Swallowed Star: Master of the Primordial Chaos

Are you kidding me about the plot of King Shiluan? With 23 times the genes and 41 times the body amplitude, how could such an invincible king go to the battlefield outside the territory? The plot in which the protagonist is a realm lord is too outrageous. He is discovered by a feudal king to be a realm lord. The protagonist is wary.

The beginning of the first chapter is too redundant. Is there any need to write about what happened before the protagonist traveled through time? The woman also traveled through time together? Otherwise, why would you raise a sum? Just write it directly from the quasi-warrior assessment and mention by the way that the protagonist has traveled through time and then the plug-in comes.

Never mind! The nanny has a serious attitude again! You have this system! You're not getting help from anyone! Why is Hong qualified to get such help from you? Even Luo Feng, you can stop hanging on him! You can completely create the sixth largest force with the help of the system! And don't you think you elevated the protagonist too much? Before the genius battle, it is estimated that everyone can understand the essence of at least 40-50 laws of time! There is no need to suppress the protagonist at all! There is no need to go to any virtual universe, it is dangerous if you go! To be honest, if you polish this cheat setting, you can write a good article! There is a secret realm that is constantly configured by the system, plus the system gives you the ability to inherit the peak bloodline! It can definitely develop into the 6th force! Much stronger than the Flame God Clan! It doesn't matter if you want the earth or not! Directly leading the family into the universe and slowly developing it is better than anything else!

Special beings whose genes reach 1,000 times or more are born immortal. Those who are born with a gene multiple of 10081 times are the masters of the universe, such as those born with eight beast gods. All those whose genes have reached 10081 times or more are true gods or true gods of the void.

Why don't you take a closer look to see if any of the sentences are not fluent😥

Can you tell me how many levels the protagonist has advanced in his own practice?

The progress is quite fast👏👏👏

After reading it, there are many areas where the author can improve. For example, when you break through to the tenth floor, won't your master help you cover it up?

If the protagonist stays in Chaos City for one year, more than 300 years have passed in the secret realm. After 30 years, 10,000 years have passed in the secret realm. It is no big deal to be recognized by the law of time for 10,000 years. Luo Feng is recognized by the law of space for thousands of years. 30 Years in Chaos City, 100 years in the original universe, and 10,000 years in the Secret Realm.

I calculated that this book is going to be a eunuch. The pace is too fast. Your mother has written a genius battle with only 100,000 words. It is very popular and there are no details or opportunities. The time transition is very fast. According to the author's writing, it will not be long before the author finds that he does not know what to write and does not know how to write and then becomes eunuch. After all, the time transition is really fast.