Horror Set: This Passerby Knows the Tricks so Well

Why don't you hurry up and send out all the remaining hundreds of chapters so that I can discuss it with you? 😡😡

This is a suspenseful and supernatural seedling. I wanted to write a lot, but only when I started writing did I realize how difficult it would be. I have written a book on a certain site before, so this is my second book and the first time I have come to Qidian. The book friends are really different. They are of high quality and their criticisms and encouragements are very appropriate. I would like to implore everyone here, if you like it and think it is well written, please update it. Updating in the new book issue is really very important. Of course it would be better if you have a monthly pass, hahahaha. Suspense is currently considered a cool starting point. I chose suspense because I have always wanted to write a wonderful supernatural novel. So readers can rest assured that even if the results are not good, I will insist on finishing this book. Thank you again for all the supporting readers, and please continue to support~ This post is proof that I will finish this book well no matter what!

It can only be said that Black Fire is still too authoritative, and the ideas of Hell Cinema and Hell Apartment have inspired many people. Come on, author, and look forward to success

I'm back and have finished reading the second copy. Here are my personal opinions: 1: Compared with the suspense section, the book is more similar to the section of Zhutian Infinite Stream. It does not give me a strong sense of a supernatural horror story. Instead, it has the feeling of upgrading to fight monsters and decrypting subtitles. My feelings 2: To make a comparison, another type of novel such as Mysterious Resurrection was popular at the time because ghosts kill people unreasonably, and there are some extremely scary plots, plus some games. Although the writing and character relationships are poor, they are regarded as gods. 3: I feel that the setting of the protagonist is not that of a fringe person, but rather a protagonist who is pushing through levels, and the protagonist's IQ is at the level of ordinary people, lacking some sense of excitement. 4: The plot is a bit bland. At the beginning of the second dungeon, I saw the inner and outer world, which is very easy to guess. The portrayal of students does not have the weird feeling of being gradually driven crazy when they are normal - I personally feel that having both protagonists experience it from the perspective of a student will be more immersive than the perspective of a teacher. For example, the classic plot is that someone in the dormitory did not come back to sleep, and the protagonist was talking to others in the middle of the night, but in fact the roommate had come back and hid under the bed and listened all night. The next day, he found a layer of human-shaped ash under the bed, which was inferred Summary: Average level, it is determined that the glory of suspense cannot be recreated

Where did the hell cinema come from🤓

The author likes to write that the key parts of the supplementary settings (without foreshadowing) are too abrupt. I hope they can be changed if possible. The character reversal is no problem, but don't forcefully change it without foreshadowing.

A large-scale confrontation script is purely thankless. The main attraction of this novel in the early stage is the sense of horror, not the infinite flow. And this kind of writing is difficult, you are stuck, and readers don't like it. The best thing about Water Margin is the group battles. The question is, can you do it? . . Anyway, I can't understand what the author is doing.

The number one new suspense book is dead. I can't post it in the comment section of which book should I re-cast the glory of suspense? Let me check again. Author, can you re-cast the glory of suspense?

It's well written. It's rare for the protagonist to be an ordinary person who plays the game according to the flow. There's no problem for now. As long as there are no other female supporting characters later, I will definitely continue to read it. The few supernatural novels I read before were all because I couldn't stand it because there was a woman who suddenly had a cooperative relationship with the protagonist. I didn't like it. Some of the novels are like being unable to write without a woman. Either the story is explained right from the beginning, or the female supporting character is well-shaped and given to the protagonist, or no emotional line is written, ahem, in short, all the character arrangements are reasonable and within the scope of my acceptance. It is refreshing and just right, and the plot is not too draggy. It is one of the few new books that I have the patience to read and look forward to the subsequent plot ꉂ(ˊᗜˋ*)

Can the author take a look at it after a period of time? It feels like writing an essay in an examination room. I feel that I have done a good job. But after a while, I will find many problems after reading it. Don't just think about it in your mind and move yourself. The creativity is there, but I really don't understand the logic. As for the latest dungeon of Gluttonous Feast, I can't figure out how to win without cheating. Why can the evil ghost just ignore the rules and kill people before activating the ability? It's said that it's scary or not, it's said that the protagonist's IQ is not that high, it's said that the plot should be written how I want it to be, and it's said that the character's writing is not strong enough to describe it and it's not three-dimensional. However, the writing style is okay, and it has a sense of imagery. I really can't bear to change the text. Since you can directly change the text to pass the level, you might as well just change the term "human" to "human god" and let all human beings ascend. I'm really out of ideas. Did I use AI to write it?

