My Wife Is Not a Monster

I changed the book after reading Chapter 54. This book gave me a strange feeling. It's cool to say that the hero's wife at the beginning is the strongest, and she gave him a bunch of treasures to fully protect her. The author of Sese is guaranteed as a landed author. Let's face it, the author's style is that of a female author. The male protagonist is submissive, neither taking the initiative nor refusing. The only time he took the initiative was tricked by the villain, and in the end it was the eldest wife who came to the rescue. Except for the eldest wife, the other two female protagonists who had a relationship repeatedly emphasized that they had no love for the male protagonist, it was just a transaction, and they had to write something similar to Yue Piao. The writing is also a bit awkward. I don't know why every sentence is followed by a sentence explaining why the character said that sentence. There are not so many notes in drama scripts. The part about rescuing the wife was even more embarrassing. First, the wife's own mental journey, then the wife's explanation to the protagonist, and finally the eldest wife watching and commenting from the sky. It's really overwhelming. I don't understand how to write novels and Liu Bei, but I think the author still hasn't broken out of some habits of writing about Liu Bei's period. Of course, when you write about Liu Bei, you can write a lot about the psychological activities of the heroine and the psychological tangle of the wife's first wife and son. But when you write a novel, you can't just write about these things.

How can I subscribe to this book's group? Can I get a fan to join the group?

Come on, lamentation, if you don't come on, I'll feed you grass

1. There should be less green turtles. The homogeneity from the characters to the plot is too serious, and the author especially likes to give these characters a lot of scenes. Maybe it is because the readers feel more comfortable when the three-dimensional points are slapped in the face, but it is a pity that the homogeneity is too serious and many people will only think it is watery 😅 It is recommended to leave one as a clown to provide laughter and the rest can be shaped as a traditional villain. 2. Get rid of the emotional hierarchy 😅 The number of female characters' roles can be different, but their emotional treatment is obviously higher or lower. This is quite awkward in a harem novel😟 Especially the author, you like to make the main wife absent for a long time + the male protagonist only loves the main wife + the female supporting role does not stay with the male protagonist out of love but various interests. The result is that in the plot For a long time, the male protagonist and the female characters around him have treated each other as tools. People can't become CPs and can't produce sugar. When you were in the sea, you could rely on writing meat to let the readers have a good time and get to the shore. But that's not the case - there is neither meat nor sugar, so what do you want the readers to eat?

Elegy If it doesn't work, let's go back to the sea 🙂

If I hear you talking about Mr. Lament again, I will prick my own ears👂🏻!

Come on, lamentation, if you don't come on, I'll feed you grass

If it doesn't work, why don't we go back to the sea? The loyal believers are still waiting for you.

It's not as good as the first one, hey, come on, I'm a soft-hearted fan.

Have you been to prehistoric times and seen Houtu? Just write randomly and take it for granted

Author, why don't you change the name and finish The Fairy Wife.

Why is it still in the explanatory style? Every word and action of the character must be accompanied by a narration. Reading it is like reading a novel with annotations. Let me go, it's like Flying Down Three Thousand Feet, we can understand it. You don't want to immediately explain what Flying Down Three Thousand Feet means in the next sentence. As soon as you explain, you will force what we think into your imagination. You just wrote Flying Down Three Thousand Feet. With a lot of narration and annotations, you are killing all the readers' random thoughts, leaving blank space, leaving blank space. The author really can't do it, try AI, please.

The more I write, the worse it gets, so I have to maintain my standard while resting on my laurels. I came back to read it a month and a half later, and it was indeed more exciting than the previous one.

I want to watch Fairy Wife😭😭😭

Including The Fairy Wife, this is the fifth book of yours that I have read, but none of these heroines and supporting characters have the impact and amazement that Fuhuangqin brought me. Have you considered writing Fuhuangqin again? Liu Ruokui is also good. The character description of The Fairy Wife is amazing.

After a long delay, no one will remember. How many years ago was Fairy Wife?

It has exactly the same problems as the previous book. There is endless fiddling, and there is also a groove of completely unable to understand human speech, and a self-concerned plot. After all, I have written several books, and it has always been the same as before, with no improvement at all? Also, I have always been thinking about your so-called tsundere, and now I have rewritten the heroine's thoughts, which are all self-concerned. The words of the male protagonist are of no use at all and are completely pushed away. This kind of plot, this kind of heroine, plus a whole page of descriptions that are tedious and tedious, are thrown into the dust after a few times. How much more can be seen later?

I saw someone asking and asked the porter.

This author is like a wife and has a headache. This xp is too weird.

Damn, please continue writing about Fairy Wife, I can do anything.

Every year we worship our ancestors. The author is so brave.

Repay a Favor, Fairy Wife, Yellow Hair Halo, Earth 0L, Flowers and Roses, are there any other works "in the sea"?

Is it because of bad grades? The author has cut two copies

Regardless of appearance or talent, there must be something else.

Seriously, polish it up and publish it. If you are in a hurry, just go back to the sea.

There are no updates anymore. The groups for these four books of mine have exploded. Can you still contact the authors? Didn't the author say full-time job? Wouldn't it be easier to live like this?

Let's go to sea again🙂

Resurrection, this book is very interesting to me. No matter whether he is resurrected or not, I am totally determined.

I don't know how the author is doing lately, but I hope everything goes well.