why I liked the novel very much in the early stage. One is that the plot has great tension, and the other is the realistic future imagination. Recently, I have been slightly disappointed. One reason is that the plot is relatively bland and the sense of crisis is slightly insufficient. The other reason is that the amount of information/imagination provided has become less. After seizing the divine body, there is no substantial progress in understanding the super company and non-server areas. If it is used as a transition period for the next big plot, that is understandable; if not, then the author needs to seriously consider it. It is recommended to prioritize quality between quality and speed, because the audiences are really different!

I was prepared with so much hard work, effort, and restraint at the beginning, but in the end, the complete character design was ruined in less than 3 minutes. In addition to watching the Ear and Nose concert, I actually want to instill in readers that voluntarily working overtime and giving up vacations is happiness. Is the author missing from the class?

I don't even know what the main plot is 😅

A little bit irritable

1. The main line is unknown. At present, it seems that it should be genetic ascension, mechanical ascension, becoming a new human being, immortality, becoming a god, etc. However, there is a hammer here and a stick here and there. The story is too scattered and makes me tired. 2. Not enough fun. The fun comes from showing off, upgrading, and seeing what changes the new body will have after a sudden change. After the fantasy web novel is upgraded to a level, what can be done, what changes are made, the effect will be immediate. If the concentration is 100, your grass snake gray line will be slowly laid out, and the concentration will only be about 10 or 20. 3. The structure is incomplete. After slowly spreading, problems appeared in the worldview structure. This matter cannot be avoided. What is the organizational form of society? Does the government still exist? Why do only giant companies exist, and no trace of the government's existence can be felt? How come non-server areas appeared? Does the government not care? Why doesn't it care? Technology has progressed and productivity has developed. Is there any movement in space, the moon and Mars? Logical writing is very good, but remember that you are writing a web article.

I haven't been able to catch up on Blood Race since 2019. I finished reading it in one sitting a few days ago and it was so satisfying. Now when I read this book again, I can intuitively feel the huge progress in Hamburg's writing skills. As a setting person, I really appreciate this system-building style of writing. It feels very comfortable to see that the entire power system is complete and self-consistent in the book. The new book can also feel Hamburg's progress in plot design. It has changed from the original plain and unabashed writing method of step by step narration to a slow picture with plots, thrilling processes and final rewards. This is also the most popular and mainstream way of writing in Qidian, such as Jiang Ye, Dafeng Da Gengren, Overthrowing the Han Dynasty, Sutra of the Dead, etc. This kind of writing skills combined with the rigorous and complete style and setting of Hamburg itself, as well as the problem-solving ideas of dimensionality reduction and attack through the construction of the power system, are so perfect and comfortable.

The beginning of this book is too strong, and the imagination of the near future is very immersive. The protagonist does things with strict logic and the plot is compact, which is closer to a physical book. Now that we have passed the first tense point, it seems that we are about to enter the research of supernatural powers. I wonder if I can write something new.

There are rave reviews in the comment area. When will the comment area be able to have a Steam-style review format? How many minutes of viewing will it be displayed?

This is the best book in recent years.

