Dafeng: Demon-Sealing Sword Soul, Roaming the Heavens

What I hate most about multiverse fanfiction is protagonists who are completely clueless about the plot. They know absolutely nothing.

The protagonist acts like he knows the plot but doesn't, which is frustrating to watch.

For well-known female characters from the original work, either include them or downplay their presence in your writing, at least avoid romantic relationships between them and other male characters. If you write about Xu Qi'an and Huai Qing (the bitch), I'm okay with it because I don't like those two.

Regarding the improvement of the Dafeng system, we need to solicit everyone's opinions. The newspaper-selling system felt odd; the martial arts masters were practically nerfed to a pulp later on, and the Taoists' fighting style was rather monotonous. In this book, I will strengthen the abilities of each system within the Great Feng Dynasty. Any opinions or thoughts are welcome.

After reading your synopsis, I can say there are several worlds I genuinely want to read, but several others I find utterly disgusting, including Jade Dynasty and Genshin Impact. I dislike Genshin Impact because the art style clashes with it. I dislike Jade Dynasty, Battle Through the Heavens, and Nightfall because they're so overused.

Holy crap, this is the best I could do! He was all that aloof, detached persona, surrounded by tons of great girls, and then suddenly he's in *Tian Gang Zhuan* playing a ladybug, complaining the quality isn't as good as *Da Feng*. Why did he even choose that role? If you wanted to be a ladybug, why didn't you say so earlier? Why didn't you join *Da Feng* at the start? This classic character suddenly malfunctioned. Geneva, what a waste of time.

Super Grade can be equivalent to Dou Sheng, but is it too overpowered for Dou Sheng to be equivalent to the Sage of Shrouding the Heavens? Discussions on Tieba and many Zhutian Tianwen all tend to equate Dou Di with Sage, since both of them are clearly described in the original text as having battle power exceeding star levels.

Scattered and disorganized. The plot is told in segments, and the skill of properly spacing out lines needs further practice.

Personally, I think if Li Xingyun doesn't realize his own mistakes, just leave him be; he's hopeless.

The protagonist is somewhat like a nanny, and his intelligence aura is too severe. The female supporting character is mindlessly clingy, having feelings for him after just one meeting, and throwing herself at him after just two.