It's Over, I'm Surrounded by Female Ghosts

It seems that the title of your book is a romance novel. I also read it because of the romance novel. However, after reading a few chapters, I felt that it was a pure supernatural novel. There is no romance element in the chapter titles. If you want to write a purely supernatural novel, I suggest you change the title of the book, so as to attract the audience of the supernatural novel. Otherwise, those who want to read a supernatural novel will think it is a romance novel and will not click in. Those who want to read a romance novel will realize that it is a supernatural novel.

During the new book period, please don't support the book. It's about the recommendation and traffic of the book. It's very important. Please don't support it. Please!

I didn't use it at all, and I added five new collections in three days. I was so worried that my hair was falling out. The editor said there might be something wrong with the title and introduction, but I really have difficulty naming it. I tried several editors and they all said there was no difference. I hope everyone can help me choose a better title! Please!

It's a pity that there is no way out for writing suspenseful romance games. If you drive a car and it's scary, I think the traffic will be quite good 🙂 I have already thought of the titles of the books, Sexy Ghost Record, Seduction of Souls, Night and Night, Yin and Yang Huan, Ghost on the Bed, Pillow Ghost, Ghost Marriage Wife, Female Ghost Guide, there are too many to list 🤓

Selling dog meat over sheep's heads and adding humorous AI dialogue, how many chapters can you run with people?

There is a bunch of pronouns for the characters, what does it mean that he looked at the top of my head, and I am still representing him here... It is so uncomfortable to see, you, me and him can't understand this, it is too artificial.

You basically have a weird, four-chapter sports plot with unclear meaning. When will you write about your love story? To be honest, those four chapters of your sports plot that lack lively and hard water are really a failure. When everyone looks at your book, it is either written for the romance element or for the horror element. As a result, you wrote four chapters with only two days of sports plot, which seriously deviated from the main point. The key plot is also very typical. The classic male protagonist was suppressed due to off-site factors and lost. Another hard-fought contest made the viewers very unhappy. You are playing PK now, and you have to fight your way out of the mountain of corpses and sea of ​​blood at the same time in four rounds. Is there any chapter that gives you hard water? Take the time to revise those four chapters, compress the sports plot into one chapter, and don't waste so many irrelevant things. The remaining three chapters return to the two main elements: love and horror. Write something strange about the cause of death of the heroine, and found that it is related to the apple orchard. Isn't this a hundred times better than Shuina Po Track and Field?

Is it supernatural or love? After reading a few chapters, I feel cheated.

Let me tell you my feelings after reading the few chapters of Qin House. It's a supernatural story, and the overall sense is not bad. Advantages: The protagonist is quick-witted in times of crisis and knows how to use mission rewards to prepare for the next mission. But the overall sense of the scripts is as follows: Wen Ning's script is bigger than the running plot and bigger than Qin's house Let's talk about the plot of Qin's house in three chapters: I don't know why I always feel that there is something wrong in the chapters when Qin Zi looks at the house. For example, the protagonist speculates that there is a problem in Qin's house and he doesn't bring any self-defense equipment (such as crowbars, baseball bats, etc.). He knows that such items cannot protect against weird things, but they can defend against people or interfere with physical objects. Go there empty-handed to confirm He is really reckless. Seeing that the protagonist's physical fitness is very bad, and then he is chased and fucked in the Qin House. When evading, he knew that there was a problem with the toilet, and then hid in the toilet, and was directly attacked from both sides. If the protagonist's aura had not been a problem, it would be no problem to escape through the toilet later, but the whole Qin House is really a bit forced to arrange the plot to develop like this. Except for these chapters, other plots can see that the protagonist's personal ability and quality are relatively high, but Qin House is really wrong, it is too forceful.

Looking at it so far, rubbish - food and grass - fairy grass, I can give low-grade fairy grass. The book is actually a supernatural novel. When I clicked on it, I thought it was for a special harem. The book is very good, but it is a pity that the results are not good. The author's name is useless!

