Douluo Dalu: Soul Entity, Master of the Spirit Realm!

But if Xiao Wu and Qian Renxue refuse to accept this situation and insist on having Ye Ling Ling as a single female protagonist, then the good points of this book become a bit toxic. I suggest you let nature take its course and delete the label of single heroine. Why hang yourself from a tree? Duoluo with multiple heroines will definitely have more audiences than single heroine. You are still writing with multiple heroines, and your current relationship writing is also good

It's obvious that your outline is ambiguous and will not be accepted. If you want to filter readers, you don't have to do that.

The soul guide seems to be a version weapon. In fact, it is a version trap. It's a pure waste of training time. This thing even reaches the Dou San period. Even those ten-level God-killing soul-guided artillery shells couldn't kill the God King. Not even as good as a super artifact. And I really want to learn the soul guidance device. It is better to wait for Soul Saint to learn the other way around later. That way the learning efficiency is much faster than that of low-level soul masters. Just a bit tasteless. It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away

You can only study soul guides in Dou Er, not Dou Yi. The Douyi Soul Guidance Device has disappeared, and the only thing that can be used is the Storage Soul Guidance Device. And this thing is also very rare and expensive. Even the lowest one cubic soul guide is extremely expensive. And only some ruins can produce this thing.

Starting to break ice-breaking soul tools by yourself at the second level is too putting the cart before the horse. Even if you research it, you can only make low-level soul tools if you don't have enough soul power. It is better to rush to get the title and then study the soul tools. By then, you will have the strength to cover your research results. 9-Level mental power will be researched faster than the current 2-level soul tools.

I don't believe that Wang Hu won't drag you into a fight. This is inevitable. After all, he is a jerk who is either being compared to others or being compared to others.

The author should not let the protagonist bear some so-called responsibilities for no reason. That would be great. This kind of person is so unreal. Just protect the people around you. To the best of your ability. It's normal to do something about it. And there is no need to fire map cannons. It's easy to get into the God Realm. Your only enemies are Buddha and Shura deities. Because there is no room for two tigers in one mountain. He wants to turn the divine world into the Tang world. Douluo became the Tang Family Continent. Unless you are willing to be a dog to Buddha. Otherwise, the positions will be inherently antagonistic 🪖

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Yes, as a new author, this book is quite good. It reads quite smoothly. So far, there are no poisonous points. The research on martial arts and soul guides is also quite interesting. I still need to update more and increase the amount of updates. Your level will definitely be one of the best among Douluo fans in the same period.

Single girl Ye Lingling? Then what does it mean to show favorability to Xiao Wu before? You'd better change it this time. Even if the sugar with three spoons is not popular, if you write something ambiguous, you must accept it, otherwise you should not write ambiguous scenes.