The Disaster That Will Destroy All the Heavens Begins with Dongfang Bubai

1. The writing is smooth and the words are concise. It is considered above average at the starting point, and even beats some great writers; 2. The protagonist is ruthless enough, but his cognition is a bit naive, which makes him look ruthless and brainless, so he loses points; 3. The plot is average, the reading experience is average, and it is difficult to read; In general, the author is talented and has a lot of room for improvement. If he can make up for his shortcomings, the future is promising.

I saw some comments saying that this book is a short video, but I couldn't remember anything after watching it. I really think it is the greatest compliment. The pace is fast, the text is comfortable, and the plot is fun to watch. It is especially suitable for killing time. Isn't this the best online article? To learn knowledge, I read physical books and masterpieces by various writers, or else I read skills and vocational books. I read online articles to kill time and rest my brain. An online article is much more expensive to read than a physical book. I hope that online articles can give me a comfortable and enjoyable experience when reading. This book does that for now. I will support the genuine version and keep reading it, hoping to maintain the quality. Oh, by the way, I forgot to mention that the best thing about this book is that it doesn't contain any personal information and is very verbose. It's really good.

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The protagonist of the last book was miserable, and this one is even worse. The protagonist has a deep hatred with the author, and the protagonist's family was ruined.

Don't make it the same as the previous one, where the heroine warms your stomach. Author, you are really not suitable for writing heroines and emotional dramas. Isn't it bad to have no heroine?

It turned out to be a dark article. It's a pity that I didn't read the comment section earlier. It stained my eyes and killed innocent people indiscriminately. I don't know what I thought.

I don't want to subscribe anymore, it's all a routine, there's no fighting scenes at all, it's all oral play 😅

I'm also very curious, is Xu Fengnian really so awesome that he can make these women abandon the hatred of their parents, relatives, friends and family?

The protagonist is pretty good in the early stages of the Zhu Xian chapter, although it is still the same old template. But the author didn't know what he was thinking, so he insisted on adding drama later. Even if you leave directly, you will have nothing to destroy the world, but you insist on talking about a lot of big principles, saying what is good for all living beings, but the protagonist himself is cultivating immortality, and this world is not extremely evil. What is the difference between talking about so many big principles and the sanctimonious people that the protagonist killed before! ! If this still happens in the future, there is no need to read this book! !

Destroying the world purely for the sake of destroying the world, any so-called reason that I can't stand love is totally untenable. The follow-up copies have the same routine, and the more I write, the more dull and boring I am. I heard from other book friends that the last one collapsed because of romance, and now this one has gone to the extreme, and it is estimated that it will completely collapse in just a few chapters

Damn, you're wasting my few coins. It's to open up the fairyland, to repair the world, and to educate all sentient beings. You came here to be a nanny for the people who cover the sky. You just got the Emperor Ye Fandu, and you even made yourself into a ruthless brother. I'm really vomiting🤮 You might as well just Take over the source of destruction, the spiritual world, any sacred body, any darkness supreme, any emperor or emperor, no matter good or bad, kill them all, and all those who practice will be annihilated. Just like what you did in the previous worlds, treat them all as ordinary people, all living beings are ordinary.

The protagonist is so stupid, why doesn't he create his own Kung Fu? Instead, he has to learn the Sunflower Manual, which is about humans and ghosts, and also try to practice other Kung Fu techniques. It's not okay to arrest people to create martial arts, and then say that they are nothing more than mediocre people. I can't do it myself. I was complaining about this at first, but then I changed the map and hit hard. There was no transition and it always felt a bit abrupt.

The protagonist kills all the good and bad ones, and while killing them all, he scolds others for their bad minds. After the killing, I had to say that I have always been kind-hearted. It was really disgusting. My expression after reading it was like this 😰

Forget about cultivating immortals, just cultivate demons

I like the book "Swordsmanship in the Snow". A bunch of people are practicing swordsmanship in the snow, but I really don't think it's any good. The author said what I want to complain about.

The rest are fine, but I don't understand what the idea is to eliminate all martial arts. How can a chivalrous person use martial arts to break the ban? Cultivate a disciple with new ideas, and reveal to Zhu Houzhao that the silver mine wants to create you a so-called world of freedom and equality, where everyone is as weak as an insect? If you put away all the guns and register all purchases of knives, so that no one can resist, will the world become peaceful and beautiful? Then I can only say that you don't want this kind of thing. If you really want to make the world a better place, at least there is a better way. All I can say is that this kind of behavior, in reality, exudes a sense of innocence and stupidity, pure and decisive killing, I might as well play games.

I can only accept that the protagonist is selfish, but I really can't accept that the protagonist is unscrupulous. He can ignore death, but he cannot be a perpetrator. He can fish for counter-attacks, but he cannot take the initiative to kill people and seize treasures.

Faster and faster, all the votes are given to you, some of the original works have not been read, some have been read, overall good reviews, the plot has been greatly changed and it is not too long, and it ends comfortably and neatly.

To be honest, I can't understand the protagonist's destruction of the Wudang clan. Is the Wudang Party an obstacle to the protagonist that must be eradicated?

The first few copies are very good, but the subsequent routines are infinitely useful. We need to watch the wonderful plot of this criticism and criticism. I'm not here to see you scolding me.

When I saw the back, I looked like a lunatic.

Recommended by others, I enjoyed watching it at first, until I got to Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty and Shi Zhixuan, I was bored to death, and there were so many beeps, it made me sick to death 🤢, fuck

Has the author ever thought about a question? Even if you abolish all martial arts. Even the secret books were destroyed. As soon as you disappear. Others can still practice again. Why? Find out about tomb robbing. In order to prevent the disappearance of martial arts secrets, the martial arts sect. It is very likely that a few more copies will be made and buried underground or in tombs. Then when you disappear and dig it out, you can still practice again.

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I mainly only watched the plot of Dongfang Invincible, which was very well written, but the post-processing was a bit sloppy, and I couldn't stand the other plots.

Asking for more refinement

Ps. I only watched Snow Volume

Seeing that there is a source of disaster that will bring disaster to all the heavens started with Li Xiangyi, does it have anything to do with the author?

I feel that the style of this Eastern Invincible is similar to that of Summit. I like them all

Is there a heroine? Who is it? Can any Taoist friend give me a hint?