This Is Your World

In fact, this book is written for virgins who are around 10 years old. After all, more than 100 chapters are about how to make the two women willingly strip off their clothes and prick him with needles. Please understand that they are all from that age. Nowadays, the anti-pornography campaign is very powerful, so it is just a side effect.

I specifically recharged to comment. First of all, I would like to thank the author for being able to withstand the pressure and write harem novels in the big environment of Qidian. After all, harem novels are not popular nowadays. If the writing is a little leaky, it may be removed from the shelves if someone maliciously reports it. All previous efforts will be in vain. I have read Chapter 60 or 70 so far, and the plot is okay, but the writing does not attract me to keep reading. The female protagonist always looks at the male protagonist with strange and complicated eyes. I think it is enough to write this once, and there is no need to use such words every time. I feel that it is very awkward to read. In Chapter 62, the male protagonist was invited to the Su family for treatment. Li Suyi watched the male protagonist leave with a twinkling look in her eyes. I have written several times before about the way I looked at the male protagonist. It makes no sense to write like this. You can completely change the description method. The simplest way is to just watch it go away. Until it disappears from sight. Among the online articles I have read, the writing style can only be ranked average. I think a novel that can attract people to read is a wonderful novel.

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Since you have already made your choice, why bother asking why?

Chapter 283, extremely brainless. The male protagonist's personality is like that of a little loser. He has no ability or responsibility. He is as different as the first female protagonist and the second female protagonist in terms of status and ability. He keeps saying he wants to improve, but in fact he just sells swords everywhere. There is no actual action. Apart from the full-level medical skills given at the beginning, there is no progress. Secondly, the plot is extremely illogical. The plot with the eldest princess after arriving at the county town highlights a wise point. The male protagonist has no background and no ability, and the eldest princess is the fifth guardian when she opens her mouth, and she is willing to devote herself to win over him, which is ridiculous. The reason is that the male protagonist can attack the female protagonist. . . This smart plot is not so brainless in Korean dramas. The author's writing is good, and the plot and logic are the same as what a dog would think. The only one the heroines have a crush on is Qing Ning. The first girl is shy even if she doesn't take the initiative, and the cliche plot of blowing away the male protagonist after being kissed is disgusting. The eldest princess seems to have some serious illness. Her identity and abilities can be said to be rare in the world. Shouldn't the character be independent, confident and arrogant? I can understand the decentralization of power in order to deal with the enemy. It is really wise to sacrifice oneself. It's a pity to say so much. The themes and writing style of this book are quite good, but the plot and logic are really bad.

Let me make two simple points! 1. This is a historical novel with a martial arts style, a relaxed daily novel in an imaginary historical background. As for the specific subject matter, I don't know. I know everything I know, and then I ask about suicide. 2. The author is a good author, but I don't know if the book is serious or not 3. The male protagonist is not a scumbag, he just wants to give every good girl a home! 4. I didn't plan to write the fourth point 5. I didn't plan to write the fifth point either 6. I love you, good night!

They are also patients. The heroine gave a sword worth a thousand taels to treat the patient. Don't say that it was her duty as a doctor, so she only needed ten taels of silver. Later, when I heard Qingmei say that she had to treat a girl in the town for a hundred taels of gold, her eyes were almost shining. Note that a hundred taels of gold is equivalent to a thousand taels of silver. This is the content of the first thirty chapters. It's just a lick of a dog. I won't read the rest. Feel free to read it.

Because the woman had a conflict with the county magistrate's son, and then because of the woman's conflict with the county magistrate's son, I only got to chapter 120. . . . Is it because of the conflict between Li Suyi and the young master of a certain martial arts sect, or because of the conflict between the eldest princess and the son of the prime minister?

In fact, the role of Li Xinyi feels a bit useless. The author probably has no interest in orthopedics, so he added this character again, and there are many scenes. I guess he will give this sister to someone else in the end. By the way, is the author creating this character just to satisfy the protagonist's lack of family affection?

Plot Discussion Post After reading Chapter 78, the two female characters Nvxia and Nvqianjin are not likeable. After all, the heroine has been in the society. When facing her savior, she always talks coldly. On the surface, she looks arrogant, but in fact, she is selfish and arrogant. She cannot distinguish the situation, so she will covet her body, otherwise there will be no good end. It's normal for a daughter to scold pig's feet in a teahouse, but it's not appropriate to mock her many times at home. After all, they are here to save you, so how can you throw away your tutor? It's not that you have to be a good person, but you must be good on the surface. Especially the eldest maid keeps giving pig-footed looks. I don't know whether to say this character is stupid or that the author is not online. Do you know why teachers and doctors are given red envelopes now? It's not that I'm afraid you won't do your best, but I'm afraid that you'll do something bad! Although the female Qingmei has few appearances for the time being, the setting is very lovable. This is what Tsundere is. The book writes many times about women's shyness and blushing after physical contact. In fact, this is very against the norm. If someone doesn't like you, they should show resistance and shame. Where can there be shyness? ? ? I am continuing to read, just to see what other book friends think. What do you think? Welcome to discuss.

