It's Over, I'm Surrounded by Female Ghosts

It seems that the title of your book is a romance novel. I also read it because of the romance novel. However, after reading a few chapters, I felt that it was a pure supernatural novel. There is no romance element in the chapter titles. If you want to write a purely supernatural novel, I suggest you change the title of the book, so as to attract the audience of the supernatural novel. Otherwise, those who want to read a supernatural novel will think it is a romance novel and will not click in. Those who want to read a romance novel will realize that it is a supernatural novel.

During the new book period, please don't support the book. It's about the recommendation and traffic of the book. It's very important. Please don't support it. Please!

I didn't use it at all, and I added five new collections in three days. I was so worried that my hair was falling out. The editor said there might be something wrong with the title and introduction, but I really have difficulty naming it. I tried several editors and they all said there was no difference. I hope everyone can help me choose a better title! Please!

There is a bunch of pronouns for the characters, what does it mean that he looked at the top of my head, and I am still representing him here... It is so uncomfortable to see, you, me and him can't understand this, it is too artificial.

It's a pity that there is no way out for writing suspenseful romance games. If you drive a car and it's scary, I think the traffic will be quite good 🙂 I have already thought of the titles of the books, Sexy Ghost Record, Seduction of Souls, Night and Night, Yin and Yang Huan, Ghost on the Bed, Pillow Ghost, Ghost Marriage Wife, Female Ghost Guide, there are too many to list 🤓

Selling dog meat over sheep's heads and adding humorous AI dialogue, how many chapters can you run with people?

I sincerely offer my advice. The biggest problem with this book is that it is not exciting enough. A normal novel should have highs and lows. Instead, the protagonist feels like a drowning man who has fallen into the water and is struggling. The key is that the title and introduction of this book are very light-hearted, and readers attracted by it may not always be able to follow it.

The reversal of polarity at the beginning originally attracted me to read on, but the protagonist couldn't stand it despite the constant suffering. He risked his life and the system only gave him three melons and two dates. Just reward 0.1 Attributes and thousands of dollars, making you invincible. Apart from being able to run faster, those attributes are not enough to spend thousands of dollars to buy a coffin The protagonist is at a loss, so he takes out the plastic ring from his childhood to play the emotional card for the green plum ghost, but it is of no use and still pursues the protagonist. I finally solved it with a backhand, but the next incident came one after another. This time I had to cosplay Zhang Xuefeng, the prison master. If I couldn't run away, the ghost would really die, so I ran away too.

You basically have a weird, four-chapter sports plot with unclear meaning. When will you write about your love story? To be honest, those four chapters of your sports plot that lack lively and hard water are really a failure. When everyone looks at your book, it is either written for the romance element or for the horror element. As a result, you wrote four chapters with only two days of sports plot, which seriously deviated from the main point. The key plot is also very typical. The classic male protagonist was suppressed due to off-site factors and lost. Another hard-fought contest made the viewers very unhappy. You are playing PK now, and you have to fight your way out of the mountain of corpses and sea of ​​blood at the same time in four rounds. Is there any chapter that gives you hard water? Take the time to revise those four chapters, compress the sports plot into one chapter, and don't waste so many irrelevant things. The remaining three chapters return to the two main elements: love and horror. Write something strange about the cause of death of the heroine, and found that it is related to the apple orchard. Isn't this a hundred times better than Shuina Po Track and Field?

It's not exciting at all, you're being abused all the time. The plot of the village can end with the dealer. It's just a foreshadowing. The whole big demon has to be included in the plot 😅😅