Tokyo's Bubble Era: My Idol Training Plan

The previous book, "Bubble," was quite well-written, so why is this one so frustrating? The protagonist wanted to spend more time with Akina and avoid dropping out of school, so you could have just written it directly. Instead, you used some grand narrative about the protagonist being a perfectionist and responsible at work, and now you're applying that perfectionism to Akina?

I read it on QQ, skipping around, and it was really a bit nonsensical. The time-traveling character was written like a native, which isn't entirely incomprehensible—after living for over twenty years again, he couldn't remember anything. Skipping around, the later plot twists and the inclusion of Akina might appeal to some, but it definitely wouldn't suit the general public's taste.

I don't quite understand the plot of the latest chapter. The previous chapters didn't mention any discord between the two brothers, but when the plot reached the point where the protagonist was preparing to resign, the older brother, knowing the protagonist's own life plans, chose not to communicate or consult with him beforehand, directly pushing him onto a path contrary to his own plans at this…

So artsy, why write web novels? They're just endless rambling, all words piled up with fancy words, with practically no plot.

What's the point of being a teacher? Akina had absolutely no contact with your teacher after graduation, and their identities didn't even match.

I've read so many Akina novels, and every time I see how happy Akina is in the novels, I feel depressed thinking about the mess Akina went through in real life, especially that scumbag boyfriend. Akina wasted the best years of her youth, from 18 to 25, on him, damn it!

It's still too cold; most people don't really know much about Japan during that era. But keep it up, it looks quite interesting.

The AI-generated style of the article becomes increasingly obvious with each reading: excessive modifiers, ambiguous paragraphs, and that slow, essay-like pace. Does the author really think readers won't notice?

Doesn't the male lead have a career storyline? He still needs to have a career, although I didn't finish reading the previous book's one. A career storyline needs to have satisfying moments too. I feel the romance in this book is written better, little by little.

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