Devouring: Flame Emperor

Dream on! The Flame God Clan's bloodline has joined the five core forces of the Cosmic Human Race. You appeared to save the world, only to be turned into a bloodline potion. Why do you think Emperor Yan put his people in the Cosmic Secret Realm? It's because the Flame God Clan is the best body to possess. Why did Emperor Yan betray the Cosmic Human Race?

Judging from the title, I thought it was about Xiao Yan transmigrating to the world of Swallowed Star, but it's a complete rip-off. It's clearly not the tired Earth-based story, yet he still ends up going there specifically to be a babysitter. How boring.

Dude, what were you thinking? Do you really need to write the mercenary assessment in this much detail? If you're going to start this new chapter with filler content, don't complain about nobody reading it later when there aren't any recommended resources. The early episodes of Swallowed Star should either be the Earth arc or a rapid development leading into the Genius Battle arc.

1. The Golden Horned Beast already represents the pinnacle of bloodlines. If the Flame God Clan truly possessed the Nine Tribulations Secret Manual, capable of gene and physical evolution, and with a fertility exceeding that of the Golden Horned Beast, even a hundred Flame Emperors working together might not be able to protect them.

It's been more than half a year since we last met, and I've missed everyone. I also warmly welcome our new friends; it's a pleasure to meet you all. After a break of more than half a year, I inevitably became a bit rusty when writing, and I didn't quite get the rhythm right. I've been trying hard to find my footing and get back into the zone lately. I will read everyone's opinions and try my best to correct them. Thank you for your support, brothers! 🙂

I've discovered that this author is incredibly stubborn. Even when others point out his mistakes, he refuses to correct them, and some of his logical connections are completely illogical.

The content is ridiculous; thirty out of forty chapters are modified versions of the original text before being uploaded. The "Realm Within a Realm" section is even more absurd—purely copied and pasted text is included.

The author is really padding this out; it's practically a direct copy of the original work!

The first few chapters were alright, but what's with the later parts that follow the original story?

I've read almost all the fanfiction I could find about "Devouring," but fewer and fewer people are writing it now. While the current ones are quite weak and have some illogical parts, like the percentages, it would be better to change them to levels: "Imitating the Cat," "Understanding the Root," "Comprehending the Profound Meaning/All Laws," which is barely acceptable.