The Manager’s Attacking Play: Starting with Moyes’s Sacking

Is there too little introduction and description of the protagonist at the beginning? We don't know what abilities he had before his rebirth, why he became a coach after his rebirth, or his financial situation; The coaching and management aspects are well-written, but the protagonist is too one-dimensional, as if the protagonist is merely a character the author controls while playing a simulation game.

Overall, it's actually a pretty good book, but author, please stop writing romance! Just a few paragraphs made me feel nauseous. Romance isn't a necessity in football novels. Can't you just focus on writing good content?

Those who enjoy reading about coaches can check out UEFA's requirements for coaching positions! I could barely read any of it; the certification exam is at 26... I don't even qualify to take it!

The early game is decent, but later on, the cars involve a lot of maneuvering, and the result is a balance (or suppression) of combat power. When I played against strong teams after I got to the car, 90% of the time the opponent scored first, then we launched a hot counterattack (to tie or win), and the final result was a draw about 80% of the time. The only big win I remember was against Barcelona, ​​and that was it. And the goal difference is always lower than the opponent's.

A good start, one that doesn't treat readers like fools.

An author lacking life experience

Could the main character swear less? Does swearing equate to passion?

Don't you guys feel any sense of empathy for someone so young? Two years in Manchester United's youth academy at 25 or 26, without any connections from Manchester United's management? Is Manchester United just a big company that allows its star player to rise to prominence? The University of Cologne is a holy grail for football coaches, yet a single student from there is sought after by top clubs?

Overall, it's good; it seems another excellent coaching article has been born.

One sentence at a time, and you're writing poetry? There's absolutely no desire or enjoyment in reading it; it's an insult to all language arts teachers.