
Black Pine Archives
黑松档案
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 52k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Future World
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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22Chapters
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Brief review
Hello author, because I am interested in the title and classification of the book, I clicked in and read the first three chapters for a while. Because I felt it was a pity, I would like to make some immature suggestions. I hope you won't be angry. First of all, your writing is very good and your writing style is capable. This shows that you have good text reading and organizing skills. However, the story should still be a little foreshadowed. The content of the first three chapters is too urgent. Secondly, the author's perspective and the reader's perspective are different, and some parts need to be explained to the audience slowly. Of course, it's my fault that I rushed here to give a brief review instead of reading the entire story. For now, I am very optimistic about this book, I just hope you can adjust the content a little bit, and I hope you can become a hit.