Talisman Rubik's Cube

Read the book review of Chapter 18 Protagonist's name: Zhang Ke Appearance: broad shoulders, thick waist, muscles all over the body exuding the so-called hormonal atmosphere Character: perseverance, affection (a little bit virginal) Event: Received a sect mission to go to a place to chop wood, and encountered a fight between the three true kings, and was affected. The protagonist is already safe, but he goes out to find his fellow disciples regardless of his life and death, so that they can hide, and is only a hair away from death. Afterwards, several of his fellow disciples died, and the protagonist burst into tears and trembled all over. The sect's reaction: Of the three team leaders, the team led by the protagonist had the fewest deaths, but he was the one who took the blame. Just because the other two gave gifts. The sect first rewards and then punishes, and the protagonist is dragged to the square and whipped in full view of the public. This abandoned book! Author: From my own words, I love to abuse the protagonist, but I will let the protagonist's character slowly correct and grow slowly, so I won't make any comments here!

I'm sorry, I couldn't resist it, and I died from the poison Although I heard from book friends and the author that the plot behind it was okay, after reading the second volume, I died suddenly. It's the first time I've seen a fairy tale style written in the style of an online game novel. Those who only like traditional fairy tales may not be able to watch it. There were a lot of poison points in the early stage, and I thought I was highly resistant to poison, but I couldn't resist the emotional drama of this book. First, he suddenly became a bitch in Chapter 18, and then in just a short period of time in Chapter 33, he was inexplicably living and dying together, and a flash marriage was not as fast as you. First of all, I don't see the need for Zhang Ke to pursue Ding Xiaoxiao. He has never seen a woman. From what I saw in the first 30 chapters, Zhang Keyuan is better than Ding Xiaoxiao, so I don't understand love at first sight. Secondly, after just a few battles together, I thought we could only be friends and partners. But in one step, we shared life and death together, and I was paralyzed. Even after two o'clock, it's okay if you want the heroine and avoid the emotional drama, but you wrote such a shitty plot. The more I read, the more uncomfortable it became. Until Chapter 34, when you sell yourself to show off your affection, I died suddenly. I thought I was watching Xian Xia, but in fact I was watching Qiong Yao, which was embarrassing. Are you really not a female author? I heard from the author that I can skip the second volume. I thought that if I follow a book, I should see the complete plot. I should have listened to the author, but now that I have sent it, even though I have high expectations for the follow-up plot, I would like to advise future readers to skip the second volume! Just skip the second volume! Just skip the second volume! If it becomes toxic later, you will abandon the book.

You can still check it out before building the foundation, but the settings later are too outrageous. Just build the foundation and dare to play the rules? Still doing patents? Outrageous, abandon it

The content is good, I have invested in it, the novel style is unique and interesting, but... It seems to have nothing to do with the introduction/title? ? ? If you can maintain your status and add some publicity, your results will not be bad.

After reading all the books, this book is still very unique. It is worth keeping on the bookshelf for a long time. It can be recommended and re-read. What else can I ask for?

Recommended by a 12-year-old bookworm, this book is really good

An umbrella. . . . A whip. . Am I overthinking?

The style I like will be on the shelves as soon as possible.

Skip to read and read all the poisonous points. What is the purpose of this sect? It targets you at every turn, and you even wholeheartedly send treasures to the sect. In the end, all the sects are enemies. The author has a serious masochistic tendency.

The golden finger appeared too late. It could have appeared in the first three chapters. It would be good to appear together with those memories. It directly shows that a strange Rubik's Cube has appeared in the mind since birth. It can be deduced, arranged and combined based on the runes mastered by the protagonist. In this way, if the protagonist has some modern actions, it will not be out of the ordinary. Just treat him as a reincarnation and be dominated by the current world view. In addition, the author is a newcomer after all, so the first five or six chapters should be able to grab readers who come in to read. Those old authors like Platinum Master have a fixed audience, so it doesn't matter even if they tell the story slowly. Authors should not think that their subject matter and imaginative stories are special. Writing slowly can attract people. This is a common problem for novice authors. In fact, the first few chapters of a novice's work cannot attract readers, and readers will basically have no expectations after that. They usually delete the book and leave. For an experienced author, people may think that the current situation is not good, but it will gradually get better later. Chapter 14 could have been a highlight. After all, compared to others, the protagonist's handling method was better and the result was the least loss. It just makes no sense to punish for no reason. It is a little poisonous point. In fact, it does not necessarily have to be the intervention of the commandment soup. It can completely be the intervention of the affairs office to inquire about the damage during the mission and provide certain compensation for the unreasonable disaster. And then because other teams are The eldest brother (the seed of the inner sect) led the team, and received favoritism and more rewards. The eldest brother of the Fuyuan where the protagonist was located went to fight for it, and exposed the protagonist's deeds. He was favored by an elder and felt that this child Yingguo was like me. He waited for the protagonist to successfully build the foundation and accept him as a disciple. Of course, this is what I said casually, and it may not be very rigorous. In short, in addition to the above shortcomings, there are also some bright spots, so I won't list them one by one. This book is just for practice. I hope the author can write better and better!

