Game of Thrones: the Red Lion

The writing is very good👌. I look forward to the follow-up plot. It would be better if there were 30,000 updates per day.

I don't know if Lannister is good or not, but how to make the old lion and the young lion fight against each other is too simple. The unscrupulous Lord Tywin should die at the hands of the child.

The writing is very smooth, and I have seen the script of this character family in CK3. It is very reasonable to be the Lord of the West.

I will be here to help with the new Game of Thrones book

A very enjoyable book, thank the author for the good story. It is right not to make the strange powers and chaotic gods too conspicuous. One of the writing principles of A Song of Ice and Fire is that there can be magic but no direct miracles. You cannot write directly about what the gods have done. The gods should remain in a vague state. This is what Mr. Martin learned from Tolkien. In The Lord of the Rings, no matter how fierce the mortals in Middle-earth fought, Valar would not directly go off to participate in the mortal war. Magic and gods are the flavor, and human stories are the focus. Some well-written Game of Thrones fanfics have gone astray in the later stages and become gods and engage in supernatural battles. I hope the author can continue to control the scale, come on!

Finally, I saw a protagonist with a very masculine temperament. He was not playful, joking, or pretentious, nor was he a little white rabbit pretending to be a big-tailed wolf with a lot of swear words. He was decisive, cold, controlled, and had the warmth of humanity.

I feel that since the author does not follow the plot line, most of the character conflicts have been resolved in advance. For example, Joffrey has become a good boy in Westeros under the education of the protagonist. It is free to write like this, but writing 1 million words would test the author's sandbox deduction and story control skills. I don't know if it is an illusion that the protagonist's development is a bit too smooth, lacking the twists and turns of the story and the character's growth arc. It feels like the protagonist is already a big boy at the beginning of the original story. But this book is also very unique. Because it does not blindly cater to the original work, the changes in some characters are very eye-catching. However, I really can't imagine what difficulties the protagonist will have in the later period. The heroic epic develops too fast, and I feel that it is not easy to write the follow-up plot (›´ω`‹ )

The protagonist of this book gave me the feeling that he had never read the book

It has the flavor of the original but is faster and more satisfying. Most Ice and Fire fans on the market will never be able to write how to add a mentally retarded protagonist many years later. This book seems to have been written by someone who has at least read the original.

Jon Snow is untrustworthy, he can betray and kill the Mother of Dragons, and he can also kill others, and he is very naive and easily deceived.

The plain and straightforward narrative style makes the opening plot too bland, the main and supporting characters are not outstanding, and the time traveler looks like a native when there is no hook, which seems boring at first glance, but the results look okay. Could it be that the writing behind it is very good?

The writing is quite good, the plot is reasonable, and the protagonist doesn't have any particularly exaggerated systems or anything. I think teaching Joffrey well here is a major feature of the book. If I want to take the Emperor offline later, I think it will be very simple. After all, this is the real Emperor and not a freak raised by Cersei. Instead, Cersei, who is so smart, may overthink and murder Joffrey and replace it with someone else.

I am a fan of the original game of Thrones, and I have tried my best to pay attention to all the details. It is really awesome. It's a pity that it still lacks a sense of epicness. If the author can read "Knights of the Seven Kingdoms" carefully and grasp the epic feeling that runs through it, then I would like to call you the leader of the Game of Thrones fandom.

The author proves that Game of Thrones fans can look good even if they are written in POV

How is it different from the original show? Nothing has been changed.

In the power of eternal life, the shadow of great blessings protects and helps. The basic blessing words of officials from time to time are: The bad luck will never come, the good things will go well, the good things will be delivered, the bad guys will knock on the door, the money will be good, and the body will be healthy. What the hell, that kind of person is a blessing Bless me On the first day of the first lunar month of the Year of the Horse, I have something to say about Tianjin.

It's well written and eye-catching. I hope you can give Emperor Qiao a good ending. There are so many fanfics where I don't see him alive.

Why are there so many people in the introduction? 😜

After the death of the violent man Maris, who was killed by the Barristan formation, his soul traveled to the beggar prince Viserion. Will it be interesting to restore the Dragon Dynasty?

I originally wanted to write about Lannister, and the setting was already written. But when I read your book today, I bumped into the setting, hahaha

Why does he look more and more like a native? At first, he didn't care about Euron's rebellion in the Iron Islands. He just sealed an ironborn and thought he could suppress Euron. Travelers should know how powerful Euron is. It feels the same now when playing Tywin, completely forgetting that he is a time traveler

I heard that the author is a cute little boy, quack quack! 😍😍😍

It has the flavor of the original work, but other fans feel that they are just wearing the skin of Game of Thrones, and the magic has been changed beyond recognition.

Is Varys really dead? Why do I feel like he's not dead yet?

Update you guys quickly!

There is a saying about Tessa that Jia Kun is Tessa. She was saved by the Faceless Man and then became the Faceless Man.

It's beautiful, good luck to the author! Get up and update when you are not dead 🙂

Understand?

Come on, it's well written. It has a different approach than previous Game of Thrones fans and teaches Emperor Qiao to become a truly benevolent king. "God bless my king Joffrey"