Mystery: the Last Shepherd

It's an okay book. I just finished it today after reading it on New Year's Eve. This book is a fanfic of "Lord of Mysteries". The writing is good. The protagonist is small but not a cool novel. There are no girls. Overall, it is a bit depressing to read. This book is the same as many Cyberpunk 2077 books. The plot tone is a bit literary and youthful: family members are dead, sympathy for the people at the bottom, and the protagonist is all kinds of crazy, painful, and suffering. The fundamentalist party is lucky. The author respects the setting of the original work more, and the character descriptions of the characters that appeared in the original work are more appropriate. The path abilities and other things are based on what Squid has said, and there are basically no second settings (I am not a girlfriend, so I can't tell the difference). Personally, I feel that this book has no competition among the current bestie fanfics.

No CP, no ambiguity, no harem, no brainlessness. The writing is good, the logic is strong, and the writing power is sufficient. (The protagonist has full strength, but not much IQ, and can't play many negative roles, but his execution ability is quite strong.) A very good fanfic, the protagonist's growth line is very clear, the character is not flat, and the pain on him will not be felt like drizzle, and he knows what his pain is for. These are enough to impress readers. The plot has laughter and tears, and the ups and downs are well controlled, and it will not be dull all the way to the end. —— I didn't expect that the Hall of Honesty would be like this. I couldn't hear the protagonist's voice, only the wails of pain echoed. In the end, even I, the reader, almost forgot that he was actually in pain. I was still laughing when I saw the voices of Klein and Audrey earlier! He acted too normal, as if he had already stepped out. Few people really care about the suffering of the people at the bottom. I was actually a little shocked when the protagonist incorporated those words into his honorary name. Someone really saw and cared about it, even if he himself was in pain. (These words and these actions will probably make people laugh when they are said and done... Anyway, I quite like this.) The rest... I haven't finished reading the rest yet, so I'm really looking forward to the follow-up development. Klein is also very nice. When he visited Tracy, he even asked Mr. Azik to come over and help! Leonard dug two people's graves like this! Laughing like crazy. Will Luze hit Klein when he takes off the Fool's vest... Or will he suddenly realize that they are good brothers? No wonder the Fool is different from other gods. "People cannot overthrow gods, but people who are driven crazy can." Let us, Luze, go up and take our sister home 😡

(Minor spoilers) This is a very good-looking mystery fanfic that balances the sense of enjoyment with the reasonableness of the plot. Especially the ending of each volume is not bad at all. The overall style is refreshing and sharp. A total of four volumes have been written so far, and the first volume is the most frustrating one. Ince and the female cybernetic ghost M without showing the health bar basically keep the protagonist in a high-pressure state 😢. He has a knife, but he hid the biggest one in the second volume. From the second volume onwards, the feeling of pleasure increases sharply, and fighting is so exciting. 🤓, but the big knife at the end I can only say that the author has no heart 😭. The third volume is even more exciting. The battle of bombarding the royal family is the peak of the show 🤓. The fourth volume has nothing to say, but it is still very satisfying, but there is a bit of a knife at the end 🔪. As for the protagonist, he is a normal person who is driven crazy. The best part is that he targets everyone who messes with him equally like a mad dog (do you know the value of breaking into the king's palace directly after the fog 🪖), and although he is crazy about his enemies, he has a lot of affection for himself. It can be said that if I keep writing at my current level, I can't be considered the number one mysterious fan 😆😆.

The audience is too negative

Two chapters a day is simply not enough. To speed it up, even the production team's donkeys wouldn't dare to take such a break!

Come on, come on

Whether it's the writing style, the setting, or even the boldness of the changes to the original work (referring to the shepherd promotion ceremony), they are all attractive enough, and they capture all the attractions of the mysterious world. The shortcoming is that there is too little writing! ! ! Can't you write 10,000 words a day?

