Discernment

I trust 🐔Xianjun Yingzhuye. The chapter reviews are accurate and quick, the foreshadowing and recollections are well-reasoned, the source of the screenshots is great, the background is there, and the text does not disappoint. But I didn't understand the first three chapters, so I talked about the coming of Ji Yue people and changed the perspective. Probably, it feels like a pull. Often a chapter focuses on describing one thing, just one thing, and it pulls back and forth, but Fenbao means clear management. Fenbao governs the family clearly. The perspective change means that the perspective written by Ji Yueren is very clear. Even though there are many people with a lot of information, the perspective and events are very clear. Comrade Zhu Ye made me a little confused when reading these three chapters, and the perspective was a bit confusing. There is only one solution, and that is to update a lot of hydrology. A few chapters of 2,000 words can be stretched out a few times. It is recommended to update 8,000 words a day, and occasionally add a few more updates. In this way, Comrade Zhuye can change his intention, and I will follow the path of Immortal Zhuye. 🐔If you ask for leave, 🕯️You should do it.

I suggest that Pinyu's episode could be written a little more.

I took a leave of absence to write a story and added it 🙂

Zhuye... How dare you take advantage of the fact that the Immortal Lord is not here to prove the Tao fetus... You are proving the Tao fetus... How dare you destroy the Tao fetus!

When Ji Yueren came back after taking a five-day leave, he saw that the sky had fallen, and the Xuanjian fruit position had been stolen by Zhuye... "Zhuye, it would be fine if you could prove a spare position... But..." "How dare you?!" "You are proving the right position. You dare to prove the right position!" "Zhuye, you are risking the disapproval of the world!"😡

As expected of Ji Duiying, I also learned a lot from the update

But Zhu Xianjun is neither a lowly cultivator nor diligent.

Come, the author makes a solemn oath to me: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship!

Congratulations, sir, for making the lie come true. The atmosphere is perfect and the taste of success is about to begin.

It is recommended that the title of the book mention "Xuan Jian Xian Clan", otherwise I will not recognize that this is a fanfic. I jumped here when I was browsing in the comment area. The title of the book is quite confusing. I thought it was original.

"Zengmu" Taoism: "Spring before illness" (the magical power of life, known as "The Change of the World" in ancient times) "Sangji Silkworm" "𬯎Yang Sou" [Yuan Wuling] Protagonist: Peer Mountain Lord: Mid-Zifu "Zengmu" Taoist tradition "Sangji Silkworm" "Bi Qianchun" "𬯎Yang Sou", Secret method "The Magical Art of Illusion of the Flowing Dust" ( The main body is the enlightenment of the mulberry tree in [Answer to the Beggar's Questions] Spiritual weapon and treasure: [Five Fire Capital Heavenly Furnace] Subordinates: Zhenchan Zhenren: Zifu Early period "Han Qi" Taoism, (Xueling Tingsongli) Kuxia Zhenren: Early Period of Zifu "Xi Qi" Taoism, (Golden Hair Yu Xihuan)

🐔It has been open sourced. Future generations are invited to log in to the Xuanjian fruit position.

After reading Chapter 6, this is my least favorite way of writing 🙂. This is the beginning of a novel! There is very little useful information, and the protagonist has no point of view and no introduction. It is okay for you to use Xiao Ming to reveal the information about the protagonist layer by layer. But this is the beginning. Usually your writing method is to introduce the supporting characters. In fact, it is good to introduce the protagonist's perspective from the beginning. It is completely unnecessary to use Xiao Ming's. Also, you overdo it. Your normal three chapters contain too little information. Knowing you're testing the waters, here's my advice

Sir, that chicken devil is in retreat, we can only rely on you, Sir 😭😭😭

The magical power [Spring Before Disease], known in ancient times as [The Changes of the World], comes from Wan Muchun in front of the diseased tree. It is possible to predict disasters and use disease energy to parasitize the enemy's body, which in turn stimulates one's own vitality. It is said that "there is spring before illness, and life appears in the dead place." The magical power of destiny [Xia Ningbing] uses the meaning of gold to condense water into ice. This magical power can also be the leap of Han Qi and Xiu Yue. It comes from Zhuangzi Qiu Shui's "Summer bugs cannot talk about ice". It is cold at the peak of summer, and the time sequence is out of order, causing all the senses in the downward direction to be reversed and shaken. According to the setting of Zaraki's good breaking formation, it is given mastery of the formation. The magic power [Pu Luosu], the allusion is taken from the Book of Songs Binfeng "peeling jujube in August" in July, and the ancient name of jujube is also called Puluo Su. This technique can quickly catalyze the opponent's magical energy, forcing it to fall like a jujube, accelerating its decline. The magical power [Hongluo Xin] is taken from Wang Zhixue Mountain Collection's "Hongluo Dianxue". The dead wood is just an ember, and the diseased wood will eventually burn itself to bless the whole body with magical power. It can reach up to 80% of the magical power (slightly lower than Jun Chuanjian), but releasing it at full power will be accompanied by side effects such as shortening life span. The magic power [Firefly in Rot] is taken from the conjecture that "rotten grass turns into firefly" in the Book of Rites and the Moon Order. (Because many things in Xuanjian do not require science to be used correctly) When dead trees are dead, fireflies emerge. It can absorb the magical power and spell of the dying monk's life, and temporarily create a more condensed core energy body for fighting. The method of seeking gold "One Thought Technique of Four Seasons withering and Prosperity" Golden Nature [More Wood's Rising and Withering Elemental Nature] With the four seasons of spring, summer, autumn and winter, the wood turns to new vitality, and at the same time coincides with the five elements. Not clinging to immortality and not afraid of fading, seeing the reincarnation of glory and glory in the heart of heaven and earth.

I, Xuanjian, have a brilliant future (tremolo)

Did the boss end up being infected with avian flu by a chicken? 😭

You are proving the remaining position, you dare to prove the remaining position!

Boss, this book is not signed, is it just written?

If 🐢's supreme wisdom were given to Xuan Xu, Xuan Jian's world would have been cleared long ago

Boss, have you run away? Why did Shen say you ran away?

Boss, please update more, there will definitely be no shortage of traffic.

Give

After being banned for a month, I can no longer grasp the core

I like watching movies without female protagonists or with single female protagonists. So I wanted to ask specifically. Recently, I happened to get into the fanfic of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, and Mu Chi saw the shadow. I thought it was quite interesting. After reading the current one, I wanted to search for other fanfics. I found that this fanfic had so many comments. It looked like a high-quality fanfic. I wanted to ask if there is a female protagonist?

The writing is really good, and the fighting part has a unique visual feel. After reading it in one day, I also thought about the joint chapter. I traveled to the Xiuyue Sect and became a Han Qi swordsman. I already had the attribute of being imprisoned. After the master Shangyuan attained enlightenment, he established the true way in Beihai. I felt that the sect environment was favorable and he had the inheritance of the swordsmanship.

Boss, can you borrow the building to advertise 🙂 Push the new book on your homepage *^_^* "Double-panel descends into the abyss, the assassin's potion melts at the entrance" Unlimited streams, including Mystery, Fengyun, Naruto, Fairy Sword, Death, Marvel, Fate, eva, DC, the Supreme Being... And the most important thing: why do I have two panels for the protagonist? The world view is complete, the logic is rigorous, there are no brainless points, and the main focus is realism Friends who like Infinite Flow and Zhutian Flow can check it out, and ask for favorites, comments and reading

May I ask, does the author have a group?