The Force of Nature: The Beginning of All Things

The Star-Broken Giant Clan, a new book of Star Realm fan fiction

Common life species Dragon lychee - 3 trees - strengthen kidney function and nerve response Bald cypress - 2 trees - strengthen flight and wing muscles Fire paulownia - 2 trees - transform wood attribute force Putuo horn oak - 1 tree ——Strengthen the flexibility of the forefoot Golden Alder——1 tree——Strengthen joint flexibility Qiliu——2 trees——Comprehensive muscle strengthening Silver Fir——1 tree——Strengthen bone hardness Metasequoia——1 tree——Enhance underwater breathing ability

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You start as a worm, with no elders, no plug-ins, and constant development of new partners and forces on your own. Thank you for your support. Once it's on the shelves, make sure you're full!

Not to mention ordinary insects that have no consciousness. I keep freezing them just to get an ice descendant (?) And I said that the seniors and descendants will change and integrate, but now I still feel that they have not changed at all, and even feel more indifferent. I compare the only descendant with the flame spider and think that the descendant is too stupid. No, I have not seen many plots where the protagonist has a descendant, and then you want it to be smarter? ? ? In addition, the protagonist feels like he doesn't know what he is rushing for, he is always very busy. After finishing this one, I started another one. I was writing a slow-paced article every day. Although in others I like the protagonist to be more indifferent, in this article I feel that daily life is also very important.

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But I feel that the protagonist's emotions are a bit weak (?). One of the reasons why I like this world view is the relationship between seniors and juniors, but I feel that it is not reflected in this. One is a senior who has no communication except giving money, and the other is a junior who feels treated very coldly. Secondly, why is there a being who is bigger than the protagonist? That one from the Holy Butterfly Kingdom, is it in this river? Then I felt that time passed quickly without writing down many details. However, I quite like daily life, but this daily life does not even feel as good as a running account (?)

In addition to this novel world view and system, first-blood books are about elders guiding younger generations. As long as you, the author, can write well, we will immediately support you as the new first-blood book.

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The writing is pretty good, and Pig's Foot's feelings towards his fellow tribesmen also come up later on. However, the early descriptions make the elder Pig Foot feel a bit like a tool, and the tender description of the elders towards the younger generation is not so prominent. Later on, I feel that Pig's Foot can be an elder and take care of his fellow tribesmen. (Purely subjective feeling, the author can write according to his own ideas)