Elf: Starting from the Different-Color Lalulas

It's been a long time since I've seen such a "deviant" elf novel. Compared with the main storyline of collectible cards where elves are constantly fighting, training elves, and collecting badges, the urban themes of the arrival of elves, or the dark protagonists of the cruel reality genre, as well as the elf science popularization genre some time ago, such travelogue-style daily genres that pursue romance without focusing on the advancement of the main storyline are really rare, or refreshing. As a friend of mine said, there will always be people in the world who are pursuing power and money, and even the most romantic souls will bow their heads because of the heaviness of reality. But when we write something in person, or type on the keyboard to express something, we still fantasize about a romantic and warm world, maybe just Delusional, but always looking forward to a bright future, this is just our instinctive love. I know that if this continues, there may be no road ahead, the scenery may not be as bright as spring, and there may be regrets of tragic results, but I still choose to do this because I really like it, so I don't care. Regarding the issue of the current heroine, I have some thoughts privately (for reference only) Let's talk about elves first. For me, elves are a miracle. The relationship with the trainer is from one point in thousands of dust to the only one. It may be the little one raised in the family some time ago... So I have some feelings (wry smile). At first, the two were just racial cognitions. I am a human and it is an elf. Then it became Xu Qiansu and Lalulas, and finally became a whole and a family. So the issue of the number of female protagonists is indeed worthy of discussion. How many? Single? None? Human energy is limited, and the number of elves should increase in the future. So how to divide the proportion of content between elves and heroines? Or just don't describe it. I don't think harem stories are bad. I also have the essence of LSP. I just feel unworthy because of the marginalization. Maybe because I also have a low sense of existence. It's quite interesting now. I won't deliberately alienate anyone, but I still have a specific preference for a certain person. In short... I'll leave it for everyone to criticize. I won't elaborate too much. I don't know what the author will write when he grows up. Maybe he has followed the path of other elven novels. Maybe the subsequent rhythm will gradually become inconsistent with the current style and the style of writing will change. Maybe I will regret it, but I can't make a criticism, because I only stand from the perspective of the reader and my own standpoint. So I can only wish the author great success, and his grades will get better and better PS: I am still a student, so I can only subscribe during the holidays. Don't give up prematurely because of my grades. Several of the books I was pursuing were cut off because of poor grades (grievance)

I didn't think much of the second creation, but I rushed to the harem and found a treasure. The writing style is delicate and the plot is healing (although the knife is a bit ruthless). It gave me a faint feeling of loss, like watching Natsume's Book of Friends. It has a fairy spirit in it that is different from mainstream online articles. The last time I had an amazing feeling when I read an online article was the ending of the first volume of "Ask the Red Dust".

Write a book review~ A very interesting Pokémon fanfic! Instead of focusing on the two main themes of Pokémon fandom, training and battle, emotional bonds were truly chosen as the theme. This is a possibility for Pokémon fandom to de-homogenize. The author has the courage to take this approach, but perhaps it is limited by his writing skills, perhaps affected by the problem of multiple female protagonists, or perhaps more Pokémon fandom audiences prefer fast-paced fun... The results may not be very outstanding. But come on, meow! ! ! A few minor issues: the length of each section may be better organized, and the transitional plot of the series of famous scenes also needs to be designed; the small marsupial dragon (relative to the original PM); the picture book activity (it feels like it is for the sake of this story, and the main line of the story is still the journey of Xu and Ma Li and the stories therein); the colorful beans chapter personally feels a bit long. This is a very interesting book, I will continue to read it! ! Come on, author!

The content of the book is okay, and the part about the marsupial dragon is quite touching. But could the protagonist talk less sluttishly? It feels very awkward. Especially when Junsha took Mo Fei away, people asked why he let Mo Fei go. The protagonist drank red wine and talked flirtatiously with the heroine. It was really dramatic.

