Mortals: Starting from the Chen Family

After reading the introduction, I have read almost half of the book. It is worth 😄😄

Another biography written by mortals, which is what some demon cultivators and low-level immortal cultivators like to do. The more bonds you have, the heavier your karma will be

We haven't signed a contract yet, so I suggest you stop your losses immediately.

The introduction looks interesting!

Naturally, Xin Ruyin, one of the Twelve Princesses, will be ranked second. The shortlisted ones are Yinyue, Ling Yuling, Zi Ling, Yuan Yao, and who else is there? . .

Come on, author! Come on, come on, come on

There are very few stories about mortal families. Come on, I'll give you a recommendation vote.

The plot is too bland, and there is no need for too much foreshadowing in the early stage.

When writing a family story, the protagonist should at least have Qi-training family vassals in the foundation-building stage, and the foundation-building family vassals in the core-formation stage. They need to contribute resources for cultivating immortals every year. Don't ask for more wins, but seek the protection of the protagonist. It is interesting to write the patriarchs of some vassal families, instead of no matter what the protagonist's strength, there is only one family where the parents are short-lived 😳😳😳

When it comes to female characters, you don't just accept them all because you see them being beautiful in anime. If you collect a lot of them, no matter how you describe them, there will always be some female characters that are not included. So, should you accept them and use them as vases, or just use them as vases? The harem stream is also about being more sophisticated. It is better to select a few carefully than to collect dozens or hundreds. It is meaningless to distinguish the personality and appearance of each female character. In terms of resources for cultivating immortals, don't always ask the protagonist to provide them. You can write that they open a shop together to sell what they are good at. The protagonist just needs to act as a backer. At most, they can provide the rare resources needed when breaking through the situation. Don't write all the female characters as waste, and the protagonist has to worry about everything.

Fire is the source of earth. Who do you think it will overcome? Does metal overcome earth?

The collection has exceeded 300, which can be considered an achievement, hahaha. The fanfiction section is indeed a new attempt by the author. I hope everyone can give me some pointers on the shortcomings, and we will slowly correct them in the future. At the same time, I also wish everyone a different and wonderful new year.

Thank you. At that time, I just said thank you for your support. I really can only say thank you. I will try my best to fill in the gaps. . .

Author, come on, why don't you update more?

It's not bad, there are no flaws or awkwardness, the protagonist's temperament and IQ are quite normal, that is to say, the golden finger is not well developed, and the plot progression is too confusing.

Thanks to 3947 for the recommendation votes

My "Floating Jade Fairy Tribe" has not signed a contract either, so let's persevere and encourage each other!

Thanks to the Hongmeng boss for the recommendation. My name is too long to remember, so I will remember you: close your eyes on Hongmeng and open your eyes to the vast ocean. [You can express yourself freely when you are willing to do so—Xu Kaixin]

There are too few words. Please wait until there are a million words before reading.

After reading a little bit, I found a problem. There is no fairy tale flavor. There are too many modern colloquialisms, which seriously destroys the sense of substitution. I should copy more books. It would be much better to copy the 300,000 words of "The Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality".

Is it a family story about mortals cultivating immortality? First time watching

You really don't understand this book? From the beginning of the Immortal Ascension Conference, I looked confused.

How many do you have in your collection now? I realized I only have a dozen! Will those of us who issue books directly get signed?

It is actually a story about a mortal family, which is rare, and the writing is quite good, but it seems a bit bleak because not many people read it. Come on