Speed ​​Through the Heavens and Kill the Immortals in the World of Mortals

After reading two or three books by the author, the author's production rate is too low. Out of 10 dungeons, two or three are qualified, and one is outstanding. What does that mean? Those seven or eight were all kinds of stories that were not written in place. They were either off topic or passed over in one stroke, or the storyline was not written in place. . . It would be great if the author of each copy wrote carefully. If you wrote every copy according to Huang Yaoshi's Double Dragon, you would have taken off long ago. What a pity tsk tsk tsk

The time-travelers who don't have a harem in male-channeled novels are not worthy of time-traveling

The synopsis should be better than the previous one. The protagonist's appearance in the previous one was too neutral, and he liked to dress up as a woman to trick men. I couldn't stand it when I read The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Slaying.

A little suggestion, write back to the crazy feeling you had at the beginning. Your base is basically a reader of this style, and writing is very enjoyable. You are good at it. There is no need to change your style to cater to some people.

Why would you write about a mentally ill boy with a chuunibyou problem? Isn't it good to have a normal protagonist?

It's nice for you to accuse others from the moral high ground. What you say is reasonable. You have to double standard when it's your turn, right? Mei Chaofeng and his wife have killed countless people for practicing martial arts and harmed many innocent people. It's ridiculous that you shoulder the responsibility. In the end, you are still bullying the weak and extremely hypocritical.

When I read Chapter 7, I felt a bit baffled. Was this done on purpose to follow the original storyline of Guo Jing eating the snake and gaining a lot of power? Take the initiative to give his snakes to Guo Jing to complete the original story of Guo Jing eating snakes?

The worlds of Shooting Condor, Tianlong and Lu Xiaofeng are still written by Zhutianliu today. Have you been living ten years ago? There are also all kinds of fatherly sermons on great principles, hahaha

This book is still chivalrous and nanny-esque, but it's not up to par.

Does the Fengyun dungeon use AI? More than half of the chapter is full of adjectives.

The emotional scene between Tianlong and Wang Yuyan was seriously inconsistent with the characters, especially the last dialogue, which was so awkward for me...

The author's biggest opponent is himself. In the first few books, he has used up all the ideas he can think of.

The comment may not have been posted, so I sent it to book friends. I said that the author wrote about killing three people every day, which is too few. You can go to the battlefield or the village, where there are many people. After that, a brother commented that the village is difficult to find, walking takes time, and you have to apply to kill prisoners, and there are not many prisoners... I can think of this... People with this kind of problem, you sit at the same table with the author, it is shameful to use this golden finger like this, 1. With the identity and status of the protagonist, you actually said that he has no intelligence and it is difficult to find a copycat 2. Wouldn't you lead people to kill all the way? Whether it is killing people on the road or killing people with you, it is not troublesome, nor It's a waste of rations, and anyone who protests will be killed. If it's a waste of time, you're not wasting time eating. 3. You go to the battlefield, but you don't go to the battlefield. You only kill prisoners. I really can't understand this idea. 4. If you want to kill a prisoner in the future, you need other people's consent. It's really a waste of money to give you this golden finger. Come on, I won't go anywhere and kill whoever I want. You're kidding me about this kind of Goldfinger. It's not about efficiency. What kind of obstacles are you setting up for yourself? I still can't help but want to complain about the author. There are three people every day. You are not as good as Ding Busi in Xia Ke Xing. The protagonist is still bullish and coaxing every day. Goldfinger is blind.

Is there anyone like me who skips the main world directly?

What Qing Yunian practiced was radiation, and it was tens of thousands of years after the earth. The interstellar war was still fighting outside. He was convinced by Xuezhong and Juvenile Gexing.

So, are there any women?

What TV series is in the main world? I haven't watched it. It's so boring. I skip it every time I go back to the main world.

According to the author's urinary nature, this book should have a finale.

I have never read the Lotus Lantern book before. After reading it recently, I can't help but sigh that Bai Qian is the true love, and Nightshade and Ruenren were just accidents.

The heroine of this book is completely unnecessary!

I hope the author will write a copy of the Feng Ge trilogy. I wonder what the protagonist would do if he were dressed as Wan Guizang.

The number of words is small, but the books are all excellent.

So, multiple heroines or something else?

Duan Yu and Mukefu, your martial arts skills are useless and you are not even qualified to die in my hands.

This one has more emotions, and the one that will destroy the world is more to my liking.

The first world was written with the feeling of being in a dream.