If you go through all five houses without any plot hooks, and it's still the Hanged Man route, the most extreme way at present is to use a quill pen to reach sequence one, and then find a way to get some exposure to the Sea of Chaos... Not to mention how you use the pen to get promoted, even if you do this, you can't beat the true god And it's not as good as that. How about killing Adam? How sweet is this guy to just sit and watch the protagonist occupy a sequence and kill Zhen Zao? He will definitely take action, and it is not impossible to even directly merge with him. You can't expect to be Xiao Ke's nanny, and then Xiao Ke can help you save the opponent's life after defeating Adam Amon, right? Is there any big golden finger planned now? To be honest, I don't dare to watch it. I always feel that I will either take it for granted like the new audience, or I just can't write about the eunuch

In fact, it is difficult to understand the emergence of fan circles in the novel circle. They are not sentimental or combative fans. They just like to paint their favorite characters into "saints", and then love them so much that they make fun of them and keep them on the screen over and over again. But which protagonist in online novels is a true saint, or which reader really likes a saint-type protagonist? But my best friend attracted such a group of ducks because of the traffic. Judging from the results, the higher the snowflakes are, the more severe the avalanche will be. As a result, the hidden problems in the character's personality are exposed. In the end, people can no longer look at the original character without wearing colored glasses. 🙄

If you want to see mindless cheating, direct promotion, and support from various investors to reach the top of your life, this is not the book for you. The protagonist, Luze, only has one trick open - he can access a small sea of ​​chaos. This trick can only keep the protagonist awake on the secret prayer path and accept the pain soberly. The plot is mainly about the knife. The knife is smooth, long and full of skill. Of course, besides the knife, there is also pleasure. The pain of the knife is the pleasure of killing. This book has too many advantages. One of them is that the interaction between the protagonist and the original plot characters is very reasonable. The protagonist is set to be a handsome guy who is outraged by both humans and gods (the weight of the Aurora Club's strict selection), but the author did not design any ambiguous plot for this, there is no brainless sudden affection, and there is no strong investment with extremely skewed resources. Even most characters will be biased when they first meet the protagonist because of the secret prayer path. In short, the reactions are very consistent with the original work and not OOC at all. The interaction with Ke is also just right. Both parties help each other, respect each other's secrets and ways of doing things, and are not mindlessly revealing to each other. The author writes very well, especially the battle scenes. Generally speaking, scenes where the protagonist is fighting while reciting prayers can easily make the protagonist feel embarrassed if it is not well written. Just like a hot-blooded boy who must call out the name of a move when he makes a move, if it is written well but is hot-blooded and if it is not written well, it will be a chuunibyou. However, it seems that the author writes very naturally, completely portraying the mysterious praying man's nagging state, being sick and going crazy at the same time, but also powerfully outputting the fighting state. The scene of blood and hula is accompanied by a strange and sacred feeling, combining abstraction and concreteness. Every time I read the combat scenes in this book, I feel a different kind of enjoyment, especially the visuals. Moreover, the repetition rate of the prayers is very low, and the rhetorical level of the prayers is also very high (grab the author to write the Holy Book of Fools!) To be honest, I think the writing power of the fighting scenes in this book is higher than the level of fighting in Suhuan. (Name the person in a certain ring who was so embarrassed that he dug his toes into the ground. In the name of the father) The author is very good at using small characters as the entry point of the plot. At first, when I saw Lu Ze jump directly to Sequence 5, I thought that the rest would be stories about high-level mysterious worlds. This kind of plot is either unpleasant or a bit ungrounded. As a result, the author handled this part very well, using the digestive potion as the starting point, and created many three-dimensional ordinary characters with character arcs. The perspectives of these different characters made the pain Lu Ze carried more concrete and real, making the "fall" of the Hanged Man path not just an empty adjective, but allowing people to feel the heaviness of this path and understand Lu Ze's misery and burden. (For comparison, writing about a person's misery, if you just write "too painful to pull" back and forth, it will actually feel hypocritical) Of course, there are still some small flaws, that is, the protagonist's combat power arrangement is not reasonable. He is either absolutely crushed, or he is crushed and forced to explode. Although it is said that every time you explode, you have to pay a price, but the explosion occurs too frequently. Does it still count as explosion if you often explode? Anyway, it can be explosive, and the reader loses the feeling of being uneasy about the outcome of the battle. Looking at the current part, it seems that the content of Adam is not high, but it is not certain that it actually contains 99% of the content of Adam. In fact, I hope that the author can have other developments in the future besides "Adam's arrangement". After all, in the mysterious fandom, Adam is already a brick, and he can arrange everything. Oh, actually after reading the first chapter, you know that such a good sister is the one who brings the knife, but she was clearly prepared, but why did she still get hit hard by the knife! When will the author be able to write some sister plot? Lu Ze should miss his sister, woo woo, even if it is a dream or hallucination, let's have some sister plot 😭😭😭😭😭Cecilia——

Just treat the "Sea of Chaos" as a temporary safe house. Don't bring anything into it. Klein can use "Origin Castle" like that without causing big problems. That's because Tianzun keeps himself clean and loves "Origin Castle", but "Original Castle" The "Original God" is different. He is not picky about food. If there are too many things in the "Chaos Sea" to a certain extent, the "Original God" can probably give you a whole wave of big ones through mystical connections. Even if he fails to be resurrected in the end, his will will be further activated.

