Demon Judge

As the title states, the plot develops relatively slowly, but I personally think it's a bit interesting.

It feels like the protagonist has received too many benefits in southern Xinjiang, and the benefits come as if they are rushed to the protagonist. I went with the people of Southern Xinjiang twice, once to the Poisonous Insect Cave and once to the tribe of Southern Xinjiang. The time was too tight, and it seemed like I went there just to add some background to the protagonist, and it felt very disconnected from the entire storyline. Especially this time, there are so many storylines left in Chen Erhe's case that have not been completed and are directly transferred to the tribes in southern Xinjiang. It is a bit abrupt and readers are still not satisfied. Generally speaking, this novel is relatively delicate, and the many details handled make people can't help but feel that this novel world has a sense of layering and reality like the real world. Personally, I feel that the structure of the world of the novel is described in more detail, and some chapters (chapters with many battles) feel too lengthy. Of course, readers' personal preferences do not affect the novel's potential to become a god.

The protagonist's desperate efforts were falsely claimed by his boss, and then the boss said "I am doing it for your own good" and the protagonist acknowledged it. Cow nose

It's painful to watch! The protagonist is a native, uneducated, but sometimes his words and deeds are childish and sometimes not, which is inconsistent with his background and experience. Moreover, many characters' words and deeds are out of touch with the environment of the times. They are all contradictory monsters! Typical environment, characters' words and actions are inconsistent with each other! You can neither read it without thinking like Shuangwen, nor can you read it with your brain, so it's very strange!

A fourteen-year-old native who accepted death inexplicably evolved overnight. Do you watch it all the time?

It's cool that a practitioner can be bullied by ordinary people.

The author's structure is okay, and the content he writes is solid. It's hard to say that it's cliche, but it's true that it's not very likable. The protagonist has always suffered from boredom along the way. After suffering from boredom, he still admits it. You said that he will slowly get revenge later, whether it is his own revenge or the plot kill, but in general it is too far. When you write novels now, when your popularity is not high, you bury the hook far away and no one will read it. Of course, if you just want to please yourself, then I didn't say it.

The magic system in this book is the Twelve Traditions developed after hundreds of schools of thought competed in ancient times, including Buddhism (supplemented later), Taoism, Confucianism, Legalism, Bing, Mohism, Agriculture, Yin and Yang, Ming, Zongheng, Za, and Medicine, etc. We are now collecting the names, concepts, and effects of various spells. A good story line is also acceptable. For example: Humanity sequence: Dharma lineage-Ya Chai Legal intention: impartial law enforcement (can be changed) Laws and orders: criminal law, public security... Spells: painting the ground into a prison, whipping... Wait... The writer is introverted and socially fearful , are not good at words, and have less communication with everyone. Those who like to discuss and chat can speak here. If you have good suggestions or criticisms about this book, you are welcome to leave a message. As long as you see it, I promise to reply as soon as possible (because I want to buy a big gold bracelet for the big baby and a small gold bracelet for the little baby, so I have to work to make money, and I have to fight 😁😁)

This Tiandao is quite anthropomorphic and knows how to train dogs. He gives benefits and then tightens the chain. The second punishment is even more funny. The villain caused chaos in the county. The protagonist killed more than 300 people. Some of them were not worthy of death, but others included dead soldiers and thugs who attacked the yamen. Some set fires and committed crimes. Some poured gold juice into the wells used by people in the county to drink water. If they die, the protagonist will be punished. They copy the scriptures to go to salvation, and they shout that Huang Tian will die without punishment. The villain is also a gangster who raises wolves and slaughters the village, harms women and plays with animals, and harms a county without punishment.

Once people understand something, they will never go back. The author makes the protagonist intrigue, fight to the death, and be so naughty when he returns home, using children to fish, which is very divisive.

The protagonist comes from a big family, and there are several mountains. You actually set it as illiterate. What a broken setting. You can't go into details. There are too many contradictions. I gave up.

