The Force of Nature: The Beginning of All Things

The Shattered Star Giants, a new fan fiction novel set in the Astral Realm.

Common Destiny Longli – 3 trees – Strengthens kidney function and nerve response Bald cypress – 2 trees – enhances flight and wing muscle strength Firewood Trees – 2 trees – Convert Wood Attribute Force Putuo horn oak – 1 tree – enhances foreleg flexibility Golden alder tree – 1 tree – enhances joint flexibility Willow trees – 2 trees – Comprehensive muscle strengthening Silver Fir – 1 tree – Strengthens bone structure Metasequoia tree – 1 tree – Enhances underwater breathing ability

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Starting as a single insect, without elders or cheat codes, relying solely on myself to continuously develop new allies and power. Please support me! Plenty of content will be available after release!

Leaving aside ordinary insects that lack consciousness, they keep freezing them just to get an ice-type offspring (?). Furthermore, regarding the previous promises about the transformation and integration of the seniors and juniors, it seems that nothing has changed so far, and they even seem more indifferent.

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However, I feel that the main characters' emotions are a bit weak (?). One of the reasons I like this world view is the relationship between seniors and juniors, but I feel that it is not reflected here. One is the senior who has little interaction except for giving money, and the other is the junior who seems to treat him very coldly.

Aside from its novel worldview and system, the only other thing about First Blood's books is that older authors mentor younger ones. If you, author, can write this well, we'll immediately support you as the new First Blood.

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The writing is quite good, and the protagonist's feelings for his fellow tribesman develop later on. However, the early descriptions make the elders seem somewhat like mere plot devices, and the depiction of their tenderness towards the younger generation isn't particularly prominent.