The Mountain-Rain Jiao

The writing is very good, and it looks like I have been a dragon. It is very real, and it is completely consistent with my experience. My memory was a little weak at the time, but now I can remember it all.

The core contradiction is that after leaving the bottom, the ecology of monsters has no reference and is purely imaginary. The author has no comparison and can only refer to real interpersonal relationships to write about the ecology of monsters. The monsters are becoming more and more human-like, and their attractiveness is greatly reduced. In the end, they can only create racial conflicts and dominate the world. To put it bluntly, the ending is hasty The essence of the alien beast style is all about the struggle to evolve in the early and mid-term Of course, there are also weird things like the interface, which is indeed a beast. The problem is that once the logic of the beast is established, the plot will continue to repeat the process of fighting for territory and training. After watching it twice, I will get tired of it, and the plot is too small. It's easy to fly to the sky with speed, don't even think about depth, it's destined not to leave too many people So Alien Beasts is a thankless genre. The balance between human nature and animality is too difficult to grasp. More is too sensible, less is too barbaric. The advantage is that there is a fixed audience. This group of aliens Dragons are the most popular readers among beast readers. However, the eunuch rate of dragon novels is probably among the best among all genres. This is only possible with the help of decades of rich data like DND. It is conceivable how difficult it is to write about strange beasts. Once you have written it, the results will be stuck in ten thousand books, which is sad.

Hold on, the cultivation of immortality from beasts to monsters in the classical cultivation of immortals and beasts is a major attraction. Although the ink is stained, it is also real. It is a very enjoyable process to create something from scratch, so the ink is not real ink, but there are too few updates. Hehe, you know 🤓

I don't know why book friends are so obsessed with the name "Golden Four". Black Snake, as a heterogeneous adult spirit, has a slow growth in intelligence (reflected in the original text that it cannot remember people and things). Gold is born with water, and the five elements are good. "Four" refers to Chi Ke, Fox, Weasel, and Black Snake. The experience of living and practicing together with the four friends is the most important memory of the protagonist at the beginning of his practice, and it is the imprint of Black Snake's life. The name Jinsi is completely based on Black Snake's own experience. It is a self-evidence of the continuous growth of life. If a person shows things that are not composed of his own cognitive experience, it will inevitably be somewhat distorted. In human society, names are given by elders. The protagonist does not have this interpersonal relationship. At this stage, a name based on his own experience is actually the best.

Is the author part-time or busy? Are you serious about the update speed? Even if I recommend your book to people, people will run away as soon as they read a chapter of your book in two days The writing is slightly poisonous, slow-paced, less exciting, and the story refers too much to reality. The atmosphere of Chi Ke's story is the best, one person and three demons are carefree and free, without any worries. At this time, it is a pure animal snake, corresponding to the snake's infancy The Palace Master and He Ning provided almost selfless care and guidance for the semester. Snake has learned a lot. As long as he follows the teacher's instructions, he will get positive feedback. However, the physical experience is worse than the previous stage. The author is too watery. There are good daily routines but few, and there are more meaningless daily routines that are boring to the point of dozing off. At this time, Snake is like a newly enlightened child, corresponding to Snake's semester   Spoiler Warning Spoilers below The story enters the next stage after He Ning's death. The palace master also left. Snake's role as leader and master has left. Snake begins to face the world of immortality alone. However, Snake is already very strong in the village at this time and no one can bully him. Snake can slowly learn to see. It is not yet sure what stage this corresponds to. There is not much change from the previous stage except that he is a little more lonely The summary is that alien beasts provide food and grass, write about beasts and enjoy themselves leisurely, write about beasts and learn from people to stretch their crotch. Of course, this is not entirely the author's fault. It is too difficult to write about a peaceful and comfortable life, and the destiny of the tallest mountain is also difficult to guarantee. Finally, your update is really profitable

Does anyone know how to get a refund for a single book? Originally, I had accepted the name Jinsi, but I had to emphasize it, and a lot of people tried not to think too deeply about the name. I had to provoke you, you have a temper, and I still have a temper. I am here to read and have fun, not to suffer your temper.

