What Kind of Immortality Can You Do If You Don't Start Cultivating?

I just want to say that what you have done recently is not good, which is equivalent to making a big mess that is very uncomfortable and goes against the normal system. I can watch even the interstellar insects cultivating immortality, but I don't even understand the basics of immortality itself. From the moment I started to question the cultivation itself, I fell into a vicious circle of nihilism.

Boring, the snake book is good in the early stages, but too sloppy later on. Many of the pictures in this book are boring.

The story is very interesting, breaking away from traditional routines, but the plot is not serious. The whole story seems to have almost no rationality, and none of the characters stand up. The whole story looks like the protagonist's obscenity. It's hard for me to hold back from watching at a glance or jumping around. The mental disorder is too serious.

It's not very good. I obviously feel that the design of the worldview and practice system is very casual. The basic focus is that the protagonist develops plug-ins and then experiments with the supporting characters. After the supporting characters experiment and there are no problems, they immediately take them back and evaluate them as 10% disdain. Then in the process, the supporting characters repeat the same old "how powerful the road is at their feet" and then become stronger on their own. Currently, I don't feel that the protagonist has any personality charm. He only thinks about cheats all day long and does not practice cultivation. Moreover, the process of distributing cheats is also very casual. If the supporting characters are not smart enough, they will definitely start to doubt the people around them and then the protagonist. For example, at the level of the protagonist, he pretends to be a formation master to fool his senior sister before he is discovered, which can be said to be very witty. In general, it is a fun novel. If you don't take it seriously, it will be quite enjoyable. If you read the novel for a long time, you may not be able to stand it.

There is a bowl of soup in the Tuoshen Blade, which is generally okay. I eat a piece of meat from time to time. The Greedy Snake is boiled water with sugar. It feels a little sweet but only a little sweet. This one is boiled water in boiled water. There are seasonings next to it that you can only look at and cannot add. I feel that it is a pity for the God of Tai Sui. It continues the taste of the Blade. Unfortunately, it collapsed in the middle and stopped abruptly.

I just read my brother's book and thought of the previous one. The previous one really had potential. Alas, it's a pity. Snake is almost fully booked. When I followed the lead, I felt it was very attractive and the concept was quite clever. I feel that if I write more solidly, I can get a high-quality product.

To be honest, this beginning feels similar to the most exciting parts of the previous books. I feel like I can really turn a corner this time.

The latest ones are all duplicates. I watch Bull Demon

I've read the author's three books: The Old Ones, Panda Martial Arts and Snake. I read the beginning of the Blade book and didn't read the others if I wasn't interested. I found a problem with the author. I feel that the author cares too much about the martial arts philosophy he upholds, which caused the combat power system of the work to be extremely unclear in the later stages. This has seriously affected my reading experience. The author does not have a standard combat power system. There are always supporting characters who suddenly realize and then quickly reach the peak of combat power in the latest chapter. Once or twice is fine, but when you have more, it becomes a big, big poisonous point. 1-For example, among the old rulers, any believer of the protagonist who comes to the protagonist's era ten thousand years later can beat up Dagon's level. Your increased combat power has caused... There are also several humans who always have their combat power skyrocketed after enlightenment... It seems that the protagonist has lived in vain all these years. 2-For example, a panda's martial arts world looks pretty good in the front, but after entering the new era, it is simply a piece of shit. In the previous chapter, the protagonist had a hard time fighting a mass-produced robot, but in the next chapter, a huge storm directly hit the enemy's base camp, and the combat power was too mysterious and blurry! 3- Not to mention Snake, the main character also starts to collapse as soon as he wakes up. Especially the evil god of the prototype Four Vendors said how awesome he is in Star Sea, but later on, he is just a mini-boss in Star Sea. Your combat power collapses again, this time even more completely. I have only read less than ten chapters of this book, which is not to my taste. I hope the author will learn from the lesson in the next book and stop practicing martial arts to become stupid🧠. Plan your world view and hierarchy system. Of course, the story is the most important thing. Hey ~ I hope the author can give a reply after reading it and improve it. The author will also succeed in enlightenment and let the next book take off!

After reading most of it, my evaluation is that it uses the method of landscape painting to draw color pictures. So I was deeply influenced by the book Ancient Snake. . There are many strange things in this book, which can be easily explained by converting the identity of the protagonist into an existence like an ancient snake.

Unlimited streaming without opening new copies is more interesting. I also want to see Chu Nan and Yu Boyang continue to form and arrange together.

Wouldn't it be nice to go back and write a Shan Yuan drama honestly to compete with the style of Saba?

It's too tacky, there's nothing exciting at the beginning, and the character design is too stretched.

