Your Majesty, Please Stop Messing Around.

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The protagonist Linjiang writes about all the strategies and strategies as childish as playing house, and in order to highlight the protagonist's high IQ, the protagonist always has a calm face as if he has everything under control. It seems that the protagonist is very powerful, but in the end, the way he handles the situation is just mediocre and does not make the protagonist very intelligent.

After reading it now, I found that this book is actually quite good. It doesn't have the common wisdom, templates, and plot clichés that are common in today's starting point. The author's narrative technique, plot arrangement, and character creation are all considered excellent, and I can't find any shortcomings for the time being. I hope the author can continue to maintain or write a few more similar books. I think the main thing is to maintain the current quality, and it may not be impossible to write a few classic works.

There is too much water, all kinds of pick-ups, and the main plot holes are not filled, (how did the mother die without taking revenge, who is the fourth force in the ruined temple, who is the mysterious person the dead prince came into contact with before his death, and what is the purpose, is he soul-wearing or wearing it, and his memory from reality does not provide him with any help) Tiantian is a woman, woman, if the author is short of women, go to the nightclub to solve it, the counterattack of diaosi is not popular nowadays, I am just skipping to watch it.

As title

The further you go, the more confused you become. I managed to get through 60 chapters. Once I subscribed, all 40 of them were written about flirting with this girl or flirting with that girl. The plot was so overwhelming that I gave it up.

Let me tell you a few questions 1. The princess died when Zhiyuan was three years old. How did her relationship with the princess develop? 2. Both the prince and the sweeping monk knew that the protagonist was a fake prince, so the sweeping monk said how to inherit the prince's talent. If there is a blood relationship, then he cannot be regarded as a fake prince 3. Zhiyuan clearly found out that the prince was wrong, but she let it go and neither checked where the real prince had gone nor the identity of the protagonist. Did the prince communicate with him in advance? If so, why did he still tell the princess's relics that the prince was no longer the prince. 4. Since the prince knows that the protagonist is not the real prince, but he is willing to make mistakes, why not make it clear to the protagonist. Many things will be easier to handle if he makes them clear. Otherwise, it would be normal for the protagonist to run away when the situation goes wrong one day. 5. The protagonist has asked the sweeping monk many times about the poison, but no one has any doubts about it?

Is it cold enough?

Is this the protagonist who is controlled by others everywhere? Really bad writing

I feel like the writing is illogical. Why are there dandies everywhere? A serious family values ​​a scholarly family. Apart from anything else, the education of the children of the Guang family is definitely not bad. Most of the younger generations of the family are dandies. This family will collapse in a few years. Wherever the protagonist goes, he meets only dandies. So how do the big families in this world pass on? I'm very confused. After reading hundreds of chapters, I feel like we are all children of a big family, only the protagonist is normal, and the rest are all playboys. I feel quite speechless 😥😥😥

After reading three volumes, what did the author think of having so many assassination settings? What is currently known about the situation in the court: the emperor has been in seclusion for a long time and has not been in court for a long time, the prince is ill, the third prince is ready to make a move, and the eunuchs are disrupting the government. In such a turbulent situation in the court, which forces are determined to assassinate the prince of the vassal? Do you have to force the feudal lord to rebel? The purpose of making a king and worshiping a prime minister is to make a wife and a shadow. If Linwang's wife is gone, if the child is gone, you will definitely be defeated. Anyway, the prince is sick, and there are eunuchs who are disrupting the government. Whether the king is diligent or not, it doesn't matter if the king is diligent. The slogans for raising armies are ready-made. It doesn't matter if the troops are not enough. Don't use high-sounding slogans. You can even open the border to attract foreign enemies to invade (Wu Sangui did this). Even if the rebellion fails, you must avenge your son first. It would be unreasonable if King Xu arranged the assassination. The two kings of the Lin family and the Xu family with different surnames originally had a check and balance relationship with each other. The Lin family was destroyed and there was only one king with a different surname of the Xu family. It would only be more dangerous. The Xu family is not that stupid, right?

In fact, a plot suddenly occurred to me. Could it be that Zhi Yuan was the crown prince? Because the princess gave birth to a daughter at that time, but in order to have descendants, she adopted a baby boy to pretend to be the crown prince. Otherwise, why would it be explained that Zhi Yuan was so powerful, both civil and military? As for the prince, he is a loose man. He is uneducated and has no skills. It is okay to bully men and dominate women. It may be because of his guilt for the prince. If you write it like this, even if the identity of the male protagonist is discovered later, he will be reconciled.

What's the difference between what I wrote and the serious soul wear? You're causing trouble for yourself.

I believe the author's next book will be better than this one. Women don't need so many, just two or three. The main thing is to read the plot.

After watching the later part, I found that the plot was not quite right. I couldn't see the wisdom of the protagonist. Many of them were hindsight. The problem is that hindsight is useless. Moreover, the protagonist's method of dealing with the third prince in Beijing also seemed very unreasonable and passive. If it was a foreshadowing, it was a bit long.

I was either picking up girls or on the way to pick up girls. I wrote it with my lower body, right?

Liangcao Chapter 27 has not found any obvious poisonous points before, the logic is smooth, and the characters have brains, which is rare in similar novels. The shortcomings that I personally think subjectively include too many character descriptions and psychological descriptions, the plot context is not outstanding, and the protagonist's intelligence and other characters are not outstanding. Now I can see that it is ruthless. Of course, Chapter 27 is too short. This is a minor problem. It will depend on the author's operation in the future. In general, it is worth seeing, food and grass. Come on, author.

You seem to be smiling but not smiling all day long, smiling playfully, can't you use another word? There can be twenty or thirty times of half-laughing and playfulness in one chapter!

I'm a bit addicted, pretending that the prince doesn't know any information, it's better to pretend to have amnesia. Besides, the muscle memory of a person's small movements cannot be explained, and the logic is not very smooth.

This Machiavellian plot is written just like playing house.

The pace of the plot is too slow, the daily transitions are boring, and there are no exciting points. I gave up.

Abandoned, or it has become a cool article by Long Aotian. It can be seen that the author wants to pave the way for a Hongda conspiracy, but the plot cannot be grasped after a long time. I can no longer think of how these forces can wrestle and compromise. It is completely nailed to the pillar by the framework. The main line cannot be advanced like this. In addition, if you don't ask for leave and directly interrupt the update, you have given up.

This is my first time writing a book and I have no experience in writing a book. I am 18 years old and 1.8 Meters tall. Please bear with me!

This book is ready to be cut. It can be seen that you are very close, and you are stalling for time on hydrology. After all, the big framework is not built at all. You don't know how to push the main line forward.

The main line is pushed too slowly, too slowly

How many chapters has it been since this mess was broken?

Why hasn't the author updated in the past two days?

Urge an update😡

It's all booked, there's a bit too much emotional drama

The plot is very good, please give it a try, author