Jordan Simulator: Conquering the Game, Starting on the Blacktop

Who watches rural basketball games anyway? With this kind of writing style, you couldn't even finish 100 chapters of an NBA game.

I don't object to you writing romance scenes, but could you please not start so early? The protagonist is only 16! The last book had the same problem; you couldn't write it well, yet you still insisted on including it. 😅

This is such a mess, does the author even understand anything? The emergence of a superstar athlete changes the entire industry ecosystem. So, the ecosystem in your book has no relevance to reality, and readers won't feel any connection to it. Seventy or eighty percent of the book's appeal is gone. Why even write about this Chen Huang? Every time he appears, I feel like giving up.

After all that buildup, you just stopped updating at the most exciting part? How can your story possibly get good results like this? And in the last book, you portrayed Emperor Chen as a hero, but he's only a few years old and already at his wit's end? Isn't this a stab in the back to those who supported you in the last book?

Putting aside the author's writing style—some say it's too pretentious—let's ignore that for now. The introductory and popular science portion alone could take up a third of an article. How are we supposed to pay to watch this?

To be honest, the beginning of this book was quite good and suited my taste, but it started to become overly sentimental and pretentious from time to time in the later part. Take the World Youth Championship as an example. He was initially not given much playing time after being included in the roster, but he gradually started to perform well and was almost confirmed as a core player.

Suddenly, I lost all interest in watching Chen Huang's episode. I haven't seen the prequel; the year is probably one of these last two or three years. The protagonist will likely go to the NBA within five years; it's probably an alternate history. When you write about the NBA, you don't even know whose traffic to piggyback on or what kind of opponents to pair up with. If it's a completely fictional story and you don't even know which character it is, who would read a basketball novel?

The author writes well, but it's incredibly frustrating to read. There are always so many restrictions on the characters; it's like a perfectly delicious plate of fish being blocked by a fishpond. The previous book had the same style.

Write less romance; the romance in the last book was a bit awkward.

What kind of rubbish is this? Trying to suppress the protagonist but not daring to? The outbursts are nowhere to be felt, the satisfying moments are nowhere to be experienced. What a load of crap you've written!