Queen's Sword

The style of the main package is consistent with the style of the physical fantasy translation, and is even more bitter. This "Queen's Sword" has tried its best to transform it, but there are definitely many shortcomings when it comes to this new book. Readers can just point out the shortcomings directly. Some faults must be pointed out. Thank you very much 😢

I only have one suggestion. Please try to optimize the text layout. Don't have long paragraphs of dense text. Coupled with those long sentences, the reading experience will not be good.

I have been addicted to the fantasy version of Qidian for too long. I hope this can be something new. Come on 👍

Wow, well written 😍

Did the anchor force you to watch it? Keep spraying.

Fantasy theme, novel setting, similar to soul search and withdrawal, welcome to return

Look, it looks good, come on!

I don't know why, but I always feel like I'm watching "Icewind Dale"

I feel that the world view is similar to that of "The Demon Hunter", which is relatively low-magic. In this way, fighting through domesticated "monsters" feels like I can write about it without having a sense of existence. Personal preference, for the author's reference only

Good grass, traditional western fantasy, no time traveler, no golden finger. The problem is that it is not divided into sections, there are too many modifications, and it is very tiring to read. I'll take a screenshot for you to see. This whole page is one paragraph, with others at the front and at the back. ———————— The beginning of Chapter 12 is a two-page paragraph, which instantly made me lose my desire to read—— The author suggests that you first divide all the previous paragraphs into paragraphs, and then consider continuing to update. . .

It is indeed a very solid piece of work, and I found a treasure this time.

Multiple female protagonists, single female protagonist, or no female protagonist?

Can you introduce the world view and combat settings?

The writing is good. I used to have this style of writing. It feels like a movie. Maybe it can be adapted into a fantasy movie in the future.

After reading Chapter 36, I still don't know who the protagonist is, the ranger or the earl. I feel that the earl is more like the protagonist and the grand princess 😰