Azeroth? No, This Is Game of Thrones!

Western fantasy is Western fantasy, a creation of European and American culture. We can accept using Eastern thinking to transform a Western fantasy world, but we cannot accept that it was a nondescript merger of China and the West from the beginning. Don't write too many Eastern words in a Western literature, and avoid modern and Eastern discourse when communicating with characters. Because novels also have their own characteristics, you can't add strawberry jam to dumplings.

Ancient style novel, opening this invincible trick requires overwhelming combat power. I have only seen this style before 2013

Stop making fun of yourself. Game of Thrones TV series are better than your writing. His loyal subordinate was killed by a big bear, but because he met a character in the plot, he came up with a rationale, saying that he was loyal, so he let the big bear go? Then why did the protagonist you wrote earlier look so sad after his loyal subordinate died? Afterwards, you were surrounded by people on the mountain, and a lot of people died. After finally waiting for the dragon to come, you actually killed your subordinates and shook hands to make peace? Do you want to be so feminine? I'm so fucked, I'm so effeminate!! The persona that you have been creating to protect your subordinates has been forgotten in the blink of an eye? It's so poisonous and disgusting

The first chapter starts with so many local languages ​​of ours. If you don't know how to write, don't write Western fantasy. If you don't know how to write it, it's easy to overturn. I suggest you read: Empire Afterglow: Starting from Dunkirk. Although this novel has some flaws, it is still relatively good. The humanistic background is still very reasonable. I suggest you read it and look at what you have written. You will find out what you have written. It is not to belittle you but to elevate him. We must have a strong balance in our hearts and be impartial!!!

The Black Dragon Princess is about 300 meters long, and among all the dragons in the tour, the largest Black Death is only 78 meters long! The most important thing is that the dragons in Warcraft can do magic!!! What are you trying to do? What's the difference between this and a polar bear entering a sheepfold?

This one weighs about three kilograms. I really can't understand how someone dared to fight the protagonist after seeing him using this giant sword

I always feel a bit insulted by the World of Warcraft plug-ins.

Since you have opened a plug-in that is far superior to this world, why do you put your mind on maneuvering, trying to gain support, and flattering? Since you want to write about Machiavellian plots, why do you want to cheat? What is the logic of your behavior and the interaction between the left and right brains? Knowing the power of World of Warcraft plug-ins, shouldn't your thoughts be on how to use them? And after the power of the plug-in is crushed, why bother to camp? After all, power comes from power! Sometimes you act like a dog, sometimes you act like a subordinate, and sometimes you flatter yourself. Are you trying to make money? The question is, haven't you already become as rich as anyone through cheating? So when the behavioral logic of this work cannot be explained, it becomes the author's self-pleasure.

I can't stand it anymore. What does it mean to be taken advantage of when you have money? Is there no force to suppress these mercenaries? The introduction hints at invincibility, and then goes back a level or two. I still need to rewrite and polish the details of the outline🤏 before people can read it.

From the beginning to the end, except for the blowjob, the whole person seemed to be suffering from brain fog, giving the impression that I had masturbated too much. I didn't understand the purpose of your writing about Onyxia, and I didn't understand the meaning of your wisdom everywhere.