You have to know that Ke Neng became a secret because he compromised with Tianzun. Although it seems to be the past now, he will still become Tianzun over time, so Tianzun will compromise. But God is different. God is the strongest notary and will never compromise. Unless a powerful plug-in is used to wipe out God's consciousness, the five families really can't leave. In the decisive battle, Adam, Storm, and Lao Long together can't beat God. It is basically impossible for one person to fight against him.

The writing so far is very reasonable, and the characters are well established. The original character sister is very good, and the key points are also deliberately described, such as the Sea of ​​Chaos and Yuanbao. As long as the author can complete the story, he will at least be in the reader and paradox level.

Can you give the protagonist a CP? I feel that the protagonist is so pitiful. He has no family or friends, and there is nothing in his soul except revenge. He is even more lonely than Xiao Ke. If there is no CP or warm interaction, I really feel that the viewing experience is a bit too depressing.

Author, do you know what it means to stand at thirty? In other words, there is no way to gain a foothold here without thirty updates a day.

I don't know why so many people praise the goddess. The goddess's pure divinity trumps humanity, and everything is for their own benefit. It killed so many people, but in the end it didn't become the savior of the past. It's hypocritical and disgusting. Xiaoke was so plotted that he was purely a tool to suppress Tianzun. In writing this book, I don't know if the protagonist can break the arrangement of fate. It is really difficult. I feel like Lu Ze's future is dark. If the fallen Creator can wake up and become one with Lu Ze, that's the best ending I can think of. Adam still can't be God. He has no humanity. How can he resist God?

I have read all the good occult fics, Reader's Paradox, The Good Witch, etc... Personally, I think The Good witch has the best plot structure, and this one is the most enjoyable to watch. The author likes the whole story, and the original character creation is also good. It is a cryptic fic that cannot be missed 🤓

Klein has rarely used Origin Treasures in fights so far, but Lao Lu can no longer fight without the Sea of ​​Chaos, especially since he himself likes Mang and his fighting intensity has always been very high. If he continues to use it like this, at what sequence will God be able to revive? 😠

How to make it real later? No chance at all? There is no need to change paths, all 5 companies and four paths have True Gods, and the remaining viewers will become gods immediately, not to mention that True God and Adam are basically the same person, and they can't fight at all. It is impossible to be higher than Zhenzo and Adam. These two already have the highest authority. If the authority is higher, the original God can only be resurrected. The only way for the protagonist to rely solely on the authority of the Chaos Sea is to be overtaken by the original God 🙂🙂

Did Lao Jin disband the group because he was afraid of being scolded after his sister died?

As shown in the picture, Mr. Dawu said in the latest Q&A that even if the Lao Emperor does not take advantage of the old restraint and has the ability to weaken other old combat powers, he can still only fight against two at most. It's hard to imagine that the omniscient and omnipotent five-in-one approach finally synthesized such a waste. According to what Teacher Dawu said, if the prison emperor is restrained, wouldn't it be possible that even the strong Shan Jiori will not be able to survive? It can only be said to be outrageous. The Mother Goddess has the original embryo of Chaos and the symbol of the Immortal, an invincible tank that can be beaten by many old ones and can recover blood quickly without eating seals. The endless clones of the Zunzunbao have the setting of being able to defeat countless enemies without being restrained. Although it appears to be a bit clownish when it comes to being restrained by the source of external gods, it can still win the respect. But Lao Di is the Lord of the Star Realm, omniscient and omnipotent in modifying parameters, the original symbol of the Creator is difficult to control, and the five-in-one path has more theoretical features and stronger features. As a result, after taking advantage of the setting and trying his best, he finally relied on the setting of 1 vs. 2 To protect the base by taking the pillar. It is really funny. Mother Goddess, Zunzunbao: Lao Di, are you also a pillar? Lao Di: I think I am

Squid said that the full-time almighty sequence must have the audience as the main body to more effectively prevent the birth of God's will. But I have always felt that it is correct for the All-Around 5 series to focus on discarding people.

