Sinner Dove

The first chapter is a narrative with multiple perspectives, multiple characters, and multiple nouns. The subject matter is still similar to Western fantasy. The characters have long names and speak like the Riddler. The conversation between the two characters does not allow the reader to understand the content of the world view. The only promising information that can be learned in one chapter is the name of the protagonist, but we don't have a clear impression of the protagonist... Hmm... It is recommended not to imitate the narrative style of Ark. Ark is a game, with art and game content to fill in the information. It is best for pure text novels to be straightforward. Even the beginning of the famous novel One Hundred Years of Solitude is very clear and easy to understand.