Extreme World, Draw Cards to Become a Saint

It's quite good to write about gangsters, it's ruthless and refreshing, but unfortunately I don't like to see a dirty crotch, even if it's someone else's cuckold, I can't stand it. And it's not the right time to brush off the edge. In a life-and-death crisis, a policeman will jump out at any time, only to end up in heat.

I couldn't stand it after reading dozens of chapters. The values ​​​​are all rubbish. They start with single digits and increase to hundreds of points, with no effect at all. I drew a bunch of purple cards and gold cards, and the various special effects were superimposed, but I couldn't get past any level. It took a lot of effort to hit the stone diamond with one seal in the arena. What's the use in the later stage? Logically speaking, the earlier it is, the better it should be. And the weirdest thing is that Shi Jingang physically beats others with fear, and the protagonist has a bonus value and a golden defense card, but it doesn't seem to have any use. It seems that no matter how many cards are drawn, the actual effect is never shown. The plot relies more on the defense

I saw Chapter 27, The core of this book is survival + becoming stronger, The reason for becoming stronger is that we, the ants at the bottom, have no one to rely on, no one to pity, only self-improvement. The way to express this reason is to describe the competition, suppression, and plunder between the same class and the bottom, and describe the oppression between different classes... Describe suffering, no opinions, but always the same The routine is a bit aesthetically tired. When you see someone with a better status, you will most likely look down on the protagonist, even the maid. When you see someone with a similar status, there is a high probability that a villain will get his way and bully the protagonist. When a villain succeeds, he will suddenly have a backer and his class will jump. The protagonist has a backer, but it seems that there is no class jump. He is still looked down upon and provoked wherever he goes. It's so strange.

You said that when you write porn, you should write porn properly, and write seriously, but it happens that the character is both serious and upright. He is being chased and is about to die. When he asks his wife for help, he describes the soles of his feet for a long time. I usually deliver things to my wife's backyard, but I pretend to be a gentleman again, and Huang doesn't write anymore.

Nowadays, tens of thousands of taels and tens of thousands of taels are drawn, and then no sound is heard when it is sent out. It's better to use them all to draw the base card pool and pile up the values. It doesn't feel any better now. The evil spirit has no ability to solve it. Then, the strength gap between the higher-level warriors is still a mystery so far. The protagonist seems to be crazy to the limit. It feels like watching a clown, which is getting more and more boring.

When will I take down the mistress? Looking forward to it

This made me laugh so hard. I just saw another author opening a small account to comment deliberately. Why did you delete it? Don't delete it and let the author add more content to you 🤭

There are too many miscellaneous things. I can't see any progress in martial arts. Drawing cards is useless. Purple cards and gold cards feel useless. Moreover, there is no sense of satisfaction in drawing good cards. There are neither moves nor routines in martial arts. Fighting is purely hand-to-hand combat. The martial arts cards seem to be of no use at least after reading 80 chapters (the protagonist is like the Hulk). The world view is unreasonable and weak. It is a world full of demons and ghosts. It is clear that martial arts routines are ineffective for them. There are also insect plagues at every turn. Demons slaughter cities and kill people. The so-called Northern Great Witch Cult, in addition to controlling a few witchcraft (and the success rate is extremely low, cannot Success is a setting that ranges from missing arms and legs to death) without any special abilities (or spells) and the ability to deal with evil monsters (faced with the haunted Red Candle Alley, wandering Taoist priests can come up with constructive solutions and methods. As the master of the witchcraft religion, The priest is at a loss what to do? Is this reasonable?) Normally, other novels would at least explain that the city would have stronger guardians who could at least suppress the evil spirits instead of allowing the city to be massacred (the insect plague that was easily destroyed in the city was not solved but only the insects were mentioned). The disaster is over and there is no more content? At least it must be solved by the court, otherwise how can humans survive in the world created by the author? ), Killing tens of thousands casually, this setting at least makes it impossible for humans in the novel to survive. The main world in which the protagonist lives does not have the slightest trace of high martial arts or even immortal martial arts. The protagonist's golden finger has a weak sense of existence, and there is no sense of satisfaction or achievement in drawing cards. No matter how much investment is made, it is just mediocre.

The way it is written is so disgusting. It is obviously a very serious scene, so it has to be written in a pornographic way. For example, for example, all the big leaders of the company are having a meeting. In a very serious conference room, the protagonist poops in the corner, and then it is described emphatically. This kind of writing makes me sick.

It's all booked, open the skylight and speak frankly. , I just came here for my wife 🙂

The Master's Wife hasn't appeared in almost hundreds of chapters, so I caught up to the latest chapter just for this eloquence. I can't bear it any longer.

I really beg you, why does a two-meter strong man have to be so handsome? When I saw this thing, I thought of the Danmei comics that a two-meter strong man like a captain can be so beautiful.

I was poisoned in the first chapter. After traveling for ten years, Goldfinger didn't wake up. Goldfinger woke up after hurting someone. If you killed someone and Goldfinger woke up, I believe it. He hasn't killed anyone in ten years. I believe it. But for a fierce and fierce gangster who hasn't hurt anyone in ten years, is he becoming a holy mother by talking? It would be better for you to be the Holy Virgin Mary. You are so powerful that even Buddha would give up his position to you.