The plot from the beginning to the end of revenge for Bai Youan is a bit awkward, but it takes off directly after that, completing the leap from dry food to fairy grass.

The writing was very good at the beginning, very pure and very detailed. The character growth is also very delicate. The emotional handling is not good. You can refer to mortals. It would be better if there are no games and the addition of subsequent games will cause the protagonist's information to change The follow-up digitization is too serious. The golden finger is too powerful. The growth of the protagonist is not reflected. It feels very relaxed. It does not have the spirit of hard work and specialization at the beginning. It just feels very relaxed and casual. Come on the author. The story is well written. Too many elements affect the perception.

Seeing Chapter 14, it's so ridiculous! The protagonist led the brothers to go out to cut down trees, and encountered a fight with three Yuanshen Lords. After the protagonist's many efforts, 10 people died. When he returned to the sect, the sect did not ask anything, but first expelled the three leaders from the Taoist temple. The reason was that they were dead. Ridiculous! Does this kind of irresistible factor also count? If the sect does this, it will only lead to the absence of people who dare to do things, because the more people do it, the more likely it is to cause trouble. It is simply ridiculous that the leader should be treated like this when something happens due to irresistible factors like this. Look at who will bother to organize others to do things in the future. In this way, people in the sect will only think about whether they have responsibilities before doing things, instead of thinking about the rewards for doing things well. In a world like cultivating immortals, this way of handling things is simply ridiculous!

The previous article is very good. It is really incomprehensible that the sect must find a scapegoat. In reality, there is indeed such a situation of finding a deputy to take the blame. But this plot does not fit with yours. You are like on earth. Suddenly aliens come and beat a lot of people to death in a certain area. Then you find a local person responsible for road construction to take the blame. Let's not talk about whether it is necessary to find someone to take the blame. Just say that you have to follow the Basic Law when looking for someone to take the blame. At least find someone from the local garrison to take the blame. To be honest, there is no need to find someone to take the blame in this situation. If you do, it won't appease people's hearts.

The protagonist is a stupid pig who is disgusting to pure people.

This book is one of the most unique and imaginative fairy tale novels I have read in the past few years. It can even be said that since I started reading online articles in 2006, there are not many fairy tales that can compare with this book.

It's really interesting to invent a clock in the world of immortality. I have been practicing immortality for hundreds of years, and I can fly in the sky, move mountains and fill the sea. But I can't figure out what time it is and I have to look at the watch. This immortal cultivation is really amazing. What kind of patents are there? Are the people of the Immortal Sect free? When I don't do anything every day, I just watch others produce a few watches. What kind of immortality is this? It would be great to be in business. Let's build a WTO and break down the trade barriers in the world of immortality. Create a United Nations to pay attention to human rights issues in the world of immortality, and condemn others for nothing.

After reading dozens of chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. I feel like the real person is just SB, and only the protagonist in the whole picture is a smart person. It's really not easy for the Holy Mother to survive these dozens of chapters in a cultivation novel. The author feels like he is a student and wrote the campus youth version of Cultivation.

I was poisoned to death when I saw the protagonist's natal talisman with its bullshit rules and opposites, the opposite professions, and the unique profession. Are you, the author, a fake immortal?

The ability of the author to write a cliché novel structure in a fascinating way is really amazing. Just like a bowl of egg fried rice, diners will still be able to enjoy it with a delicious taste. I like the author very much and support it! 👍

Modern people cannot cultivate their minds and maintain an equal mentality, thinking that they and the Almighty are equal. This kind of mentality cannot survive in real life, let alone ancient times.

There is such a sect in the spiritual world. It blames its own disciples for natural and man-made disasters. It is the sheep's responsibility that the wolf eats the sheep.

If you don't know how to write about feelings, don't write about it. The protagonist is really a humble bitch to the little senior sister. It is completely unreasonable to cut down trees. Where are the penalties for sudden accidents? The Guo sect, which is completely full of golden elixirs, finds a low-level disciple to carry it. If he doesn't ask for golden elixirs to pay for his life, what are the rules of the sect. There is also a protagonist who is full of confidence at one moment, and is frightened at the other. He is afraid that the sect will keep showing the things in his dreams because he has a dream.

Chapter 27: Poisonous Hair, (Classical) How did Xian Xia become game data? Speechless😓

Highly recommended by a 10-year-old bookworm, it is an absolute must-have. Nice.

The beginning was okay. I was really speechless after seeing how the protagonist and the sect dealt with the Black Wind Incident. The protagonist is the Holy Mother Sect and has a brain. How can I watch this?

The more you write, the more exciting and creative you become. The world view is great, keep up the good work.

Originally, the first few pictures had a bit of a classical fairy tale style, but I couldn't stand it anymore since the fourth chapter. Why are they talking in a modern tone? What the hell?

Is there a schedule for the 8 monthly passes? Can they be more refined? I have now seen the section about sect promotion. The author's 3 views are too correct, and he is specially given 8 monthly passes To be honest, the previous content similar to the game is too toxic.

What you can write is good enough. You have the ability. It is better to promote the progress of the world than to fight and kill someone and ascend to the throne. Today's fairy novels all focus on personal improvement, and society doesn't interfere at all. Haha, it's a typical selfish way to cultivate immortality.