It feels more like a horror house, and it does have that flavor. So far, it seems to be just food, and the world view is also quite deep. I think a better point is that each story is not a unit drama, but is connected together and has a causal relationship. Everyone who likes air conditioning books should read it.

I have read more than a dozen chapters, and overall I feel very good. Is the popularity of supernatural literature so low now?

Never Eunuch I like reading this kind of non-urban novel about scumbag men. It has a refreshing sense of contrast. Urban novels are boring, but the scumbag genre is quite interesting. Scumbag ➕ Supernatural is quite fun.

The book is very interesting and exciting, like watching a mystery movie. I highly recommend it. But I personally feel that the villain's strength setting is a bit too strong, and the pressure is suffocating. First of all, in the setting, it is difficult for normal humans to fight against the trick. Those with trick tools can barely hurt the trick, but the tricks have strong side effects, making it difficult for humans to bear when using them. This setting makes the combat power of the two sides extremely unequal. On the other hand, from the protagonist's point of view, the protagonist's wives are all A-level spies, but they are created by the villain's artificial participation, which shows that the villain behind them is stronger than A-level and has a certain degree of organization. In addition, there are many S-level spies in the world of spooks. This comparison makes the protagonist and the human camp even more attractive. In some novels, Gui may have stronger combat power than humans, but some of Gui's mechanisms and obsessions will be exploited by others. People can avoid Gui while breaking the mechanism to counterattack, thus achieving some kind of asymmetric confrontation. However, the confrontation between trickery and humans in this book is still at the level of simple fighting. In such an asymmetric confrontation, it is difficult for the human camp represented by the protagonist to win. Therefore, I am more worried about the balance of combat power and development of the book in the future (since humans and trickery cannot fight against each other mechanically, as time goes by, trickery power will gradually gain the upper hand, and humans will hide everywhere. Hidden, human beings will also have various organizations that gather to fight against the guile, and some people will even take the initiative to transform into the guile and join the guile. It is also difficult for the existence of the guile to remain on the dark side without the general public knowing anything about it. Information about the dungeon will definitely be gradually leaked, forming a targeted strategy. The setting of a few adventurers to randomly search for guile tools will gradually become illogical as time goes by.) Unless the setting is further improved in the later stage, for example, people can manipulate the tricks in some ways to fight against the tricks. For example, some of the tricks among the tricks are partially consistent with human interests and some cooperation has been reached. Even the first trick in the world (the emergence of the trick) or the strongest trick is related to the protagonist. I hope the author can carefully consider the setting of the worldview. In addition, it is ok to be tense and exciting, but not too abusive to the protagonist, and do not download dungeons all the time. How the protagonist advances the relationship and some daily life can also be interspersed in it.

The author obviously writes about supernatural stories. Why did he choose this name? He thought he was in love with a female ghost.

There is no increase in strength at all, and the most outrageous thing is that other attributes have increased by almost 50%, but the strength has not changed at all. The protagonist has been digitized in the true sense, right? There is no correlation in the whole body?

Basically, it's just weird, and I didn't see any love scenes at all. And there are several consecutive chapters of races with unclear meanings.

Why is there no love story at all? Isn't this selling dog meat on a sheep's head?

The product is not accurate, and the actual content has nothing to do with the introduction.

I have read Chapter 179 so far. The title and beginning of the book are unremarkable, but the author's writing skills are good, and the first few copies have given me a strong sense of psychological oppression. The subsequent plots become more and more bizarre, and the style develops from urban horror stories to rules-based ghost stories (perhaps with Wei Kun). (Slight spoilers below) The overall background of the story is the resurrection of terror, and the pace is relatively slow. The core conflict in the early stage is how the protagonist survives from the little ghost girl (maybe it will be the same later 😜). Starting from Chapter 91, various settings have been rolled out, such as hunter websites, evil ghost levels, strange relics, etc. Finally, Chapter 93 mentions the tangible big hand when explaining the world view. It is recommended that the author should not include it, or downplay such plots in the future, because the setting is not rounded, and it is easy to harmonize if the scale is not grasped. I'm really afraid that you might end up like this some other time 😭😭😭

To be honest, the author should really change the title of the book. The current titles attract people who are interested in love. If the content does not match the title, it will not attract people at all.

