Douluo Jueshi: Who Said That Heavy Pupils Must Be Controlled?

The setting is rubbish, the plot is rubbish, and the imagination is rubbish. It's too early to put it on the shelves.

Why do you feel that the protagonist's soul skills are so good? Isn't something like mental shock capable of being used if you have high mental power and a little use of mental power? Dou San has already been used to a fault, and the protagonist doesn't know Dou San? Moreover, the protagonist is at level 20. How can he reach level 21 when he only absorbs one soul ring? Just abandon the Douluo setting and create your own system?

The signatures of 11 are Double Eyes, Qilin Steps, and Heaven-Mending Technique. If you add them all in, you will be able to directly open the world with Double Eyes at the same level in the future, use Kirin Steps on Foot that is lower than yourself, and use the Heaven-Mending Technique after minor injuries 🙂

The pace is too fast, Q reading style. There are too many hooks, the setting is too high, and there is no good plot foreshadowing. The fun is not simply achieved by setting it high.

I have written 13 books with 3.64 Million words. Each book has an average of several hundred thousand words. How did you become a level 5 author?

Quickly show off in front of Shrek

It's too obscene and the character is distorted

At first glance, it looks like a small lump, but upon closer inspection, it falls into a pit.

Since I dared to seize the opportunity of Huo, why bother to write that I didn't seize it? Not to mention that the protagonist's operation was so sweet. In the end, it was just God's will and it was gone. I wanted to intercept Hu Tianmeng a month in advance, but ended up going to Xingdou to find it for a month. If I were to look for him for at most half a month, if I didn't find him, I would go directly to the east gate of Shrek City and squat down at Beibei Tangya. If I followed these two, I would find Huo, and if I followed Huo, I would meet Tian Meng. There is also the Soul-Eating Ferocious Sword. I didn't cut off the beard in advance. I waited until the game and heard about the auction. I remembered that I spent 160 million gold soul coins in vain. Then at the same auction house (too lazy to post, the original work is divided into two parts), I didn't buy the Snow Emperor embryo. I planned to go to Mingde Hall to grab it when the time comes. There are so many slots that I don't know where to start. 1: I spent 160 million unjustly to buy a knife, but I can't bear to keep the 200 million Snow Emperor in peace. 2: Even if I don't want to spend it, I can just let Du Bushui grab it. Anyway, Sun and Moon only have one Contra to lead the team. 3: Going to Mingde Hall is really not afraid of the butterfly effect. The last thing is the opportunity to cut Huo. Since we are planning to prevent Huo from having any good things, we just ask Du Busui to take him to the far north in advance to trade the lollipops from Longmen. They can be traded as bodyguards, but Huo can't let Huo get these two soul rings anyway. I thought that it would not be a loss if I was not afraid of the fall of the Three Gods. Two more thugs could directly take over the mandarin duck pot. (If you are afraid of the fall of the Three Gods, you can let a 100,000 year person try the water first. Anyway, there is a trial and error cost.) As a result, the protagonist has no prophetic advantage at all. He is really a human-machine. I simply set it as someone who has never read Douluo. Anyway, the author is not very proficient in the original Douluo.

The setting was so outrageous that he died of poisonous poison.