I think the life and death of my sister is not important. After all, it is not difficult to keep my sister alive in Secret. There is always a way, but the most important thing for me is actually the interaction with my sister. The 'sister' and the protagonist support each other and never leave each other. That was a big shining point for me. This was a large part of my motivation for reading this novel. If the sister has no role from now on, it will definitely be a major blow to the content of this novel. After all, I think the author actually handled some other parts poorly. For example, the communication with Klein and the identity of the time traveler.

Speaking of which, wouldn't the protagonist have to elbow five true gods, three churches, a cult, and a Twilight Hermit Society in the later stage? Da, I gave it to you. Zhenzao will definitely die. What to do with the others) I haven't watched the second part. I have watched the first part for a long time. If you remember it wrong, just point it out. Don't say I'm done. 😢😢😢

It is understandable that the protagonist is biased against the goddess of the night, but there is something wrong with what you wrote, the author. There is indeed a paradise in the mysterious world. The Kingdom of the Righteous God that every believer believes in is the paradise of believers, and the protagonist knows the existence of the Kingdom of God. In the original work, Dunn and Dai Li both obtained eternal sleep in the goddess' kingdom. Although they are no different from death in the eyes of outsiders like us, they are believers of the goddess. There is no God in the real world, so real religion is deception, but there is really a God in the mystery, and the reason why God has the word "righteous" must be because it plays a positive role. Even the Church of the Storm, which discriminates against women, preaches that men should be responsible. Moreover, the classic story discussed in this part is about the goddess and the apostle saving some poor people. The protagonist opens his mouth to deceive. How does he know whether the goddess has done the above things? Mystery is the world where God really exists. Even if it is beautified, there may not be fabricated things, such as the Fool's Bible. Mysterious fandoms are very easy to go off the rails when it comes to topics like class revolution. For example, Su Huan mentioned what Audrey was doing at the end. When I read the book reviews, some people wished that Klein would lead a spiritual thread to everyone. Only if everyone becomes marionette can there be no oppression and exploitation. The main theme of the mystery is always to maintain the barrier and fight against the external gods. For ordinary people, what the righteous gods do is only to guide them in a good direction, not to directly control them. For God, any individual can be a believer. Can God control all of his believers to be good people? The times are developing, and Zhengshen plays a guiding role in it, such as the equality between men and women in the goddess of the night, and the industrial revolution of steam. If the protagonist leads the exploited people to fight against the exploiters, that would be correct, but blaming God for inaction from the perspective of a bystander is deceiving, and that is prejudice. And I always believe that resistance to exploitation should be done by the people on their own initiative. It is not advisable to behave like some people who expect God to be the savior or nanny of the poor. If God does not do this, they blame God and others. If ordinary people among believers set off a righteous revolution, no god with normal human thinking would stand on the side of the revolution, such as the sea god Kavitua who was replaced by Klein. Moreover, there are no serious gods in the Southern Continent. Isn't it a bit strange for the protagonist to come here to scold the real gods? God is not a nanny. The first priority of the righteous gods is to block the barrier and defeat the foreign gods. Therefore, the other righteous gods will not prevent the god war between the dark night and the god of war to create a future of the past. Therefore, the seven righteous gods will acquiesce to Qiao San's Black Emperor ritual. Things like class revolution are secondary. The protagonist, as the Blood God, leads the people of the Southern Continent to fight against colonization and exploitation. It is indeed commendable that he decides to be this nanny, but isn't it also deceiving the people to discredit other righteous gods for their inaction?

Although the author has been very hurt recently, I still want to encourage him 😃

Lu Ze: Hello, can I take up a moment of your time? I want to tell you about our beacon and savior, Mr. Fool. Klein: The Blood God is awesome! Let me tell you, people who don't understand the Blood God can only live a life of relative failure... Probably the two of them can dig out the new Origin Castle and Sea of ​​Chaos on the spot...

I'm actually quite curious, why do so many people want my sister to become a natural disaster of destruction? Let's not talk about the difficulty and how much pain we will encounter. In terms of the result, becoming a natural disaster of destruction is not a blessing, right?

Not a drop is left 🙂

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