I Fell to the Dark Side and Became a Popular Character

The plot of the protagonist becoming a demon made me a little nervous. The kidnapper said he wanted to kidnap the protagonist's companions. The protagonist chose to step in instead of his companions who were taken away. In the end, he said that he had no choice but to become possessed From motivation to preparation, it was very clownish You can make the motivation higher. The game trailer PV said that he will die, so he has to try to change his destiny. At the same time, if you don't kill the kidnapper, he will definitely find the protagonist again in the end Prepare to write in more detail, what is the normal situation like, and whether you need to be possessed in special situations. Whether the preparations you made were used in the end? What circumstances led to the failure? You can only become possessed. You have to tell me clearly.

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The author wants to write about a protagonist who is strategizing and winning thousands of miles away, right? But starting from the first PV, the protagonist has been making stupid mistakes. The plot describes that the protagonist almost made the area his own, but in the end he knew that he would die. There, there was no other preparation at all, just relying on the third level. It was so damn stupid. The thugs were not arranged, the long-distance sniper was not arranged, and then there was a sniper who somehow knew the plot. It was not arranged by the protagonist himself. It was too abrupt. You are already a boss, and you know that you will die in three days. Why don't you arrange for dozens of younger brothers to send each other off, snipers, bulletproof vests, etc., Right? Nothing, nothing, the bullet scratched the windbreaker and it bleeds, I'm so scared, what the hell have you done, there is no choice, no damn choice, the author wants the protagonist to step into the path of the evil god, so don't insult the readers' eyes with this kind of plot, okay?

I always feel like I've taken the wrong path... The protagonist's behavior and status are now more like a small baron... Rather than a lord with a territory of millions of people.

The poison started in Chapter 14. The protagonist is really a candy man, so sweet that he looks like 🤡

The Archon without superpowers encountered an evil force whose members all had superpowers. His father and friends all sacrificed themselves to heaven, causing chaos and heavy casualties under his rule. He had no choice but to make a deal with the devil, and finally fought back with great force. Later, he was not tolerated by the conservatives because he was bound to the Demon God. However, relying on his excellent governance and a large amount of public support, and using the power of players for his own purposes, he finally overthrew the old world and established a new world... A story like this. The actual plot development... Forget it, in short, very disappointing.

The protagonist can pretend to ask if the player is related to Yinyin, with Yinyin as a guarantee, and let the player's Innovation account contact the children or parents of the old player, inherit part of the protagonist's reputation and regional reputation, and then give some game coins and materials as compensation, directly locking the player in!

There are some things I don't like to say. Ever since the male protagonist entered the royal capital, he has fallen into the author's editor's web. Perhaps in order to better make the other supporting characters more three-dimensional, he has largely described the positions and practices of each force. However, there is no protagonist. He has been very passive. The news is always sent to the door by his opponents. All kinds of conjectures. In the face of his family's cowardly attitude towards his own arrangements, he feels that he can only accept it with a wry smile. It is very different from the image of the first dungeon, where he was strategizing in order to escape from the future arrangements of the game. It feels like the author forced the cheating later on in this copy, and then pretended to do it again. In fact, the plot is quite interesting, but I still like to see the protagonist be more powerful. Finally, I want to say, did you write my elf maid to death? There is no role for her anymore.

After ordering a chapter, I wanted to give my opinion. The reading experience is 64% good or bad, and I can see the author's careful creation and expression. The author probably wants to write a story that is not mindless and refreshing. It is better than many existing high-quality works. At least I can continue to read it. I hope my grades will get better and better and my writing will get better and better (if I practice consciously). … This is the first time I write a long review - There is obvious effort in portraying the characters, but the author doesn't know what he has written before and after, and I read it again and again. The portrayal of Zhongshan is inconsistent with the explanation of words and deeds. While the father is kind and the son is filial, he really wants to write that the father is kind and the son is filial. If the relationship with the protagonist is not explained smoothly, it will be weird to say that he will be kicked out. It's not the main point. The author probably didn't think much about it. - On the other hand, it emphasizes the pursuit of interests from the beginning, but because the core is neutral and good, it will do the opposite. Considering that the three views of the protagonist are still more important, I won't say anything. However, at the same time, I really don't recommend that you are good and good, others are good, but the protagonist has double standards and needs to diss... Even if you write a semi-group portrait, readers will not be able to pass this protagonist. This is not good and crooked -The world view is okay, but the settings of the command bureau, law enforcement bureau, and district are very confusing. The reason why I am confused is that I can't tell whether these law enforcement characters are the law enforcement bureau or the command bureau. I can't tell if the district is a mixture of multiple cities. Why does the main character tell everything in one place throughout the novel? If it can be seen as a land, and when I arrived at the academy, I wrote outside of this land, but it was still this area, and there was a serious sense of fragmentation. I feel like the author doesn't think much about this kind of issue when writing. Reinhardt was in the Law Enforcement Bureau and then in the Command Bureau. I support your way of explaining the details at the end of the article, but you can't let the characters jump back and forth after explaining it. -There is a paragraph before the release where the director returns to the command bureau. Why does he return to the command bureau? Is this the law enforcement director? Back to the Capital Command Bureau? Once you find a master, it's gone. You bury the line for a while, you just don't write his name, and you don't say what he does. After writing this paragraph, eh, I won't talk about it later, you say you are indifferent. Baffling. -The combat power and background design are very strange. The protagonist has been running the territory for many years and the economy has developed well, but it still has to be written that the territory has high combat power and is scarce. It is said that this place is remote and no one comes. It is closed. You have smuggled it vigorously and your structure is still so small. The player base is huge. You say that your territory is just here. In the past five years since taking office, no one has come, but no one has come. Then on the other hand, you say that the economy will develop more, the city will build more, there will be as many people as there will be companies, the plot characters will be awesome for a while, and then the players will come to suppress the combat power. The setting of players being able to suppress the combat power makes the author very good at writing. It seems that the combat power design was not thought through from the beginning but was written as the plot required. - And maybe because of my reading habit of going back and forth between Western fantasy names and not being able to remember them, I suggest the author polish the character description. As for the character Ye You, I was a little stunned when I saw her name appear. Not because I couldn't tell who it was, but because I couldn't remember where her name was mentioned in the previous article. In short, the grain and grass are worthy of quality