The writing is really good. Reading this book feels like reading a physical book before. Quiet, expectant, and a little willful not wanting the story to end so soon. 🌹 My personal opinion: Such a book! Not much!

Let me talk about some of the things I was not satisfied with. I saw that many similar situations have appeared later in the plot. It should be said that there are many plots such as time travel; Intentionally or unintentionally, the conversations of many female characters must be very ambiguous. In the book Many women will have an affair with the protagonist, and there are too many books with such characters; "It can't be said to be unpleasant" may be a double negative relationship. I was a little concerned about it when it first appeared, but it turned out that this word appeared repeatedly later, and I frowned slightly when I saw it. Similar to this is "so cute", but because of the style of this book, this "so cute" is quite acceptable.

The author's emotional line is really delicate, and the connection is also very good. It reads so smoothly. I feel that the fan fiction may be stuck in the data, but I really like it. I read a few of your testimonials and said that it is almost finished. I feel really empty and can't bear to part with these vivid and flesh-and-blood characters in the book. Later, I felt that what I liked was the women in the author's writing. I believe you can bring the same feeling to us. It is my first time to write a book review, and I really want to encourage the author, but my writing style is really not good. I might as well turn a thousand words into one sentence. Come on, Qiu Guan! ! I have to work hard to write more about this book. If I want to write new ones, I will keep reading! ! The other thing is to update more, and it's sweet to open a new book! ! !

The book is very good. I like this style very much. It is a Pokémon novel that focuses on daily love. The bond is also well written. It is tear-jerking and heartwarming. If you are clearly focused on the clearly visible Pokémon becoming stronger and passionate battles, you will not be able to read it. Delicate writing style and warm daily life are the characteristics of this novel. Support the author 👍

After finishing the book, what type of novel does the author plan to write? Let me know when the time comes and I will give you my full support! I really like this alternative alternative world romance novel, and I plan to wait until it is finished before ordering it. If the author writes serious love stories at this level, his performance will probably improve by leaps and bounds. The plot of this novel is interesting, the writing is delicate, the emotions are sincere, and the characters described are very three-dimensional. It does not suffer from literary youth syndrome or describe the protagonist's weird personality like some novels. As for the knife, I think knife, this kind of conflict is necessary to write love stories, otherwise it will be difficult for these sweet people to understand. It is precisely because of the knife that we can appreciate the beauty of ordinary life and the sincerity of love! Finish this book well! Give this warm and heart-warming story an ideal endingᕦ(ò_óˇ)ᕤ

Author, let's do some extras Let's do some extras, and spend some of my coins 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

I still can't accept the small marsupial, it feels so inconsistent, an illusion that I have traveled from Pokémon to the evolution of a pet from another world.

Punch Daigo! Kick Dan Emperor! Stir-fried Sirona! Irrigate Karuni! Take the little loli Alice home again! 🤤

Miss Cattleya and Miss Zhulan

The writing is quite good. The results of the Pokémon Master's first book seemed to be average, but the one written by Tingshu was okay. Although I don't like Tanabata Blue Bird, his new books became whiter and whiter as he wrote them, but the results actually got better and better. It's hard to stress.

Miss Mary

Literary youth Xu Qiansu, Killer Joey, Little Rich Woman's Address Book, Toru Watanabe in the Pokémon world. Other male protagonists play farm and upgrade in the world of Pokémon, making grassroots counterattacks, forming an alliance with each kick, and punching a mythical beast with one punch. They use Pokémon to gain the admiration and admiration of the world, and save the world from fire and water again and again. But you are here, strolling around the garden, looking at flowers, seeing people and thinking about things, showing an incomprehensible high-profile that is different from this place, and revealing the appearance of another faction in your words. Singing interjections, singing songs, teasing Joey, caring for Mali, traveling around, showing mercy to the Pokémon in Hidden Spring (referring to the Pokémon in Hidden Spring), creating the style of a prodigal. Yes, Xu Qiansu, you are not like a normal male protagonist in elf novels. You do not fight in gyms, do not fight in alliances, do not show off, do not slap in the face, do not show off in front of others, and do not think about conquering rare Pokémon when you meet them. You always do your own thing. On the contrary, he is like a wanderer who looks at everything in the world with a smile, but in his heart he looks down on anyone.

