Control Time and Save the World of Immortality

Name: Control Time and Save the World of Immortality
Author: Xiaojunyoulong

掌控时间，拯救修仙界

by Xiaojunyoulong (逍俊游龙)

Status: Ongoing
Length: 106k Words
Genre: Cultivation
Audience: Male
Subgenre: Cultivation Civilization
Updated: 6mo ago
Source: Qidian

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Synopsis

Lin Changan unexpectedly came to the world of immortality "Can I control the flow of time in this different space? Can I also grow elixirs here?" The man with science in his previous life turned out to be a genius with excellent understanding in this world of cultivating immortals! "These are very simple logics! There is nothing I can't understand." Which profession is the most profitable in the world of immortality? Of course it is the alchemist! "Alchemy is very simple! If you keep failing and then summarize it, you can succeed. Just rely on the number of times to make it." Why do you think you, an alchemist, are invincible in battle? "No, buddy. People who are a little higher than me are screaming here!" "Ten times the flow rate" "Brother, you are only two realms above and you dare to scream, start the flow rate a hundred times!" "Fellow Taoist, although you are a much higher level than me, you can't be so rude!" "Time pauses!"

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It feels weird. Was the progress too fast at the beginning? The setting should be explained to pave the way for the plot, otherwise it will feel too fast and unattractive. Of course, the opening battle and other things have been written by masters, but their writing skills are stronger. The fights they wrote are thrilling and the visuals are strong. Author, your writing skills are not strong enough. The first three chapters are not attractive.
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I want to know what problems I have written. I know there must be many problems, but I am blind and cannot see them. Brothers and sisters, please point it out. Thank you thank you.
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