The Trainee on an Upward Journey

I can see a little bit of Shao He's charm. He is full of ability to kneel down in seconds, and he is full of the holy body of running trains and running business. What he lacks is a sense of responsibility and a sense of belonging to a group. As expected, it is as expected. It is a bit like the flavor of Spicy Teacher GTO, where people with flaws are trained together to become independent. But the pace is really not fast enough. It's too fast to bring the characters to life, and we have to advance the main plot, so we can only add more to avoid the negative impact.

I feel like the fantasy is okay, but I can't tell anything from the hundreds of thousands of words of fantasy. I want to save up and read it.

Uh-huh, I finally finished the painting.

I picked it up from the previous book. The writing and style are very unremarkable. When I'm not in love, I'm a god. When I'm in love, I'm so angry at the keyboard... Every time, I love the bookshelf +1 → Monthly ticket → Raise a child → Sudden illness → Already ordered and not read → I'll be confused by the ending → I'll be confused by the bad comments

Reasons for the author's recent lack of updates: a. I have a relationship with Xiaoyang and I have no time to write b. I was dumped and I am not in the mood to write c. I have poor grades and have no motivation to write.

The writer who saw the author today said that it is really sad. This may be the first time in all my years of reading from Qidian. I don't know if the author is someone else's trumpet. When I first saw the previous book, Rabbit Officer, I thought this author was really great. Although the ending was a bit rushed and not perfect, it was indeed a rare good book. Later, I accidentally saw this book on the new book list. I didn't realize it was the author's book at first. I just thought the writing was really good, the narrative was really interesting, and it looked so comfortable. Unlike other popular online articles that rely on imagination to attract people, this book's writing style and plot were enough to excite me, just like when I first saw the previous book. I'm equally excited because the author's books really make me feel fresh, which is the scarcity of freshness in the current trend of increasingly serious homogenization of online literature. I really hate books that don't seem fresh to me at first glance, so I rarely read some platinum-rated books by great writers. Most of them give up after reading the first few volumes. It is getting harder and harder to find a good book at Qidian. Perhaps it is because there are fewer and fewer authors willing to seriously polish their stories and characters. Although it would be a bit shameless to say this, I really hope that the author will not cut the book or give up polishing because of the current poor results, and continue to finish the book seriously, so that I can see the ending of the characters in this story. Thank you very much 🙏

It's a pity that the previous book was written quite well in my opinion.

The protagonist rescued a spiritual girl and let the spiritual girl who was fooling around outside enter the company. The protagonist's father works at the protagonist's construction site. The person in charge of the construction site is the vice president of the protagonist's company. The protagonist's company refuses to pay wages. It turns out that the father of the spiritual sister has not received the money and has been asking for wages. Moreover, the safety of the construction site has not been improved. After the protagonist recruits the spiritual sister into the company, the vice president of the company uses the threat of the spiritual sister to force his father to continue working. Because the spiritual sister's father forced his daughter to work in order for his daughter to continue to stay in the company and have a decent job, and then died. Then! The protagonist also has to do psychological work on the spiritual girl and communicate with her family members! In my opinion, he is the person indirectly killed by the protagonist! What a disgusting plot!

To be honest, I saw it from after getting promoted to before starting a business. I feel that maybe the pressure of performance put too much pressure on the author, and there was too much noise (too few cool points, not enough explosive stuff, etc.). At least for me personally, the content of this part is not as good as the previous ones. It has changed from the romance and workplace writing that the author is good at to the business and war writing like children's play house. It gives me the feeling that there is no new idea in the cliche plot of the classic dian! I think this is part of the reason for the poor results! The slow pace at the beginning, which is more realistic, drives away some readers who like to read more fun: The content of business wars that are like children playing house these days, drives away the remaining readers who prefer more delicate stories. Of course, no matter how you write a classic and cool story, the author is still under control of the overall plot and has an outline! I just hope that the author can clarify the user portrait in the future, find the right target readers, and write a good story. 🙏🏻🙏🏻

I just read the first chapter, something is wrong, the heroine?