What do you want to see? (The plot, or the interaction between the Pokémon conquered in the future and the original characters) I will consider everyone's opinions while maintaining the writing style and outline. Let's crowdfund and write a book together 😁

Miss Mary😬😬

Woo woo woo, please keep reading 😢😢😢 Friends who want to save up to read, if possible, please spend ten seconds to flip to the latest chapter, which can be counted as follow-up reading data. It is really troublesome for book friends😢😢

Seeing what Ma Li said in the chapter where she accepted the male protagonist's confession, everything was a mess that happened because she protected Ma Li (Vulpix) and was sent back to Xicui. If I were Ma Li, I would rather die together in the aquarium. Other women can accept sharing the male lead, the logic is fine, but it is too unfair to Ma Li, just like provoking her outside and then suddenly saying that they want to get married for the sake of the family. Responsible? Responsible. Scumbag? So scummy. I also love his sense of responsibility, which is really unexpected. And being with Cattleya for the sake of responsibility is not acceptable (although she feels that she really loves the male protagonist), but through means, he deserves to be in the harem with so many people in the end. Although the author can justify the overall emotional line, he cannot stand to think about it carefully. The main logic is that as long as you love enough, you can keep giving in, but this template of a scumbag and a bitch is still uncomfortable to watch. It's also because every female character is too vivid, so it's even more difficult to feel sorry for them. In addition, Gardevoir said that the male protagonist spends less and less time with them, but still silently feels sorry for the Pokémon. In the end, I still think this book is well-written, otherwise I wouldn't have read it to the end. But I can't help but want to complain. Why don't the author consider writing a bloody romance? It will definitely be good. Girls do this (after all, this is the first time I pay money to read a book at Qidian)

Next, write about Pokemon. If you write a few more books, you will definitely get better. These Pokemon books are the ones you can read. This is your first one, and the results are not bad.

The author is suffering from a literary illness The author self-evaluates that in order not to write trivial articles, he forcibly wrote a few people to death in order to show that the book he wrote has connotation. In my opinion, it is completely unnecessary. Then the characters of the protagonist and Ma Li are low-profile Watanabe and Qingye, and the author is proud of this. Then I can only say that the two are somewhat similar, but not on the same level.

The author's writing style is rare in online articles nowadays. It is like the wind in the mountains. It is not thrilling and magnificent, but it is refreshing. The light novel-like style depicts the story of people and Pokémon very well. I am very glad to have read this book.

Ma Li hehehe

Growing up, the Pokémon movies and TV series in each series were originally a journey, with Xiaozhi as the first point of view. I have also read many Pokémon novels. The one I felt most deeply about at the time was Mr. Lu from Beichuan. Now, I may have to read another one. I hope the author will not forget the original intention of writing, which is the same as what you said in this chapter, romanticism. In the Pokémon world, there is death, rebirth, encounters, and partings. Not everything will develop in a beautiful direction. So far, the world you have described is very real! Thumbs up for you!

I beg for help from fellow Pokémon fans who feel that they are similar. I still can't get out of it after reading it for a long time 😭😭

I want his body to be covered with my labels, so that when people see him, they will think of me. What kind of god is this? I love it, I love it 😚

Is the Pokémon anime really that dark? Why do I always feel like it's not on the shelves yet? Is it all a tragedy? There are too many knives, right?

I like this book very much. The content is very emotional and has a good sense of immersion. So I support the author and don't stop reading. I hope it can be completed. Attached is a monthly pass and two recommendations, and will be fully booked next month. Come on!

The author shouldn't be so CS, just write the second season. Isn't it okay if I pay you to read it?