Although I have ordered them all, let me briefly talk about my feelings: The skills are opened too much, the gold finger is opened too much, and the group portrait is also written, and the others seem to be weak. The only normal group of people are Xiao Chen and Ding Xuan from Novice Village. The group of portraits at the back are featureless. In the end, the characteristics of the protagonist can no longer be remembered. He is constantly given new skills and does not correspond to the description of his realm. Only a ghost knows how to compare. It is still confusing to read a book. Anyway, I was a little disappointed. I liked the early specialization in archery.

This book begins from the perspective of a 14-year-old indigenous child, growing up step by step The plot begins with the protagonist exerting his strength, being taken away by his boss, and being powerless Is this plot reasonable Reasonable Is it well written, not good The protagonist just The explosive guy tried his best to kill the gangsters After that, he even made great ambitions to evolve his body No matter how you look at it, it's a climax I'm sorry, I'm going to tell you right now, your boss has taken away your credit, and after taking it away, he still has to run in front of you and say sorry to you Si, I don't want to either, I have a reason, I'm doing it for your own good If you don't forgive me, I'll kneel down to you if you don't forgive me. If you can't bear it, that's great, then I won't kneel down, I'll give you some money Anyway, how can I write it if I feel aggrieved That's it. , Some are influenced by it later The first four million words of the author seem to be written in this way It is indeed worthy of this third-level author There is writing style and ideas, but I am just not willing to make you readers happy. I suppress it first and then promote it. I must let you suppress it severely.

The author treats the pig's feet like a fool and treats the readers like a son. All kinds of clever tricks show off his IQ. He is so smart.

When I saw it, I felt a mouthful of blood in my chest and couldn't vomit it. You have strict rules and a high level of social force, but the protagonist turns out to be a mountain man, awakens for no reason, and is cheated for no reason. The person who cheated him is just a matter of course? A poor government official still buys a courtyard house with more than ten rooms? Have you ever calculated how big it is? And have two wives? The protagonists have all achieved magical powers and are now the best in the world, but the one who rides the horse is still working as a temporary worker? Don't you know that with a sharp weapon in hand, you will start to kill? Speaking of which, the protagonist is a coward and coward, so how can he have the courage to face extremely powerful gangsters? Can you hit Xiaoyanei in the face? There are so many contradictions, it's poisoning me to death😡

This garbage can be eaten. Everyone who clicks in is responsible.

The writing is pretty good, why do you get so many scolds 🙂

Very good, why are there so many mindless comments? Or is the threshold for readers lowered again?

After reading Chapter 16, I quite agree with the rules of human society and officialdom, but the aspect of extraordinary power is really a mess and I can't understand it at all. Farewell.

The part about grabbing credit is really unacceptable. It's like a shit-eating person trying to mentally transform you into a shit-eating person. He could have asked the protagonist not to be unconscious and asked Joe to state the pros and cons before he completely passed out, letting the protagonist choose, and then give the credit. He chose to make the protagonist comatose, and asked Qiao to first bribe his colleagues, drag them down, and steal the credit, and then apologize and obtain forgiveness. The merit will be turned into an attack and the attack will be rationalized, so that readers can understand that Joe's dereliction of duty and the women and children at home are the reasons why he has to take the credit.

Is there any comment from Shen Nong on whether this book is worth reading?

I really think this book is very interesting. Although the comment section is mostly full of criticism, I believe that you, the author, will succeed! At least I saw some of the judge's actions and it aroused some of my own conscience.

Chapter 9: AI can poison people to death. AI is too strong.

Today's plot is very exciting. The author has updated two more chapters to finish the plot. Good review

No wonder the results are not good, Chapter 9 is poisoned

I've given you the monthly pass, please be more exciting and rigorous in your updates tomorrow!

What was this book called before?

He was so confident in attacking, he convinced himself, and the whole family was convinced? It's a pity that I can't stand it anymore!

This male protagonist is stupid. .

The latest and newly written haha, please read the author's comments. I can't explain it at all. I can't follow it anymore. I don't want to give monthly tickets.