Cultivating Immortality and Longevity: I Come from the Stars

The first one is a Spirit Vein Pill that is needed to progress from Qi Refining to Foundation Establishment, and it is not a Foundation Establishment Pill. 2. A direct relative of someone who should be considered a core figure has had their foundation damaged beyond repair. Then the protagonist took care of both of them 😂

After reading the first three chapters, I found the concept interesting, but the setting wasn't very appealing. Since the person in the previous life was from the future world, why would they have the title of "Grandmaster of Alchemy"? This title felt somewhat disjointed. The protagonist's personality is not very distinct, making it difficult for viewers to empathize with the character.

It feels like the main character always thinks of feeding good things to spirit beasts first, and doesn't want to use them for himself at all. However, this is also a good way to suppress combat power. Otherwise, if the protagonist became too powerful too early, there would be no way to write the book.

Washed with ai, it smells strongly of ai… "Of course, it is possible, but the previous three are indispensable." No, I believe more. They calculated everything, they figured it out perfectly, but they overlooked one thing. "One wrong step leads to another." It can read the common large models and understand the nuances. This structure, logic, and especially the writing style are highly industrialized, or rather, rigid. Absolutely AI-generated plagiarism.

It's a case of misleading advertising; the only thing that matches the title is the blood-clotting potion in the first three chapters.

The beginning was quite good, but the plot became very illogical after they obtained the Foundation Establishment Pill; the author's writing skills were mediocre.

Actually, the protagonist was also foolish. He had money at the beginning but didn't buy body-refining techniques or exercise his body. He just poured resources into building up a physique that wasn't very good.

The author's character is defined as someone who doesn't know how to fight, doesn't need to fight, doesn't learn magic, and doesn't buy magical artifacts. He only knows how to cultivate immortal arts and then tries every possible way to channel energy into his body. As for whether the protagonist will be killed if he can't fight? If the author doesn't let the protagonist die, then even if the protagonist is a mortal, he won't die if he encounters a Nascent Soul stage cultivator.

Raising a spirit pet seems like something only a spendthrift would do; even spending 10,000 spirit stones wouldn't yield much benefit. No wonder only second-generation disciples raise spirit pets.

Is this the beginning of the purchase? It's safe to say the difference between the beginning and the end is huge.