The reader's expectations have been constantly raised in the past, but the core climax was briefly touched upon, failing to meet the readers' expectations. After that, new dilemmas and conflicts were not introduced immediately, and it felt like the film was dragging on. It went downhill from that point. Different from Blood Clan, the identity of the protagonist in this book is too high-profile, and it is not suitable to be written as a small character counterattack. The road to subsequent self-development has been basically blocked, including too many people knowing about the God Body Project, which has led to low expectations. Written as a power struggle between companies and groups to show the protagonist's strategist-like planning thinking, but there is no in-depth corresponding preparation to create a related sense of excitement. It only gives the most basic introduction to the settings of each power. It can also be seen that the author is not good at writing this aspect, and I feel a bit stuck in the quagmire. To be honest, I felt that it was better to push Yang Qing to the front desk. Dr. Gao died during the external invasion, which made everyone else think that the God Body Plan failed. All the internal personnel who knew the details of the plan died. The protagonist escaped behind the scenes and continued to work as his employee in the company. By controlling Yang Qing, the plot unfolded in a branch line in which Yang Qing competed with the descendants of the Song family for inheritance. External forces were also ready to move. On the other hand, the protagonist is taken out of the cumbersome power battles that he is not good at, and the main line follows the superhuman self-development route that the author is good at. Generally after the climax of an online article, the identity and social status of the protagonist will be suppressed to prevent there being nothing to write about later. But with my poor imagination, I still don't know how to develop the protagonist's superpowers. The success of Blood Race in this aspect is mainly due to his relatively smooth transition from mortal to extraordinary. The sense of being hidden in the city in an urban environment can easily raise expectations. In this world view, even if you don't have super powers, just relying on AI to control sci-fi weapons at a high level will give you the feeling of fighting between gods. Coupled with super powers... The protagonist's divine body cannot embody the awesome feeling of Goldfinger at all. Just like other people use rocket launchers and missiles, although the protagonist uses an atomic bomb, because there is no foreshadowing of the particularity and necessity of this atomic bomb, it feels like it doesn't matter... Isn't it just a more powerful explosion? Compared with the surrounding environment, the abilities obtained by the protagonist in the early stage of the Vampire race are obvious evolutionary abilities, which are the difference from the agricultural era to the industrial era. So I feel that some new settings must be added to absolutely realize the necessity and advantages of the protagonist Golden Finger, one that is dimensionally reduced, that can absolutely stabilize any super power in a certain aspect, thereby raising expectations. Not more powerful superpowers, but more like other more powerful rules, such as the ability to grant and develop superpowers to others?

After seeing the recent chapters, let me give an overview: the overall story setting is novel, with future AI intelligence and special powers. The combination of the two makes me see a very good story. The author obviously has something. If you insist on reading the latest chapters, you will be eager to subscribe and even get better;

The writing is not nice, it's like reading a description document

Reminds me of a sentence: The ultimate Achilles heel of any perfect plan, technology, product, etc. Is people.

After watching more than a dozen pictures, I don't understand what I'm looking at. I still don't know what is going on with the protagonist, and what is there that attracts the protagonist. I just saw that the protagonist keeps talking about how he is doing, how he is doing, and there is no specific goal shown. It feels very vague.

This book is definitely not very good. Although the setting is very rigorous, it is not interesting enough and has too many early settings. The protagonist's concept and action of secretly changing bodies are too late.

The world view presented at the beginning is so great that it can be seen as an allegory for the development of AI technology in the next few decades. What is the main plot, exploring superpowers ➕ becoming bigger and stronger, and my sister's doomsday deduction. How will the follow-up unfold? I look forward to it.

The author's style is a bit radio-esque but not as overly self-indulgent as a book like "The Tao and the Carbon-Based Monkey". For those who like it, they will never forget it. The exploration of various ways of thinking and perspectives is very interesting. The author is also very good at exploiting his strengths and avoiding weaknesses, and his plot control is very sophisticated.

The writing level is there, but the progress is too slow, and there is nothing exciting about it. It is not popular and I can't read it anymore.

I thought it was too watery after reading the post. . Isn't this rhythm very good? It's compact and the details are clear. The psychological activity of the Goblin Next Door is really slow in just one chapter, right? Each chapter contains a lot of information, and it's not useless information.

To be honest, after reading too many novels like this, I am really unwilling to accept that I have not experienced this kind of super-technological life and super-technological games, and I will die.

The logic is very strict, this is fairy grass, the entire plot line is interlocking, and all the foreshadowing can be used, it is great.

I am the only one with unique research ability. In fact, there is still a large audience. It is very popular to delve into a subject.

Is it that you can't write the text? I'm still delayed because of something, so I wanted to say something.

I've only read chapter 5 now. It feels like holding a guide to life in the future world. The description of life in the future world is very solid. One word comes to mind, rational romance. The future in the book can be completely seen and touched in the brain. 10 Points of praise.

I almost gave up on the first few chapters because they were not to my liking. Fortunately, I read them later and got a taste of them 😁

Has the burger been updated today? No

The best novel I have read in the past year or two. The story is compact and logically coherent. It describes the world where AI is prevalent. It has the beauty of reading the Three-Body Problem. I immediately recommended the work to my friends, hoping that the author would keep it up and put it on the shelves as soon as possible.

I've read more than 30 chapters so far, and it's pretty awesome. But one thing I'm more doubtful about is how this story developed into a million-word novel. The AI ​​in it is so awesome that it's not easy to write later.

If you want to update, keep updating. If you want to cut it, just cut it. No one will notice if you pretend to be dead every few days.