Slim waist makes the moon shine, long sleeves dance in the spring breeze

Many people criticize the author. I deliberately read nearly 50 chapters. How can I put it, the subject matter is good and the ideas are also very good. Unfortunately, the writing style needs to be sharpened. The author has too little social experience, or is relatively naive, and he does have a bit of a lick to the opposite sex, but overall it is not bad. You can still read it without thinking

1. In fact, I started to follow this book not long after it was published. I gave up when I subscribed to more than 200 chapters. In May, I found that I had read it all, so I simply picked it up again. 2. When I picked it up and re-read it, I also remembered the reason why I gave up on it in the first place: the protagonist was really unlikable. 3. It stands to reason that even if the protagonist is not well portrayed, as long as the story is told well, the logic is in place, and the supporting characters are good, he should at least be popular. However, this book is considered a harem, and it is the kind of heroine who is half-sympathized with, which is dangerous 4. I remember one thought when I gave up the game, this protagonist has no merit at all, is the heroine blind, so everyone will pounce on her? 5. Now that I have read the whole book, I finally congratulate the author for at least telling a story with a beginning and an end. I will not comment on the rest. I hope that if the author has a new book, he can learn some experience and put more effort into the portrayal of the protagonist.

Hey, the outline is pretty good, but why does it make everyone look so retarded and annoying? It feels so abrasive, I might collapse.

I just want to complain about Miss Su's body function declining after being poisoned. Why does the author say that the doctor can't diagnose it and still says she is not sick? Does the author understand medicine? If she doesn't understand, then don't write a doctor protagonist.

A romance film about a costume idol, starring a little fresh meat...

Harmful, in fact, I think the writing was good at the beginning, but later the logic collapsed, and I went undercover in the girlfriend's rival company. One of them dared to invite, and the other actually dared to go. From the previous description, there is nothing wrong with the characters of Princess and Suyi. It feels like the protagonist is a stalker-type licking dog. No matter how cold others are to him, he must find a way to lick him happily, and then be moved countless times. Moreover, in ancient literature, girls must be jealous, and the rich second generation must be pampered, forcing misunderstandings, and then Afterwards, the two parties were so moved that they reconciled. If it were changed to a modern novel, it would be a love story about the couple breaking up and getting back together dozens of times. She was even more Qiong Yao than Qiong Yao, and she had no choice but to give up the book. There is also a girl with peerless martial arts. When someone touches her, her whole body goes limp and her eyes become blurred... Isn't this joke used a little too much? I've never seen such a sensitive physique in my life. It would be unimaginable for this girl to have a modern massage with a serious male technician. It would be even more terrifying if a man had such a physique... Basically, he had sex more than 20 times without even taking off his pants and holding hands.

I spent a few days reading it from the beginning during the limited-time free period for newcomers. I finally thought about it and ordered it all because I haven't read such a light-hearted daily novel in a long time. Although the recent plot is a bit bloody and has gone downhill, I think the author knows what the audience wants to see (just add more sweet and spicy ones). The updates are really hard to describe. I think if the author works harder, the performance of this book should be more than this, and there are also extra chapters that should be updated! (It would be a waste not to write with such good writing skills! 😆 (As for adding more chapters... Just let it go, I just hope the author can polish the plot and bring the book to a higher level.) In the end, the host + 9 monthly votes for refinement!

No, the county magistrate's son is acting like a bitch, and the county magistrate's son is acting like a bitch. Author, what age are you in, why are you still pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger over and over again? What's more, you don't even change your map? Just change your name? Your book is really simple. Can't you just read it every day?

I don't know why but I feel like I'm getting more and more sluggish. I read one chapter a day. The plot moves very slowly and it's not interesting to watch.

I feel like I'm about to break down from writing,,, it's too watery, bye bye

Both of this author's books feel like they are written about harems. Except for one female protagonist and two female protagonists, the supporting characters are basically childish and even annoying... It's really better to write about a single female protagonist if it doesn't work.

Shen Qingning is really annoying. She keeps messing around and making trouble. And the male protagonist doesn't like to speak directly. He is soft-hearted at times and can't speak out. What a holy mother's heart.

…It's good at the front but hard to describe at the back. It's a pity to abandon it.

Green Lemon

There is indeed a problem with the portrayal of the male protagonist. Shen Qingning goes crazy every day. The male protagonist will only say "It's not what you think", "You misunderstood" and "I can explain". I don't know how many times I have seen this scene. Is this a fixed routine? I really can't stand it anymore. If you want to have a harem, you have to be pretending like this. I can't stand it.

Good besties

The prince is less than 18 years old, but his level is quite high, and he has secretly attracted so many people. It's puzzling. The prime minister's children are all under 20 years old, and they have indeed grown up watching the emperor in his 50s. The age issue is puzzling. The prince dares to kill his father and usurp the throne, is he still afraid of assassinating the queen? The princess actually refused to leave. These bugs are unsolvable.

If this had a single female protagonist, maybe more people would watch it.