Swallowed Star: What the Heck Is This Farm Game?

All Devouring fandoms give me a certain way of writing. The protagonist is either childish to death, or he uses various operations that look sophisticated but are actually noobs, to show the protagonist's tang.

Anyone who is familiar with farm games knows that at the beginning, you need to upgrade the fruit through upgrading to make it more abundant and of better quality. However, you use it at level zero and it cannot be upgraded. The quantity and quality are not enough, and it is not enough for watermelons. The exam for the martial artist is monthly. You let the farm upgrade for a few days, can't you wait until the exam next month??? How stupid!

Author, author, is the heroine a mountain guest or a false demon? 😎

Devouring is mostly a novel without a female protagonist. Soul Transmigration is nothing, but don't you, the original author, think it's too much? It's as if the protagonist is a soul-transported person. Almost every sentence is inseparable from the word "original protagonist".

The introduction looks quite interesting, but the plot is still the same as starting from the earth. To be honest, if your introduction starts from the earth, it will be more interesting and the results will be much better. The content is okay, there are no bad points, and the details are pretty good, but the writing is not smooth enough, so keep up the good work.

Those who don't write about genius battles must support it. Devouring Genius Battle is as poorly written as China Entertainment's Liu Yifei, and the plot is no different.

The original ancestor's small universe is transmitted from the time and space channel of the virtual company headquarters continent in the original universe to the original ancestor's small universe in the universe sea. When the master of each universe breaks through the strongest person in the universe, the original universe will spit out the divine kingdom of the transformed small universe out of the cosmic sea, and then have to restructure its own small universe.

When I saw the World Chaos Monument, I suddenly lost interest in it. You can choose the universe, the giant axe, or the nine universes. Suddenly it felt boring.

When growing things, the output quantity and sales price are often unknown. It all depends on the protagonist himself to say how much. This feels a bit uncomfortable. It is better to write the quota system without writing the price. Before there is no space to store equipment, there is an extremely uncomfortable point in many novels. A ten-meter-tall elephant's Even if the two tusks are relatively short, which is one third of the height, it must be more than three meters long. What kind of backpack can fit it? As described in the article, everyone only sees the bulging backpack, and they have to open it to find out what it is. In fact, you can see the protagonist carrying two telephone poles on his back from a long way away... It feels like a lot of work None of them have any idea of height or size. It would be better if the trophies after defeating such a giant thing are demon cores, essence, and blood. After all, it is abstract. Without comparison, there is no sense of disobedience. When it comes to the limbs and fur of such a giant thing, it will be inconsistent. Even if a layer of skin is stacked up, this kind of giant thing is bigger than a human being and cannot be contained in a backpack. , When I personally see this kind of plot, I often imagine a person walking on the road carrying a package that is more than half the size of a room... The most ridiculous thing is that other novels often write about the protagonist carrying such a giant thing on his back and swaggering through the market, saying that he makes a fortune by acting in a low profile I am just complaining about the bugs in the article, without any intention of attacking.

The setting is pretty good, but it can only be said that the next chapter basically overturns what was written in the previous chapter. The author basically doesn't read comments and calibration, and the rest of it is basically written wherever he dreams.