Swallowed Star: Training So Hard I Made Luo Feng Cry

The initial dream of all Devourer fanfiction writers: to latch onto Luo Feng's coattails. All the fanfiction about devouring ultimately resulted in Luo Feng clinging to a powerful figure.

I could watch any fanfiction with just any male lead, but I dislike characters like Luo Feng's brothers who aren't in the original story. Even Luo Hua's character has a clearly defined development path in the original. Anyway, it's fanfiction, so why not specifically target these characters? They've got their sights set on Yi'an District Third High School and 1956.

I'm increasingly feeling that quantifying comprehension is a mistake. Normally, doubling comprehension and increasing achievements tenfold wouldn't be difficult. The protagonist's comprehension has increased hundreds or even thousands of times compared to the beginning. "Transcendent" is a derogatory term for the protagonist; this kind of improvement is far more terrifying than perfect genes. But what about the protagonist's actual skill level? It doesn't meet expectations.

It's too weak; it takes forever to describe the appearance of each opponent.

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Who doesn't know Tomato's books? The female lead is just trying to prove the male lead isn't gay. Following the writing style of the original novel, there are very few female characters throughout the entire story. 😅

I laughed when I read the description. Even without the system, a person's physical condition and proficiency wouldn't be this low with this amount of training. Is this a reward or a punishment?

If Luo Fan were 15 years old and published the novel "Swallowed Star" online, and Luo Feng were only 12 years old, do you think Hong and Lei Shen would find out about the novel "Swallowed Star"? And what would they do if they did?

Author, please go back and read the original work. Soul treasures and armor are different types. Armor treasures are weakened to one-thousandth or one-ten-thousandth of their original size, which is correct. However, soul treasures completely protect the soul as long as they do not exceed the upper limit.

Comprehension and Qi movement increase by tens or hundreds of thousands without any effort. Making these things quantifiable is actually detrimental, because the author can't explain them clearly. Look at Tomato (a famous Taiwanese writer), he's clever; he creates instances of tens of thousands or even tens of millions of epochs. As for the exact amount of talent and comprehension, you'll have to figure that out for yourself.