I Rely on Plant Fusion to Become an Immortal

I have a question: is this fan fiction based on that book? I'm completely confused.

If not, I'll just keep writing Astral Planes.

It's a good subject matter. If you write it a little slower and more meticulously, and improve your writing style, it could be quite good. Right now, it feels like a ghost is chasing and biting me.

The following are personal opinions only: Reading it is a bit like looking at the painting "Dwelling in the Fuchun Mountains"; I didn't understand it.

Am I not going to write about all my amazing and divine creations? You still want to see more of the starry sky?

If you want to develop an interesting new system, don't keep using formulas. Old methods aren't necessarily suitable for new systems. Your approach clearly conflicts with the system itself; the system, aside from its potential, is entirely a hindrance.

The first three chapters clearly showed an intention to write a lot, but reading through them felt like being force-fed a duck. My stomach was filled with the painful sensation of being stuffed full, but in reality, I vomited everything up and didn't eat anything.

I didn't pay attention at the beginning, I'm only on chapter five, there's a Chen Qingshan and a Chen Qinghuai, they're in every chapter, I still don't understand who the main character is.

It was very difficult to read, and not the kind of difficulty you'd find in a good book; the writing felt very disorganized.

It's not even the later stages yet. The early monetary and lifecycle systems have already collapsed, so what's the point of watching?