Liaozhai: from Peach Fairy to Qing Emperor

The setting is the Second Generation of Gods, "My Half-Saint Enlightenment Teacher" and my "Taishan Fujun's Notes: If you have anything to tell my boss, I'm just a little sapling"

Daily tasks, drinking, messing around, sleeping with fairies, there are many more to look at.

Isn't this going to be updated?😰 I didn't even give an announcement, I just cut it off, it was cut off too quickly.

Is there a Shennong? Is it the Zhiyi novel version? Or the film and television version? I have never read Zhiyi novels, only the film and television drama adaptations, and there are very few of the latter that have been written into fine novels.

I don't know if it's my misunderstanding, but many of the later chapters have a bit of an AI flavor. Although it feels like the author has made some modifications, the unique AI writing style is still there.

No, keep on keeping on, why did you die? The author gives up too easily. You are just a newbie, you are too anxious. Keep writing, your grades will increase. What a pity.

I want to learn about literary youth but haven't learned from home. Literary youth is about writing style, but before considering writing style, you must first be able to tell the story and characters clearly. The problem now is, if you haven't even done this, how can you talk about writing style?

The last sentence of the introduction left me speechless...

If I want to deliberately bring the Qing Dynasty into the novel, why not call it Han Di?

Hit the mark, I checked after a few days and it was still cut.

He is a strange peach tree spirit who has only been practicing for twenty years. How could the spiritual body that transformed into a plant and tree have human spiritual orifices, meridians and dantian? It's not like Bai Suzhen who practiced orthodox cultivation for 1,700 years to become a Taoist body.

The writing style is average, and there are no whimsical ideas. It's okay to write a novel purely for love. If you want to draw some pictures of Mimi, I can only say that the author is not very talented. I have read dozens of chapters, but this book is also lukewarm. The description of the fighting scenes that I am most concerned about is really ordinary and has nothing exciting. It feels like the Spring and Autumn writing style is passed over in one stroke, and the enemy just goes down and says goodbye with a magical power, so what's the point? Writing about characters is also quite stereotyped. For example, Nie Xiaoqian is always a gentle and freehand image of a victim. Previous writers have failed to write her well. If you ask me, I would write Nie as a fierce and fierce positioning like "Rakshasa Ghost Mother". World background story development. It is also a superimposed version of Shinto novels and the fox-style novels that have been written recently. In conclusion, I barely passed the test, and I can still see it, but I can't make any money, so it's just a practice. At the moment, I don't see the author's writing skills and fantastic ideas. I think these are the two most important points for being successful in writing novels. There is a long way to go. In fact, I think this book can be cut, and the long-term pain is worse than the short-term pain. Restart writing

This book is okay, it has a classic fairy tale flavor

The first three chapters are the best written, and the subsequent wording and sentence making are a bit like ai🙂

The choice of words and sentences is too deliberate, and it is not good to use too much force.

I feel like the change of head was handled too much, and it took away the character of the Yue Mansion Emperor and the Human Emperor.

The newbie's grades are pretty good. The more words he writes, the better he will get. Come on.

Is there a Shen Nong? How are the books?

Is there no cp and no ambiguity? If so, watch

It's a very good book. I've been following it to the end since I read it. If you consider sticking with it, it should get better and better. I saw the news yesterday, which is really unacceptable and a pity. I hope the author will consider it.