Very confused. After reading the previous one, the writing is smooth and easy to read, and the plot doesn't have any bad points. Why are so many chapters still not available? Is the starting point suspense dead?

Halfway through the second copy, here are some thoughts. Since the author said he can withstand pressure, I will write a long review. There are spoilers, so please read with caution Let me talk about the advantages first. The outline is okay, the script design is quite satisfactory, and the protagonist has no poisonous points The following are the points I summarized: 1. The plot advances too fast It is good to have a lot of information in one chapter, but too fast progress cannot arouse the reader's emotions. The first NPC that appears in the first dungeon is the most important, as it determines the atmosphere and tone of the entire book. The author designed a fake detective with a stern appearance and a soft leather holster, and a real master who harbored secrets, but such an easy-to-explore setting was passed over in one stroke. The character is abundant but the writing power is lacking. It looks like running a running account to catch a train. There is also the second copy of Li Mu. It can be seen that the author has designed the emotional part, but there is no foreshadowing and no transition. Forcibly building it to a climax and then letting the characters reveal their inner feelings and make declarations seems nondescript. The first copy only took ten chapters. It was written like an outline with a few lines of dialogue. The lack of details made the whole book feel as if it was floating in the air. 2. No character growth The author's creative process may be like this: first he thought of the cool and handsome scene of the final battle, and then based on this scene, he deduced the beginning of the story. The protagonist adapts too quickly, has too few doubts, and lives too smoothly. His growth was only in terms of equipment, and his mental journey was not written at all. He accepted it as smoothly as he was born in a dungeon and grew up under human skin (especially the shadow! There is no feeling of curse at all, and the equipment is given openly! Although everyone knows that this kind of ghost will help him fight in the end, but it is too fast? What about snatching the body as promised?) 3. Lack of foreshadowing, lack of pull Mainly in terms of NPC plot, if you want to write a hidden plot, you must carefully pave the way for emotions. The crisis is basically a clear threat like a chase, and it can be easily overcome every time, so readers will not become nervous when danger appears. 4. The lack of continuation and transition directly makes the protagonist say some things that seem cool but are embarrassing. The most serious thing is that after opening the book ten chapters, he suddenly ends the first book and then reads the lines and forcibly sublimates it, which is suspected of being pretentious Summary: There is a lack of horror, the plot is too urgent and there are not enough details, the characters are just a quick glance, the clues are too smooth, and there is no sense of sudden enlightenment. It feels like playing a game and being stuffed with items. The route is laid out clearly, and at each turning point there are NPCs to guide you, "Where should you go?" The characters are pushed forward by the plot and cannot show their personal highlights. The author can play a small-scale stand-alone horror game and see how they create a horror atmosphere. If you really can't write an infinite flow, what you want in a supernatural story is the thrilling flavor. The settings of the safe house can be well written, and making good use of the breathing stall can elevate the tension to a new level

The writing is really good. The first copy has some minor flaws, but the flaws are outweighed. The second copy is extremely excellent and exciting. Although the mechanism is not original, it is a very good article in this kind of internal and external world. I really hope the author can continue to persevere. If I have to point out a shortcoming, it is that some of the characters' inappropriate "humor" slightly dilutes the sense of oppression brought by the plot. I hope this can be corrected later. Overall, the flaws do not hide the good points. People who like this genre highly recommend reading this book.

The first small plot is attractive, it is a pity for the Taoist priest, I thought he would become a teammate in the future.

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It's best to leave specific highlights or specific poisonous points, so I'd like to express my gratitude 🙏

But anchor, why haven't you signed a contract or said you have paid chapters? You already have 80 chapters. Others have more than 20 chapters that are faster and 60 chapters that are slower. And your popularity is not bad 🙂🙂🙂

It feels like a hellish movie theater.

It is well written and can dance with shackles. The suspense style is very strong, and there are some small loopholes, but the problems are not major and the writing is good. It can be said to be a rare suspense masterpiece. If you write well without losing your combat power, you can guarantee a minimum order of 6,000

After all, he is still a eunuch, that's all, it's to be expected.

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