The Supreme Bloodline of Ice and Fire

I bought the physical book of the novel Ice and Fire when I was in high school 67 years ago. At that time, I could calm down and savor it carefully, but now I don't have the patience to read group portraits. What I read online is a sense of immersion and a cool word. I can accept an indigenous protagonist like the Valley Eagle. But although your protagonist has traveled through time, he has no role to play. The first few chapters are all about the indigenous brothers.

It's useless to write so many twists and turns in front of you. The Dragon King wants dragons. Writing so much history makes you so useless. It's not because there are no dragons. If there are dragons, it's better to write more about dragon farming than you write these. And you don't even see the shadow of the main line in so many chapters. It's not that you can't write like this. It's easy to die like this. It also tests the author's writing skills. Not every author has the writing skills of the author of the book Xiongying. Other authors are so good at writing and the pace is not as slow as before. There are innovations in Game of Thrones novels. In one version, the male protagonist is the Pope, and the writing style is very good. In the end, I ended up writing it to death because the pace was too slow. If you can't retain people in the early stage, who will see you later? I'm too lazy to read your updates now. I'll look at it when you enter the main line. I hope you can survive until then!

I can't understand it, and it's a bit difficult to watch. The protagonist makes the protagonist Innis no different from a passerby on the roadside. Aboriginals can't be written like this. After writing 15 chapters, many things were not explained at all, leaving readers completely confused about the power structure of this novel. How did the Targaryen family get to Essos? How did you become so depressed? And how the protagonist's family came to Westeros, and some subsequent ruling matters were not written at all. I don't understand this part of the plot in the valley. Why does the dragon come back? Hasn't this dragon always been there? According to the introduction of this novel, the protagonist's family was in seclusion before the destruction of Valyria. That means that this family had both dragons and basics before the invasion of Westeros. So it is impossible for the Vale to assassinate the royal family.

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Who is the pig's trotter, the elder brother or the younger brother? I'm a little confused about you.

If you can't write a Hongdae epic, then you should structure the story honestly and seriously, so as to enhance the readability. After reading so many chapters, I feel like my brain has been invaded by a virus. The writing of Wenqingbing is terrible. The urban dragon king's writing is better than yours.

Let me talk about the conclusion first: The book is a good book, both literary and story-telling. The author is thoughtful and full of new ideas. But, I don't understand. Is the protagonist the elder brother? Or the younger brother? I'm a little confused. Group portraits are not very mainstream. I read Chapter 25, but I really can't understand who I am going to write about. If the protagonist is the older brother, why do you want to write about his unexpected son? If the protagonist is the younger brother, why do you want to write about the elder brother descending from heaven to earth? Then, when you start, there is no doubt that the reader will be placed in the perspective of the younger brother. Then when I read Chapter 25, I found that the sister also belongs to the elder brother, the glory also belongs to the elder brother, and the position of Dragon King is also waiting for the elder brother to inherit it. No, why did you focus on your younger brother in the first few chapters?

By the way, isn't there a family flag pattern? What is the family mantra? Is there any dragon stone technology? The inheritance of blood magic and fire magic? And are there any dragon training manuals and dragon binding mantras? The most important thing is, is there any technology for tile steel manufacturing, recasting and coloring?

The update time is changed to 9 a. M. Every day, and at least two pages of 5,000 words or more are guaranteed every day. Due to the holiday, the author is now writing full-time. Occasionally, if the code is too much, there will be more updates (But don't expect too much, after all, I still want to save a few drafts to deal with emergencies-just when I want to be lazy.)

I feel that the chapters I wrote during the New Year period were a bit rushed, that is, Chapters 12 to 15. Some content was forced into them in order to broaden the world view, but the writing was a bit confusing. Also, there are a lot of character perspectives in those pictures. I will try my best to write one chapter only from the perspective of one of Aenys or Damon, so that everyone can look more comfortable. Because when I reviewed it myself, I felt a little uncomfortable watching it. I just felt like I couldn't grasp the rhythm. The level is limited, so please bear with me. Also, as the New Year is over, we will ensure two or three updates a day. As long as there are no special circumstances, we will keep updating. I usually stay up late at night to write, maybe I post at regular intervals, or I post one post as soon as I write it. Thank you again for your support.

Updates will not stop these days. However, maybe it's because I am a troubled person. I was reviewing what I had written before late at night, and I couldn't bear it. Chapter 12~18 will be carried out, and the order or part of the plot content will be significantly changed. I feel like the characters I created look like shit. I can't even sympathize with them, and they're too messy. It will be corrected within the next two days. Interested readers can go back and look at these pictures again. Forget what I originally wrote, it's the same as shit.

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This is almost the most detailed map of the world that can be found in the circle. The current location of the Themis family is not on this map, but in the southeast corner of Sothoros continent at the bottom. Because the known map is only so big, it can't be marked, just a complete map of Tianping Valley. Maybe it will be done in the future, but it probably won't be completed in the near future because it hasn't been fully figured out yet.

The current story is set in Westeros?

There are still many vacancies in this huge valley - build your own family, gentlemen! Readers who are interested in helping Fat Cat to improve the map of the valley can leave a message. As long as there are no questions, they will be adopted. The following is an example: The Balrosse family - Tianmen City Title: Marquis Family flag: Silver sword with dragon pattern on a blue background Family motto: Fight to the death (Valyrian: Syvānon jēgās, lentā binigon) Fief: The northern part of the royal territory, seven towns and countless villages; the northern part of the east, Tianmen City, and the surrounding areas of the Tianmen Peak Mountains Party affiliation: None, only loyal to the Dragon Lord Contemporary patriarch: Calante Balrosse; also the contemporary "Tianmen Knight" and "Great Knight" Typical appearance of the family: black hair Main members of the family: The eldest son - Rhettir Balrosay (currently the Dragon King's attendant) The second son - Kerion Balrosay (deceased) Family history: None In addition, the Valley has always focused on justice - equality between men and women, so it is okay even if a woman is a knight or the head of the family. The last point please note, only for count, viscount, baron or knight families! ! !

Is the bloodline of Chi You, the ancestral warrior demon god, considered noble? Are the bloodlines of Huangdi Xuanyuan and Emperor Yan Shennong considered noble?

Author. Protagonist: Can they rebuild a new huge Valyrian super empire?

There are a lot of messy settings. If you plan to sell the copyright to make a game or a film or TV series, you must first write a good story. There are a lot of settings, history, and in-depth descriptions of group portraits and characters. The perspective is wrong, and the two protagonists are even more poisonous. Who reads these online articles nowadays. You should refer to it when writing fan fiction (I have no money to go to college, so I can only kill dragons). If Brother Shui eats too much fine chaff, it's really hard to read a book like this one. Otherwise, you can also refer to Wrath of the Sleeping Dragon. Although that fan fiction has a lot of poisonous points, at least you can make money.

I just finished reading the first chapter, and I thought the protagonist's family was in Westeros, but it wasn't. So where is the protagonist's family in this book? In the continent of Essos? Can I have a topographic map? This makes it easier to understand