Douluo Dalu: I Feared Death, So I Put Every Point into Defense

Why did 🍬wen like Tianmu invade Qidian?

The martial spirit was awakened in Chapter 28. If you can't speed up the progress of the world in the sky and allow the protagonist to participate in the plot of Douluo Continent in the main world, you will abandon the book immediately, and the data will not be uploaded. It is obvious that the fan fiction cares about the characters in the original work. If you write like this, you will have created your own Douluo Continent, and you are the kind of person who sells the dog's meat. Look at how many people are interested now. If you don't change faster later, you will lose the data, which is scary enough. Moreover, if there are too many dialogues in the Tianmu, it's so long-winded that I skipped and watched it. The first two chapters were pretty good, but the later chapters made me tired. They were always dialogues, and the protagonist's progress was too slow. He must be involved in Dou Yi's plot, otherwise the fanfic would lose its meaning.

It's too watery and never enters the protagonist's perspective.

Why do all Douluo fans make the villains so stupid? Even if you treat Tang San as a villain, you should still look like a human being. I can accept Tang San as a villain, but villains also need to have IQ. How can a villain without IQ bring out the excellence of the protagonist! Every fanfic makes Tang San and Yu Xiaogang look like stupid pigs!

The title of the book is illogical. After reading the introduction, I found that it is useless. I am afraid of the dead point of defense. Can you defend it for a lifetime or something? Can't you just defend yourself and still not be able to escape? He couldn't run even if he wanted to because of his speed. Since he was afraid of death, shouldn't he use speed and defense in parallel?

It's too slow, bro, it's 56 chapters, and the protagonist is still 4 years old. Brother, you need to eat. If you keep writing like this, what will you do if the plot doesn't advance? There are some things that can be ignored. You think you have to write the plot in such detail, with dialogue under the canopy, and the tossing back and forth between the two worlds. Think about it, you normally write a drama plot, three to four hundred chapters, and finish it in one to two million words. If you add dialogue under the canopy, add Dou Yi's real world, and add Chen Yu's world, if you write it in such detail, it will take you five to six million words to complete it. A fan fiction has more than 1 million words. If it is less than 2 million words, it is very detailed. Any more would be superfluous.

Be careful that no one reads the Tianmu text. Immediately change your name to trick people into entering the pig killing plate.

The plot does not follow the protagonist, but follows the sky screen, and the plot of the sky screen is really funny, it is purely plot. It is not as good as "Four Lanterns", written by "Duluo: Pioneer of the Era, Gods Parallel".

🍬B Extremely, it's my fault for not reading the introduction carefully, it's so disgusting

Silly kids, run away, it's poisonous.