Swallowed Star, I Can Simulate Life

Another fast-paced fanfiction, exceeding 100,000 words and already out of the mainstream. When I read it again after 500,000 words, I found that several fanfics fell apart very quickly after leaving Earth.

I suggest avoiding overshadowing the entire main storyline, such as taking away too many of Luo Feng's opportunities! Parallel storylines are more appealing; nobody likes all the adventures and main quests to be duplicated. Once you've acquired the necessary resources, develop the cheat-like features!

I can't take it anymore. This author even got the basic timeline wrong. Did they not read the original work at all? Readers who choose to read fanfiction have probably read the original work several times. Can't you respect the readers? The system is so discouraging. Before becoming a martial artist, it costs 100 yuan to simulate once.

Alright, that's enough. Just becoming a martial artist and the simulation fee jumped from 1000 to 1 million. I'd barely accept 100,000, let alone 10,000.

This is very unreasonable! The protagonist is simulated being killed several times in the base city, yet he stupidly refuses to identify who killed him. He's truly an idiot, utterly brainless. Being killed in the base city, even if you didn't become a martial artist, is one thing. But if you had, who would dare openly murder a martial artist or persecute their family in the base city?

This book is ridiculous! Two novice warriors leading three advanced warriors and one advanced warrior barely reaching the warrior threshold, and they travel over a thousand kilometers to kill monsters, as if there aren't any monsters within a hundred or two kilometers, or that these monsters aren't enough for them. Why don't you just write about them going to Australia to kill monsters?

How did they manage to get such good results when their scores were so much worse than the mock exam next door?

How can the protagonist use the Armor Bead? Isn't that something only the Flame God Clan and those who have cultivated to the Nine Tribulations can use?

Now, the protagonist has no equipment, no money, and he's still a quasi-martial artist in the wilderness. What is he going out to do? How is he hunting?

The worst simulation I've ever read. The original story has laws, okay? People can kill anyone they want. Luo Feng would have died long ago. He's just trying to emulate others and courting death. Doesn't he know that in the original story, some people are high-ranking soldiers for their entire lives?