The Golden Scale of Ice and Fire

I will be here to help with the new Game of Thrones book

The heroine of this book has not yet been decided. If you are interested, you can leave a comment and give me suggestions.

In the early stages of this book, it will be the same as the original A Song of Ice and Fire, trying not to rely too much on dragons or anything else. After all, in this low-martial world with dragons, the whole thing will become a simple mode. So in my setting, the two-headed dragons are still just small dragons, and they will not turn into giant dragons until at least later, when magic returns. When the entire Golden Fleet goes on an expedition, these two dragons will shine. But that may be something very later. After all, until now in the original work, Daenerys's two-headed dragons are still young dragons. We may need to think about some plots later to make the appearance of the two-headed dragons in Westeros more reasonable.

I would like to give you a personal suggestion. This kind of Western fantasy fanfic does not require the author to write in a translator's voice, but at least let's just write it in vernacular. Write the whole sentence without skipping it, and don't always use related words and idioms to abbreviate it. Do you think it's cool to write like this? If you really like to do this, then you might as well add more classical Chinese. At least classical Chinese has a sense of historical significance. The first 10 chapters are normal. I couldn't stand it until I read chapter 17. I really don't do this when reading historical texts. My personal suggestion is, it's up to you whether to change it or not.

Let me state in advance that this book is a fan of "A Song of Ice and Fire". Most of the plots in this book will be completely based on the plot of the original book. The plot of the TV series is only for reference. The author himself is currently supplementing the original work. When the timeline and next ideas are completely clarified, he will ensure that he will update it twice a day as soon as possible.

It's over, there are still some violations, and the plots of the next few chapters need to be changed. Chapter 7 has only been unblocked now, but updates will be maintained every day.

It's early. I don't see any major flaws in the five chapters so far. If the author can stick to two chapters a day and is not too careful, you should give it a try.

It looks good at the beginning, so I'll save it for now. Come on, author.

Fans from niche communities and locals are bound to hit the streets.

Regarding the names, all the names have been changed, but the names of other families and places in the entire Tianping Valley are still the same as Hoi An. After all, the prototype of the entire valley story is a real dragon, plus various knights and servants, as well as various explorers from Yimen Tower, plus indigenous people, so the names of the family and people are more down-to-earth. Place names are more easy to remember. After all, to be honest, the original A Song of Ice and Fire is actually quite complicated. I still haven't understood a lot of things, so the place names are mainly for convenience.

I have some worries recently: The plot I am writing now, if it is read by readers who have not read the original work and TV series, I feel that there may be some obstacles in reading. But if every small point, such as the Seven Kingdoms or what the Valyrian Freehold is, is explained, it feels too wordy. But then I thought about it, and it is not because of the TV series and the original work. Who can read it? We talked about watching the second creation of A Song of Ice and Fire, so I will write it like this for the time being. I will try my best to give some explanations to the places or characters mentioned. And regarding the update issue, I will update it once or twice a day. After all, it is quite laborious to think of some plots. If you feel that the update is too slow, you can also keep it. As long as there is one person reading this book, as long as the author is still alive, there will be no eunuchs.

I am very happy to see another "Ice and Fire" fanfic, and it is also a Dragon King family type. This is my favorite type of "ice and fire" fic. I would like to make a suggestion here, that is, I hope the author can modify the "language" in the article-that is, the names of characters, family names, place names, and some mantras and proverbs-into Valyrian format. Because a very important aspect of fan works is the sense of substitution. On the one hand, these senses of substitution come from the storyline, and on the other hand, they come from the cultural atmosphere reflected in the article. Language is one of the important expressions of cultural atmosphere. I have seen some fan works involving the Dragon King family before, such as "Dragon Reign", "Lord of the Dragons", and "The Lord of Bronze and Fire" (although they are basically unfinished or discontinued). These works all use Valyrian as Valyrian names a lot, and there is also a lot of Valyrian in the dialogue of the characters (especially the dragon training commands and songs). This gives readers a strong sense of involvement. Moreover, in Martin's original work, Valyrians also preferred High Valyrian names. For example, the Targaryen family, except for Princess Alyssa and Prince Duncan, are all named in High Valyrian. The same is true for the names of the Velaryon family and the Celtigar family, two families that retain Valyrian traditions, as well as the nobility of the Valyrian-dominated colonies such as Lys and Volantis. Valyrian personal names have a characteristic, that is, the names of the dragon king's family or the nobles married to the dragon king often contain "ae" (pronounced /a. E/ in Valyria, which is associated with dragons (zaldrīzes) and flames (perzys), highlighting their identity as descendants of the Valyrian Dragon King, such as Aegon, which means "son of the dragon"). At the same time, many noble names will have the suffix -gon. Or -on expresses his "dragon blood descendant" status (such as Aegon, Daemon). At the same time, most Valyrian male names end with "ys" (such as Corlys, Viserys, Maelys), and female names often end with "ra", "na", and "ya". In addition, Martin's original work also pays attention to character naming. For example, the prototype of the Andals is Christian Anglo-Saxon and other Germanic people, so families who believe in the Seven Gods often use names derived from Germanic languages or from the Bible. Names, such as "William", "Henry", "Jon", "Hugo", etc. The North is mainly the ancestors, whose prototypes are Celts, so their names have strong Old English or Celtic colors, such as "Edd" ('Eddard' is the medieval spelling of 'Edward', derived from the Old English 'Eadweard'), Brandon (another spelling of Celtic 'Branwen', meaning raven), Benjen (Celtic ' Another spelling of Bene'). In the original book, in the ancient times, there were almost no Andal-style names in the North (such as the Kings of the North); after the Manderly family came to White Harbor, the North gradually used Andal names; after Aegon's conquest, names like " There are more and more names like "Jon", "Rob", "William" and "Daisy". In the author's novel, the protagonist brothers are dragon kings, one is called "William", which is a typical Germanic name, corresponding to the name of the Andals; The other is called Mayne. If it is "Mayne", it is a Celtic name (from the ancient Gaul region), which is more suitable for the ancestors of the north. If it is "Mehn", it is also a Germanic name. Moreover, there are no "ne" or "en" in Valyrian names. " Or ending in "hn". As the once aloof dragon kings, even if they had lost their dragons, they disdained to use the names of other nations. Just like the Roman nobles in ancient Rome, they could be called "Marcus", but they would never give them names." Möller" or "Meyer". Now many artificial intelligences can translate Valyrian, and the translation principles completely follow the rules written for Valyrian by linguist David J. Peterson. The author can try to convert some names and place names into Valyrian style. For example, Radagon "Radagon"——" "Readagon", "Malenya" - "Mealenya" (these characters were originally created by Mr. Martin), or Alexander "Alexōanēr" (Guardian of Humanity) - "Rȳbagon" (Guardian), William "william" (Steady Guardian) - "Vēttan" ('firm' hero, warrior), Mayne (Strong One) - "Ōdrikys" (Strong One).

What is this? A Game of Thrones fan?