Mortal: I Have a Jade Secret to Knowing the Sea!

I've just finished reading the latest one, and it's quite well written! It's quite in line with my common sense of being a human being. My personal suggestion is that it is best not to have a female protagonist. If there is a female protagonist, it is best to wait until the middle stage of Nascent Soul. Han Li's progress is a bit slow. Please give him a mention. He is almost a big step away. Otherwise, it will take hundreds of years to return to Tiannan. Now it seems like one hundred and twenty-eight. Wang Xuan feels that he can reach the peak of the early stage of the dual Nascent Soul in the Chaos Star Sea, and his combat power is close to the late stage of the Nascent Soul. Then it is appropriate to return to Tiannan in this state by forming an elixir with Han Li. Han Li went back and broke through the Nascent Soul, and Wang Xuan reached the middle stage of the dual Nascent Soul. Brother Zongheng Tiannan

Should I keep the Barbarian Beard and the Jiyin Patriarch?

Author, please don't accept Nangong Wan, Zi Ling Yuanyao, these belong to Han Li, just look for others.

Putting aside the fairy tale, if the protagonist knowingly knows that Nangong Wan is an alchemy monk and deliberately provokes her before he develops, it means that he does not take his own life seriously at all. It was mentioned in the original work that she also hesitated whether to kill Han Li. In addition, her role is not even as good as a supporting role, and her background is very troublesome.

It's not strong enough, it's just a little bit arrogant. Mysterious instructions on how to use the millennium elixir to exchange for a refining weapon, regardless of whether it is worth the risk or not, do you need a refining tool? Can you use the Bloody Forbidden Land? If you want to open it, press it; if you want it, don't use it. There are many general directions for writing fan fiction, so you have to choose the same one.

After reading a few chapters, I can't stand it anymore. With this kind of mentality and IQ, are you still hanging around in the mortal world? The hook is too high, so why are you still selling exercises? The mortal world is what you call a typical dark world of immortal cultivation. Even if you are in the same sect, if you are a helpless person and practice a little faster according to your qualifications, some people will suspect that you have some treasures. If you are polite, they will force you to confess. If you are not polite, they will directly plot to kill people and seize the treasure. If your cultivation speed is very abnormal or you reveal your wealth, then you are not of the same level, but a foundation-building monk who wants to talk to you. Let's talk about it. The protagonist has the mentality of Xian Ni Wang Lin. He behaves like an idiot and does things as he thinks of them. He never considers the consequences. It's ridiculous to be able to live in the mortal world. It's too dramatic. Go and write a fairy Ni fanfic. Really, mortals are not suitable for you. You don't have a truly mature mentality. You can't be cautious and always have unruly people who want to hurt me!

When I read your introduction, I knew that this was my favorite book. This is the way to read it.

If you don't accept Nangong Wan, it will be troublesome to reincarnate, and because after reincarnation, it will be considered poisonous to some people.

It's too poisonous 😡 and the author is also a bombastic person

Animation plots written about mortals will not end well. Sit back and wait to be cut

The writing is very good, I hope I can stick to it. You can use AI to find inspiration, but it is not recommended to use it directly, even if it is modified. The chapter on the fairyland must be written in a high way

True 6, as long as you gather your Qi to the Qi training stage, you can enter the Blood Trial. Haven't other sects thought about this? The constraints of the secret realm left behind by the gods were broken by your Qi Condensation Technique.

If there are plug-ins and you don't study them, you will have to make a lot of shit.

The villagers on the roadside shared the nuclear fusion technology with you. Can't hold it any longer

Protagonist: Wang Xuan Father: Han Li

If you don't want to eat, don't poop. If you poop, eat it? Nangong Wan gave it away?

Don't you have the first line indented? Elementary school students all know how to indent when writing essays. It looks really tiring. They don't even divide it into paragraphs. One chapter is just one paragraph.

A few chapters persuade him to quit. . The opening chapter synthesizes the law of time technique. The function is comparable to that of Zhang Tian Bottle. . Alright. . Enjoy it yourself. .

I just read the synopsis, and I plan to watch it because there is no female protagonist. It's simple. I don't like the so-called difficult relationships, and I don't like to fall in love with anything, especially the intellectual-educating online novels about falling in love with a broken system. Men's videos are not suitable for the ancient idol style. There are almost no female readers who also watch men's videos. Dog-licking articles should have been pushed out of the ditch a long time ago. Women who have given up their love-mindedness for the so-called difficulty in finding peace have to go to the end together. It is too anti-intellectual. It is best not to touch the cause and effect. Those who can use opportunities to solve selfish desires should be rewarded with opportunities. This is in line with the culture of cultivating immortals. What does cultivating immortals pursue? Immortality. If you have a head full of women, go back to the field of urban romance 😒

No accept Nangong Wan, and please don't give it to Han Li

The protagonist told Han Li that he had not encountered the Kung Fu created by Doctor Mo before. Even if you say that it is based on the Kung Fu given by Doctor Mo, although it is a little bit poisonous, it can at least use the genius of the protagonist. To be reasonable, now there is no creation out of thin air before cultivating immortals, right? And I wish it were 90% the same as Changchun Gong, right? You are so awesome. You think readers are fools. There is also the little green bottle. If you don't want to snatch it, then don't reveal this secret. Forget it, I'm too lazy to complain about this. I guess there will be more poisonous points later, but I won't read it and leave.

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It is better to read the original work, the plot basically follows the original work to the sea of ​​chaotic stars. I didn't watch it since I had to pay for it later, and it didn't make me feel happy at all. It's too noisy and tasteless.

Why don't you use the Qingyuan Sword Technique to practice the water attribute technique over there? It's a pity. Go to Yellow Maple Valley, get the Qingyuan Sword Technique, fuse it, and then change the technique. Alas, I don't know how strong the sword cultivation technique will be after fusion.

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The writing is good, the plot is good, support support support

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