Literary Master, 1979: I’m the Gatekeeper at the Teachers’ College

Stop writing about "harem". Writing about people looks the same and writing about flesh is cliche and unsexy.

Dong Zhizhi

1- Let the protagonist be a concierge, and refuse to write any job description of the concierge at the beginning, just slip through all kinds of "slips"... What a good idea, but I just post it everywhere because I am smart! 2- I don't do my homework and just write it based on my imagination. Beijing was not that hot in 1979, and electric fans still required industrial tickets. The concierge would not be overheated, so there should be no electric fans. Moreover, there were always power outages at that time. I was born in the 1980s, and I even experienced power outages when I was a child. 3-The writing has a hint of impatience... It tastes like all kinds of patchwork! Concierge is a job that you don't have to rush! The author's temper is not right!

Never imitate the author of a certain work and make a mess. Recently I have been hanging out with a few female characters. The writing is good, but sometimes poor grades are not a problem with the writing. The strong conflict created by period novels will only make people feel very fragmented. After all, if people who read period novels really like harems, pretending to be pigs and eating tigers, why not go to urban and fantasy? After all, those two scenes are more intuitive and the scenes are very easy to arrange. Right? Right? The author must not go astray! Don't stretch out your hands, otherwise you'll be thrown into the street!

I pinched my nose and read the seventh chapter. It's a pretentious novel about modern young people covered in chronology. There are too many details. Evaluation: passable. I won't read it again. If the author really writes chronology, he should have a more correct attitude. There are too many details. You are a guard and let people call you brother. You are not a comrade. You don't know what your brain is thinking. You are a talent.

Normal University? Concierge? If your surname is not Qin, I won't read it.

I haven't gone in to read the content, so I'll just take a guess. The author didn't go to college, and then became a security guard at Peking University. Then he started writing novels with the advantage of his rebirth. He became famous, rich, and fell in love with Nan Gong Beizhu, wrote scripts, and made movies. From then on, he started a wonderful life of pretending to be awesome all the way! Guess right? Isn't this the plot of "1979"? 😁

The writing is good but the storyline is mediocre and the protagonist has no charm. The protagonist realizes that he has literary talent but does not have the desire to strive to change his life and class, and does not take the initiative to learn to write and publish. Wouldn't you go to the library in college? Don't you take the initiative to find channels to publish articles? It highlights a randomness, which makes me anxious to death, and also arranges a plot of losing a car. The plot of pretentiousness is also average, and it is not like the time-travelers of later generations. It is not interesting to hang out with some poets. All the books sitting here have this problem, and they are not exciting enough. The protagonists in several books are self-righteous and think they are very charming. To be honest, they are really more talented than the few writers next door!

There are two unfinished books, how dare people pursue the one you are writing now?

What's the point of rubbish like scars? Why did you write it?