Swallowed Star: Why Did You Give Me a Low-Martial-Arts System?
吞噬星空，你给我来个低武系统？
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I still remember losing sleep over Swallowed Star back then. I still remember Fanqie releasing ten chapters at once over the 'fifty-thousand-year-old corpse' incident, or was it seven? I still remember repeatedly browsing free chapters on an MP3 player that could display only sixteen characters. I still remember paying for subscriptions by text message, which Qidian no longer recognizes. I still remember ramen costing three yuan a bowl and milk tea two yuan a cup that year... ... Swallowed Star
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The genius who devoured you has a comprehension a billion times greater than that of an ordinary person. What good is adding 200% to your comprehension? You're still trash among trash.
Why did the protagonist need to create a useless Spirit Meteor Clan clone? Wouldn't it have been better to just create a Flame God Clan clone? An Earth soul + a Flame God Clan body, wouldn't that be a perfect match?
Using a knife? Thumbs down! Earth already has the Nine-Fold Thunder Blade and the World-Destroying Spear Technique; all that's missing is swordsmanship. Why not develop and promote swordsmanship? Sigh, is this even fair to the system?
Have you traveled through the swallowed star? Then write...
Breaking the hundredfold genetic limit with Blood Crystal is unrealistic; Luo Feng was able to do it because he cultivated the Nine Tribulations Secret Manual.
Choosing the original body as the first clone after possession is so discouraging. What was the author thinking? Either don't possess a body, or choose one with a higher gene multiplier. There are only two clone slots, and one is wasted. You might as well have possessed a golden-horned behemoth; that would have given you an extra clone.
Could you please copy less of the original text? It's so poorly written.
The writing is alright, but the plot and main characters are poorly written. It's okay to read if you're looking for something to read but are currently experiencing a reading slump. The author failed to craft a good story, and the main character lacks any real charisma, making it truly a disappointing read.
Many fanfictions about Devouring the Immortal overlook one crucial point when the Realm Lord fights the Immortal: the Immortal's burning divine power can amplify their attack power a thousandfold. With your base attack of 2074 times, plus secret techniques, it's extremely difficult to kill a Marquis, let alone a King. Furthermore, without special methods, you cannot extinguish the Immortal's divine power.
Has the author actually studied the original work? Chapter 199 still hasn't been revised? Are the other readers blind? Does nobody care?
In the original story, Luo Feng was an immortal who created the ultimate secret technique of the Universe Lord. Otherwise, how could he have fought against the overlord on the Primordial Star? Later, he even shattered eight thousand Venerables with a single move. After breaking through to the Venerable realm, he went to the Cosmic Sea.