It can be said that Noumenon Sect is the force that is most in line with the core values ​​of socialism. In Dou 2, if Noumenon Sect wants to absorb more Noumenon soul masters, it must promote policies with positive impact, such as popularizing free martial soul awakening, free basic education in the first and second rings, and a stable and fair social order. Increase the civilian base and increase per capita GDP. From this point of view, the Noumenon Sect is more like an interest group that starts out as common people, has ordinary talents, has unlimited potential, has different qualifications, is supported by teachers, has knowledge ties, and can break through desperate situations. I hope to rewrite the development direction of Noumenon Sect and avoid repeating the same mistakes. Don't completely fall to Tianhun or any country. The Noumenon Sect should build its own power, absorb the Noumenon Martial Spirits of various countries, deeply study the essence of Martial Souls and soul guides, and then represent the interests of the most advanced knowledge and technology of the human race. Tianhun Xingluo is an alliance of big nobles. It advocates suppressing civilian soul masters, collecting taxes on the awakening of martial souls - if you don't have enough money, you will sell yourself, and invisible taxes on various highly sticky consumer goods during the cultivation process - buying raw materials from civilians at low prices and selling finished products at high prices to earn a large proportion of technical processing fees. On the other hand, in order to develop technology-soul guides, Sun and Moon need to vigorously recruit civilian geniuses, popularize basic education, free martial soul awakening fees, and make junior soul master colleges almost free, and build grassroots political power. Therefore, the higher-ups will know about the soul masters awakened by Sun and Moon Danfan almost immediately. Comparing the sun and the moon with the Heavenly Soul Star Luo Xiang, the fundamental interests of the sun and the moon are closer to the Noumenon Sect. The marriage between Tianhun and Vina is more like selling one's butt. Vina's first interest is still the royal rule of Tianhun. For this purpose, the main body can be sent up and down to fill in the lines. After the backbone of the main body died in the battle and could no longer bring benefits to Tianhun, he turned to the next generation of leaders of Shrek, hoping to repeat the previous routine against the main body sect: Wei Na sacrificed his life in exchange for the opponent's life to fill the battle line. Based on this, the Noumenon Sect should not move closer to Tianhun Xingluo, at least openly neutral. Otherwise, if the Heavenly Soul Sun and Moon start a war, what will happen to the original soul master who was born in the noble family of the Sun and Moon in the original sect, and the original son fights against the father of the soul master? Instead, they can start preliminary cooperation with Sun and Moon. Sun and Moon hire Noumenon Sect to help hunt souls and output refining medicine and soul guidance tools. The main body sect collects the main body soul masters, food system, and auxiliary system through the sun and moon. Then use the ice marrow from Dilongmen to contact the Snow Emperor, and exchange half for friendship and half for soul bones. The two extremes of Poisonous Snow Emperor are just right enough to go to the Sun and Moon Arsenal to steal equipment. The most important thing is that you can use the top soul master resources at hand, skip the whole body without looking for the official political power, and secretly look for the 79th and 89th level soul masters who are approaching their end, to help them break through the Soul Saint Soul Douluo and extend their life for fifty years. The soul masters of 7989 were unable to break through due to insufficient martial soul potential, so they actively or passively turned to researching soul guidance devices. They have been immersed in them all year round, and their soul guidance knowledge and skills are definitely among the best at their level. To rescue them at this time is just like reselling state-owned enterprises back then, and it's all for nothing. Cultivate a group of rare and guardian soul beasts, and build a high-quality soul beast forest nearby. Form an alliance of your own/origin and win over humanoid spirits, such as Titan Spirit, Healing Angel Spirit, and Holy Angel Spirit. During the Soul Master Competition, it can be considered that some of the young soul masters of the main body will not participate in the name of the main body, but will join other teams during the competition period in the form of mercenary bidding. The first is to make money, the second is to make friends, the third is to obtain information, and the fourth is to find the soul master conveniently. There is no analogy between the civilians of Douluo and the civilians of real society. The civilian class in real society is the main source of soldiers for the army and the main source of force for the army. The main source of force for Douluo's army is Titled Douluo and ninth-level soul masters and the soul guides they make. The main source of troops is 4567 ring soul masters. Therefore, the civilians in Douluo do not include those without soul rings. It can be said that ordinary people in Dou 2 have no bargaining power, but Dou 3 is slightly more respectable. What can really be counted are children before awakening their martial souls at the age of six, and 123 ring soul masters. These are the common people in Douluo. I will make some arrangements, please note it down, author First, use your power to collect as many body souls as possible, such as Nether Nana's family of three (mother and daughter's soul souls), exert influence on the body soul owners, and increase the sense of identity and belonging to the protagonist. After most of the second level martial souls join the Noumenal Sect after a thousand years, they will seek the right to speak or influence based on their numbers (merits). Strive to change the ending of Dou Er's original text. Second, cultivate an organic soul master to research and create an echelon, recruit people, and build a team. Looking for the soul master whose 7989 deadline is approaching. Research new soul tools that forge metal and use physics knowledge. Third, hunt at sea and collect cultivation resources. Qi-blood shrimp, Qi-blood bread. Cultivate food-based soul masters. Refining various types of elixirs for cultivation, foundation building, and limit breaking. Fourth, find ways to increase the soul bone explosion rate. Fifth, avoid facing the sun and the moon directly. After the linked soul guide comes out, you will never be able to win.

Why did I encounter this book so early? Why

Just update 4,000 words in one day, it's a shame

The Mask of Pain 😭 is so beautiful, but it's too early. Who can see this little bit?

1: Soul beast, if you don't know the name of the soul skill, you can ask ai 2: You are about to leave Shrek, so don't leak all the effects of soul skills to Tang Ya, Beibei and Huo 3: The main body sect regards the world's main body martial arts as a family. Why does Long Aotian think that a new body martial soul is not worthy of his high regard? In general, it is not recommended to watch

Author, no, no, no, you are not worthy, hello writer, you know nothing about the double pupil and Douluo system!!! What you can still see away after seeing the level 21 content is the poisonous body of evil!

The protagonist is brainless, and it was released early. The last Douluo Peerless fanfic I saw was released so early, Chapter 24. I glanced at the author's other books, and I saw that they were just for making money. They had hundreds of thousands of words, or hundreds of thousands of words.

If I remember correctly, the original was 2 red or 3 red. The red one is Xuanzi

It's always a template, just change the character and background and it's served.

How come you update every day lately? Can't write anymore?

Why are you so shy? The second soul skill is so powerful and you don't even hide it at all. You just expose it without leaving any hidden cards behind 😅😅😅😅

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May I ask, what are the attributes of Di Tian's dual soul cores? Darkness + space? Darkness + Spirit