What the hell are these 183 and 184 written about? Is there any point in constantly writing about this little female viewer? I have realized the importance of the protagonist before. When the protagonist is about to be captured and enslaved, I don't say a word for the protagonist. What else is there to write about? The protagonist and the female viewer looked at each other for a long time and lowered their heads silently. Let me put it bluntly, this woman is the protagonist. What status does the protagonist have in his heart? The protagonist protects this viewer because the former viewer and He Ning have already taken this viewer as their own. But where did this woman come from? What kind of relationship does she have with the protagonist? The protagonist is so interested in her approval. Do you want to start a heartbreaking sadomasochism with the viewer? Are you not portraying the protagonist as a loveless SB? The protagonist was deliberately made pitiful. You want to say that the practitioners are powerful, but the female protagonist has no say. Then why did she write a sentence later to force the male protagonist and the villain to retreat? It is simply inexplicable. What kind of ancient female channel routine is written here? , Have you changed your world view? The prince with an army of 100,000 was easily captured with a single edict. It was also written that the female viewer shouted "enough is enough", saying that she was cold and decisive, and controlled the whole audience. When the author wrote this, she felt happy when she wrote it. What kind of strength does she have? She said When did the words become so weighty, and the villain couldn't go to the backyard of the watch because of his identity. If the villain was not of such high quality, why did he want to arrest the male lead? Or was he also fascinated by the female watcher and wanted to express himself? After all, this guy can take down dozens of defeated troops. It can't be said that he is not strong enough. The rescued people have also been controlled by the will of heaven and turned into Konoha's unruly people. They have changed their faces towards the protagonist who saved his life. Be careful, aren't they all SB? You can analyze that the protagonist can control the sky thunder and Yang Shen forms. What kind of treacherous and evil evil spirit is there? Also, after the protagonist is stabbed in the back, there are frequent golden sentences. One thing is good, good is the blood of the male protagonist who broke off the marriage decades ago. The only difference is thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi. It is also in contrast to the pure character before. Also, he wanted to go to school but was rejected, so the protagonist was described. The writing is very pitiful. The protagonist is also a great demon who has been practicing for nearly 500 years. He is just a child in Yin Shen, not a child in mind. Even if he becomes wise late, he must have lived for at least seventy or eighty years after becoming wise. How could he be bullied like this? If you say that he abides by the rules and does not want to use extraordinary means to force others, then if you fall into a dream, just show yourself as a saint. Next, and then say that there is a special child who needs reading guidance, and then the protagonist brings money to trade. Isn't it over? I don't believe that the protagonist is not allowed in. After all, the reason why the protagonist is not allowed in is because the protagonist looks like a child and does not take him seriously. In this way, the teacher will not suffer a loss, and it does not count as the protagonist using extraordinary means to bully others. I really liked this book before. After all, there are very few good novels with monsters as the protagonists. I really don't want to see the author ruin such a good description. I hope the author can take this book seriously.

I think it's weird. He has become a yang god, but his intelligence is so low. Logically speaking, if you can become a yin god, your intelligence should be high. And I found that the author is particularly fond of women. It's not that women are bad, but, how should I put it? There are only women around, not a single man

Friendly reminder: In the last book, the author's age increased from 18 to 25, with an average of 59,000 words per year But this one is destined to be more difficult to produce.

Just like the title, this book actually has a big problem. Think about it, it's 180,000 words long. Apart from Chi Ke, which character in this book left a deep impression on people? Including He Ning, who is now with the protagonist, they don't have any characteristics. They are not as impressive as the few characters. I was quite surprised when I first read this book. However, the more I read, the more bland it became. The snake demon who practices thunder is obviously a gimmick, but now, it seems that this gimmick has not been used.