Demon Commander of the Crimson Empire!

A dish that tastes good, but there is a lot of sand in it. It burps you from time to time. Many parts are well written, but there are always some places that particularly affect the perception.

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Not bad. The plot has only become formal in the last few chapters. It has been expanding the world view and is very ambitious.

The main plot is too confusing, and the protagonist's own goals are also changing. I feel that the author is not particularly good at portraying the subtleties of characters and foreshadowing changes, but is better at depicting grand scenes. However, although it looks very epic, because the arc of the characters is too little portrayed in the mind, there is not much respect. Instead, it gives people a sense of fragmentation: the characters are not spoken, but written out one by one, details and decisions. The construction of too many scenes makes the characters themselves less interesting. For example, at first I thought he was a farming player who wanted to upgrade his business, but later he turned into a guy who would do whatever it takes to survive, and later he joined the alliance. Every step is so different from the previous one. I can understand that the author wants to show the growth trajectory of the characters, but how can I put it, it is not very convincing, and the sense of atmosphere and inevitability is a bit lacking. But the writing and setting are very good👍.

The grains are mixed with sand, and they are obviously delicious, but they often crackle while eating. Although it doesn't affect the look and feel very much, it is just annoying.

The book is okay, but the front part is too long and slows down the pace.

To be honest, before reading this book, I already had a stereotype about live broadcasts, and I almost didn't click on it when I saw the tag in the introduction. I haven't watched much of it yet, but the plot is quite gripping, the author is pretty good, and the setting is quite interesting. The first part has nothing to do with the live broadcast. Just treat it as a normal Western fantasy. Let me take a closer look later.

The writing is quite good, especially the live broadcast at the end. Come on.

Why only one chapter per day😡

I feel that the recent conflict with the Holy See is very strange. The main character is a double-standard bishop with poor moral character. It is obviously a very interesting plot, but it is very strange.