Although I haven't ordered much or spent much money, I still have to complain. I don't quite understand why I am an old author who has written 4 books. Why do I still have so many basic and fatal poisonous points? I write whatever comes to my mind The psychological changes and conflicts of the characters are illogical and meaningless. It is too blunt to say that they are captured alive. It is too blunt to say that it humiliates him. It is too blunt to tell the sighs and realizations of different groups before the end of the Dharma. It is too blunt to be grand and devoid of emotions. And in-depth themes The battle scenes are written like a novice. After it was put on the shelves, the battle in the Wild Boar Forest was barely considered a high-level battle. Compared with the cockfight, the latter had more graphics and action The design of the intellectual battle was even worse Anyway, after reading it now, I feel that I didn't write it seriously. It was just a fee for the contract. The quality was high after it was put on the shelves but before it was put on the shelves. I knew that my plot and writing were poor, so I should have read more settings. However, I often strayed away from the settings and put aside my biggest highlight.

It was a bit interesting for the protagonist to hang up and explore the world at the beginning. Later, when the magic path was developed and offline, he didn't even develop the hangup. The protagonist hung up in the novice village every day Panda, Chu Nan and the white-knife protagonist all had spontaneous motivation to become stronger. When playing dungeons, Pipi Shrimp was pushed by bubbles behind it. And once upon a time it was still a road movie, where you would have a new life by running all the way. This innocent game hangs up in Novice Village, and the villain can't even find the protagonist. The protagonist has not fought a single game so far. The feeling of martial arts before was almost gone.

Brothers and sisters, you are updating. If nothing happens, please post a single chapter to explain the current situation. Don't let everyone worry blindly.

It's very good, it's a piece of imaginative and fun writing. Although some behavioral plots seem illogical, Leziwen and Pianziwen do not need this. Asking is the setting.

I feel like whether I can finish the book is a question, I'll just wait and see 🙂

I read every one of my brother's books, and Pipi Xia is my favorite. Now it's too confusing, with too many supporting characters, and the main character is less exciting. Now I read novels just to relax and be happy. It's too confusing, there's nothing exciting, the main character is not very good, and the supporting characters are mostly 25-year-olds, so I can't watch the rest of it.

What happened to Brother Du Kang recently? Why haven't there been any updates in the last two chapters?

After reading this book now, I think it is still okay, at least I can continue writing it normally. But you don't feel any passion or laughter? Will the protagonist's role be a little less? Although it is a behind-the-scenes plot, we can also arrange a plot where two groups of people meet and various accidents occur. So far, the protagonist is on one side and the supporting characters are on the other. The plot of Zhao Wuwang's entry into the mortal world should be reduced to three or five chapters. The middle section is really a bit long and I have no interest in following it. Lao Li is a pure traveling frog. He will send you a mission and bring you a video clip in a while. It may have been a long time since I watched it and I can't remember the details, but that's generally how it felt in the end. In the past, this kind of simple main plot worked because the side plots were exciting enough. It could be divided into a volume in the middle to form a long story of a god, and finally it could be concluded in a short story. Right now... Just, it almost makes sense. It is indeed a bit inappropriate to write a long article in this state. I personally think it would be... Better if it were written as a fan? After all, the writing skills and book friends have accumulated here, and everyone can accept it. It's not like I haven't written it before, and it can solve the current problem of procrastination in the main plot. Or you can use stupid methods to imitate the previous state, forcibly limiting the length of your content to prevent it from happening for a few days. I personally don't know much about writing, so I can just complain a few words for fun. In addition, the author has been in poor health in the previous paragraph, and the witch doctor's treatment methods are a bit disappointing. I also hope that the author can take care of his health so that he can update stably. With all the above, I wish you all good luck in martial arts.

Why do you keep repeating yourself in the last few chapters?

Don't wait any longer. As I said, I went to recuperate from my injury, my train of thought was broken, I couldn't write anymore, so I cut the book. Free chapters will be released in the future, but it will be a long time later.

I think it's well written, why doesn't anyone read it?

The author gives me a suggestion. Your writing is very interesting. This is true, but you still need to eat if you are a niche audience You read Qidian fantasy novels, do you read them? Just set up a template, follow your ideas, follow that template, add your own ideas, and apply it again, it should be much better than what you are doing now, completely following your ideas.

Why are the two new chapters the previous ones?

Hello author, I am a fan of your novel The Old Ones, but I have a problem, which is the plot of Octopus Head and Shimakaze. From my personal perspective, Shimakaze and Octopus Head in the early stage are cp-like and unclear in their love for each other. But why are they separated later and the ending is all puzzling to me? If possible, could the author tell me why you wrote it this way? And why was it written like this at that time. (I felt very irritable after reading this)

I thought it was pretty good when I read it, but there was always a problem with the update. There were only a few updates, and the update got stuck and I had to read it again the next day. It really affected the reading experience!

Speaking of which, with the external incarnation method + transformation method, can I play Endless God of War?

I've given you recommendations and monthly passes, come on