The overall level is medium, I can feel that the writing power is average, the character description is relatively simple, it is good to read when you relax, and it is not difficult to read.

I would like to ask whether you will end up joining the army again, right? This is what worries me most about books with a quasi-modern background. Not only are there many poisonous points and it is easy for bad things to happen, but also it is very difficult to write when it involves officers and soldiers. If it is not handled well, it will be a big bad thing. I hope you can explain it.

The monthly vote has been cast, come on!

Okay, be diligent in updating, and I'll give you the monthly pass

Author, there is a mistake in the name of a person in Chapter 192. It should have said "Gu Yan has followed suit," but it was written as "Li Shuran has followed suit."

I have reached chapter 190, and here are some suggestions: 1. Personally, I suggest that the style of combining current events and making fun of jokes in the first hundred chapters can be retained. On the one hand, this style of writing is a unique feature among supernatural novels, making it unique and eye-catching for readers. For example, I wrote several chapters about the race between the thin-muscled male protagonist and the dark-skinned sports student, and he constantly made fun of the figure of the male protagonist in his novel (commonly known as the author's writing was so exciting). Objectively, it achieved a tacit communication between the author and the readers, and had the effect of breaking the fourth wall. On the other hand, descriptions that are close to real life and interspersed with Internet memes are more likely to make readers feel involved. When the writing is turned to describe supernatural beings, it will be more contrasting and scary. Vivid and clear descriptions of mountains of corpses and seas of blood are often not scary, but the weirdness inadvertently revealed in daily life is scary. The daily life and supernatural plots are relaxed and relaxed, and the weird descriptions echo the previous hot topics of current affairs. Objectively, the text shows the effect of breaking the fourth wall, blurring the boundaries between reality and ghosts, which is particularly scary. 2. The recent chapters have introduced the evil ghost level and combat power system, making it easy to turn supernatural beings into monster-killing upgrades. The further you go, the clearer your combat power becomes and the less scary it becomes (similar to an air-conditioned horror house). After all, fear comes from the unknown, and a clear combat power system will greatly weaken the terrifying effect of the unknown. Personally, I think it is a failure to give the male protagonist a superhuman physique. Just imagine if in the later stages of this article, the male protagonist has the same fighting power as Sun Wukong, which ghost can create a terrifying atmosphere. 3. It is recommended to reduce the classic plots like these two chapters of eating fish and singing opera. Seeing the plot in one glance will greatly reduce the sense of horror and make readers feel clichéd and the number of words is too low. Especially in the early stages of serialization, readers will have the idea that this article is nothing more than that, and then have the urge to quit following it. Personally, I think supernatural novels are fascinating in several ways. First, they describe the evil of human nature. The sinisterness of people's hearts often creates a more depressing atmosphere than evil spirits. I personally think this may be the author's strength. After all, the author writes various PUA plots at his fingertips, especially the invisible man who drives Pei Shengrong crazy and forces him to set fire. The method of exerting extreme pressure and then being gentle can be called a textbook workplace PUA. The second is to progress layer by layer, similar to a detective novel that guides readers to experience the fun of solving crimes. The third is to use the words of the characters in the article to describe their own experiences, express their true feelings, and arouse the resonance of readers. (Similar to the air-conditioned horror house, the author used the plot of Yan Danian's cartoons, which had been ignored for many years and was in poverty, to review his experience of being unknown and wandering alone before becoming famous, and recalling what he was thinking back then)

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