Dafeng: Demon-Sealing Sword Soul, Roaming the Heavens

Those who write this kind of humanistic novel are most annoyed by the protagonist who doesn't know the plot. Don't know anything

The protagonist looks like he knows the plot but doesn't know anything about it, which makes me feel uncomfortable watching it.

Either you accept the well-known female characters in the original work, or if you don't accept them, downplay the writing and write less, at least don't write about the love scenes between the female characters and other male characters. If you write about Xu Qi'an and Huaiqing bitch, I'm fine, because I don't like these two. If you write about Xu Qi'an and Su Su, I'm just a little unhappy, because this female ghost has no impression. If you write about Xu Qi'an and the nine-tailed demon fox, then I can't stand it. Because I really like this 😭 and I don't want to read any further. Goodbye

Regarding the improvement of the Dafeng system, we need to seek your opinions. The system of selling newspapers feels weird. The martial artist is almost cut into a dog in the end, and the Taoist priest's fighting method is also very simple. In this book, I will strengthen the capabilities of each system. If you have any comments and ideas, everyone can provide them.

I read your profile. There are several worlds that I really want to see, and there are several that I really find disgusting, including the original god Zhu Xian and so on. I hate Genshin Impact because the style of painting doesn't match. I hate Zhu Xian Dou Po Jiang Ye because it's such a mess. And judging from my 20 years of reading, this book must be a eunuch. Even if you insist on finishing this book, your results will not be much better. I hope the author can slap me in the face. Excellent finished copy. These days, any piece of shit about anti-theft and anti-theft can be made into a high-quality product. Don't tell me you can't do it.

I'm having fun with Akaashi, who had a stoic and aloof persona in front of him, but there were a lot of good girls around him who didn't want him, and then he suddenly went to be a ladybug in Tiangangden, and he said the quality was not as good as that of Dafeng, so you still want to be a ladybug? If you want to be a ladybug, you should have told me earlier. Why don't you go to Da Feng in the beginning? Classic sudden illness, Geneva, waste of time

Super-grade can be equal to Dou Sage, but is it too defiant to say that Dou Sheng is equal to Heaven-shading Saint? Discussions on forums and many astronomical texts tend to favor Dou Emperor = Saint. Both of them are clearly described in the original text as scenes with explosive star-level combat power. I would like to state in advance that I don't want to brag about any works, but when writing about astronomy, I have to be more rigorous in uniting the combat capabilities. As long as the differences are not too big, readers will turn a blind eye.

Scattered, chaotic. The plot is told in segments, and the skill of spacing blank lines needs to be practiced again.

Personally, I think if Li Xingyun doesn't wake up, just leave him alone. Mud can't hold up a wall.

The protagonist has a little bit of a nanny, and the halo of intelligence is too serious. The female supporting character has no brains to criticize.