Demon Commander of the Crimson Empire!

A dish with decent flavor, but it contained a lot of sand, which made you burp every now and then. Many parts were well-written, but there were some particularly unpleasant aspects that detracted from the overall experience.

New author, new book, please support! (Just kidding)

It's not bad. The plot has only recently gotten on track, and it's been expanding the world-building, which shows great ambition.

The main plot is too chaotic, and the protagonist's goals keep shifting. It feels like the author isn't particularly adept at character development and foreshadowing, but rather at depicting grand scenes. While it does feel epic, the lack of fully developed character arcs results in a lack of respect and a sense of disjointedness: the characters aren't spoken, but rather written out through…

The grain was mixed with sand; it was supposed to taste good, but it would often crunch in your mouth halfway through. Although it doesn't significantly affect the viewing experience, it's still quite annoying.

The book is fine, but the beginning is too long and slows down the pace.

To be honest, I already had a preconceived notion about livestream novels before reading this book, and I almost didn't click on it when I saw the tags in the synopsis. I haven't read much yet, but the plot is quite captivating, the author's writing is solid, and the setting is quite interesting. The beginning doesn't have much to do with livestreaming, so I'm treating it like a typical Western fantasy novel. I'll have to see how it goes later.

It's well-written, especially the part about the live stream. Keep it up!

Why only one chapter a day? 😡

I feel like the parts about conflict with the Vatican that I've been writing lately are really inexplicable. The protagonist, a bishop with low moral character and double standards, is supposed to be a satisfying plot, but it just feels weird.