The author's writing skills are poor, the plot is fragmented, the protagonist seems to be schizophrenic, and the story is inconsistent. I can't even write clearly about upgrading, fighting monsters, and changing maps. The number of words is abysmal.

Garbage Classification, Chapter 7, I, an ordinary person, all know about Zhanzhuang. We all know that whether we are learning martial arts or fighting, we must have a stable foothold.

Although I knew this book was rubbish, I didn't expect it to be so rubbish that I would kill people and still have the time to chat with him and ask nonsense questions about this and that.

The added attributes are the same as those without them. Why did you write them out?

After reading twenty or thirty chapters, I'm still a bit of a loser. Internet articles should be written in a way that makes people feel happy and happy to read them. The more they read, the more frustrated they become. The more they read, the more they look like a loser. So what the hell are they doing reading Internet articles?

I've tried the poison, and I can't stand it until chapter 36.

Song Yun and that Miao Miao were a bit confused. First of all, Song Yun did this for the sake of martial arts, which was a bit inconsistent with his previous personality. According to my understanding of the protagonist, shouldn't he be disdainful of doing such a thing? Either have a showdown with Song Yun or get rid of this card pool. I really don't understand this kind of treatment 😅. The second is Miaomiao. It's not surprising that Song Qi was not killed, but how can you explain that Miaomiao was not killed? You said you were going to kill them earlier and then let them go? Anyway, I really don't understand these two operations 🤔

I think you are a coward in the world of martial arts, bullying the weak and afraid of the strong. You can't beat others even if your numerical value is a hundred times higher than others, so why are you smoking? You'd better die soon, and you'd be useless if you were alive.

Accepted, the heroine insists on setting up a second-hand one? I want to find an author who likes second-hand stuff so much on a blind date.

I can only say that the writing is average. How can this level of writing be considered a high-quality product? The main poisonous point is the golden finger. A golden finger that relies on money to upgrade does not have everything to be exchanged for money. Even the golden finger does not have an outside pill to work. There is also a realm breakthrough, but the basic value is not added? Then why did you get so many basic values ​​in the first place? Moreover, those basic values ​​are not expressive even if they are increased, which is equivalent to being useless. Your article has been expanded with AI, and you are reluctant to use AI to run one. Then there is his entry. It can only be said that it is equivalent to the special effects after skill upgrades like other proficiency panels. The second one is about women. I know that you have nothing to write about, and you want to be interesting and exciting, so you suddenly insert a description of her body parts throughout the article. Author, you don't think it would be exciting to write like this, right? It can only be said to be indifferent. It makes people feel boring. You might as well not write it, or you might as well polish the entry points and feelings of both parties. Or just write about the benefits and be straightforward. There are no other major faults, and there are even some places that are a bit likable. But it's the two points above that I can't stand. The first point is the upgrade flow, which is Goldfinger. The second point is not very good, it is too abrupt, and people feel that the style of the painting has changed when I read it. This is a personal opinion. I mainly posted the discussion because I read the discussion and saw that the writing was acceptable before adding it to the bookshelf. He was tricked into killing him. 🙂

The routine of drawing cards is quite interesting, but it's a pity that the author has adjusted the anti-theft, and the comments seem to say that the latter part is not very good, so I am too lazy to look for resources everywhere and forget about it. Anti-theft is really a double-edged sword. If it is written well, it can increase subscriptions, but if it is poorly written, it will even lose some popularity.

If you want to write Jidao Wen, just write normally, and also include some descriptions of Liu Beiwen, which is really disappointing. What are you reading about Jidao Wen? It means "killing people" and "eating people". Due to the superposition of power, the protagonist has transformed into other species and turned into a monster. "Killing" is your method of obtaining resources. How do you handle it? "Eating people" refers to some resources you obtain by means of means. Whether it can reflect the feeling of pleasure is to accelerate the trend of the protagonist turning into a monster.

It's so well written that it blocks people's way of making money. It's been criticized maliciously. It's really unbearable for an author to open a small account and scold me. Let's set some thresholds.

There are just a bunch of attributes at the beginning, so you are immediately advised to quit.

The writing is too messy, the plot is broken, the characters are broken, the combat power is broken, all kinds of things are broken It's the same as not adding the attributes, so why did you write this? The plot has no logic, and the characters are messed up.

All votes are given. This book maintains this quality. It will definitely become a god. The step-by-step world view is really good. Gunmei's style, no, Gunmei is not as good as what you wrote. Except for the fighting, it is not as good as Gunmei. Everything else has surpassed him. He has gone further and further on the road of mecha. He has no hope. Be sure to write well and improve the outline. Don't write and write without an outline. When fighting, learn more from Gunmei. Literary people. Just borrow it. Give me more than him. I will give you the ticket to keep this book. I will give it to you. Come on, show off the year.

Since chapter 250, you've been writing with bean bags, right? Wow, this smells like AI. Even if you change it.