Red Dust Tiger Fairy

The overall writing style is acceptable, and the story can be considered self-explanatory, but the tone of the story conflicts with the author's writing style. To put it simply, the background of the story has been creating pressure. The protagonist basically encounters obstacles everywhere. The background is a very typical underworld cultivator. The superiors completely control all the cultivation resources. You have to pay for breathing spiritual energy. The story is based on naked people eating people. In this environment, the protagonist's character and the author's description are too out of the ordinary and too light. Readers who can watch this kind of stressful background hope that the protagonists will be decisive in killing, forbearing, sophistication, cultivating monsters who kill whole families, and gangsters who cannibalize people. The protagonist must always have a clear plan, clear goals, and make decisions before taking action. Otherwise, in a high-pressure background, every time the protagonist makes a mistake, it will be like watching a very good anchor play a difficult game. According to the current writing style, the author's writing style is too frivolous. It is obvious that many situations are life-and-death situations, such as being chopped into sieves by that little deer with sword energy, but it feels like not even the protagonist himself takes it seriously, and he will probably be a female supporting character in the future. The accumulation of this kind of contradiction is a poisonous point. It is recommended that if you like a more relaxed style of writing, you should not create such a high-pressure background. The protagonist has no training resources, is about to live for a long time, and the information is unknown. If you go out to contact him, you will be hacked.

Guys, is anyone watching? If you don't think there's anything serious about it, can you leave a message on this page to encourage the author? Thank you all!

Let's make a prediction. Pei Ming doesn't have a golden finger at all, the panel doesn't move, and his body size grows so fast. But Hu Feng thinks that the normal estimates indicate that Pei Ming is just a pure blood reversion to the ancestral awakening.

The overall article is fluent, but I don't quite understand it. Should a three-month-old tiger cub learn to hunt?

I see that there are no poisonous points now, and the plot is attractive. It's okay. Come on, newcomers💪

Damn it, there are dozens of pages. I can write more than ten or twenty pages for one thing, and I am so human and sophisticated. It is all an accident.

This beginning is still okay, and it's good for those who are interested in exotic beasts, as long as you don't do such bad things as tiger-skinned hearts later on.

I just saw a pig that can eat people, can this tiger do it?

The beginning is well written, I hope the protagonist has the heart of a tiger and doesn't become a bestiality.

He won't be the kind of person who swallows the sky and the earth and eats everything to upgrade, right?

I have some ideas, let's see how to survive to the extreme

First, my writing power is temporarily insufficient. I have an outline and a detailed outline but cannot paint a picture, so I will not embarrass everyone. The second is that the author's current knowledge is not enough. What he writes has no soul and can only be written in water words. I don't want to read it. Third, I still have to prepare for the exam and I don't have much energy. Thank you for your support and wish you all a smooth new year, all your wishes come true, and all the best!

This is a very good result for a newcomer writing Xianxia. I can't get this kind of result even if I write five books. It's a masterpiece, 🐮

I rarely post and am a silent reader. Come on, you can do the fairy tale theme with your grades.