My Life Turned into a Surreal Adventure Game!

Regarding what the protagonist did in the first chapter, the girl was still shy and blushing😳. Why do I feel like I will be treated as a compliment by a girl and say "your husband" behind my back? I will lose my right to choose my high school spouse.

I'm currently reading Chapter 158, and I can only say that I'm going high and low. As I write, I switch from a surreal adventure to the old routine of urban pretentiousness and slap in the face. There's also this damn dual heroine emotional line. I have another choice for a love story, and it's not your turn to write it. Replacing real-life technology tree nouns with magic terms is a very good idea, but it is very difficult and requires an understanding of both sides. You need to check, translate and write at the same time. Just because it is difficult, you turn to urban and hydrology? Come on, everyone is basically here for creativity. If you do this, why don't I just read urban cool articles?

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The setting is common, but overall it is a nonsensical and funny youth novel. It is a light novel. You can read it if you can accept it, rather than an urban supernatural or fantasy novel.

Some points expose the protagonist's daily mental retardation, but overall it's pretty good.

This subject reminds me of a Korean movie about mental illness, the same thing

Nice looking. I like it! ! ! The plot of guns is a bit too exaggerated. Drugs that can remove guns are not good and can be contraband. If you want to write about guns, the Knights should not only give certificates but should also have at least a physical award of 10 gold coins. Also, if students are written out, they should be written as citizens.

What the hell is Chapter 43 about? The text doesn't match up, and there's even a story about playing basketball and asking the heroine to be the girlfriend of the villain. It's too retarded.

No, the style of painting changed too quickly, from a campus love adventure to a patriotic novel, and the emotional lines of the two heroines were also handled too roughly and slipped away.

It's quite interesting in the front, but it gets boring as you go to the back.

With such embarrassment, you can see that he is a god

The creativity, especially the use of magic to explain the learning content, and the interaction with the heroines are also very campus-like. However, the main line is not obvious at present. If these two points are ignored, the plot will seem to be relatively simple. The shaping of the female protagonists is also relatively blank, but it has only been more than 60 chapters and the male protagonist has not been shaped yet. Don't say that the female protagonist is not demanding so quickly. As for the current plot, I think it is okay to add some system capabilities and some small skills, but I think the undead in that period should not be treated with illusory things. Since it is clear that depression is approaching, depression is more afraid of false and deceptive things, so it is better to act from another angle. The second one is where the orcs play ball. The whole thing seems to be an inexplicable thing written to get rewards. It's okay to get rewards, but does this incident promote the development of the plot? In fact, the undead part also has this problem, but it also writes about normal people's emotions later, so it's not outrageous. The suggestion I give you is to write down the main plot and branch plots to shape the characters, especially some supporting characters. The part where the exam is imagined as a magic circle can be developed more. The protagonist's personality characteristics are also in line with the characteristics of this book. Finally, the only requirement for new authors is not to be a eunuch. Five monthly tickets support it, come on!

The chapters that have not been changed later have a lot of plot repetitions. The author should speed up uploading new chapters. It feels like a tear when reading.

The setting is very good, but the protagonist is a mission tool

The main character was decided too early, and the protagonist is only a few days into his freshman year, and he has already created world-leading works. He will not be able to fill in the gaps later, and will only feel like water. Besides, the protagonist is only a junior magician now, which is a bit too much. How do you plan to write about the hidden profession of the dragon knight before?

What did you write after it was released? The plot after going to college is really rubbish.

You can become a superman if you keep adding more points. A man can experience violence beyond the limits of the human body without increasing his physical strength. Does the author think there are too many people watching?

Have you ever taken risks? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

Because the book was opened in a hurry and the settings and main plot were not well prepared, the book was re-edited, adding some settings, deleting some settings, and also changing some content that everyone felt was bad. Each chapter name with the word "Change" in it is the chapter after re-release. However, sometimes there is a problem with Dian Niang. It is obvious that the content and chapter name have been changed. The chapter name is restored to the original one, but the content has been changed. Please pay attention to this.

Why did it become a science and technology article later?

It's a pity. At first I was expecting some real fantasy creatures to be mixed in.

The previous adventure has some flaws, but it is very attractive. The flaw is that the brother made 100 million in a week by selling props to the dragon sister. This is not stock trading, but props reselling. It feels quite interesting to take risks and fight against criminals. There is too much thought in this idea, no wonder it will collapse 1. Identity. Do adventurers usually call themselves "human adults" when greeting them? Just the occasional emphasis on the title has become a daily routine. The Chinese are all humans, the island country is all goblins, the white bear country is druids, the sunspots are all lizardmen, and orcs 2. The magic circle is not related to the subject, as if the protagonist knows it is fake. The key is that the system does not think it is fake, so the magic circle is based on painting, the advancement is related rituals, and the switch is magic. Various magic circle drawings are rewarded by the system. Later, you can create your own magic circle and even travel through the world of low magic. High magic has gods 3. Since you are a student, the learning content should be related to magic. Elemental magic requires physical geography, forbidden spells require physical geography and chemistry, shaping magic requires biochemistry, alchemy requires material science, and mathematics of magic dangers can be modeled to improve accuracy 4. In high school, you can't do magic but can only use ultra-small related ritual circles. You can learn the fighting spirit refining method to strengthen the body (without fighting spirit, you can only strengthen it). The magic power you can recover depends on tasks. The theme of high school is learning. You can use plug-ins to play games and pretend to be 13 to teach you bad habits. During the holidays, you can travel and explore everywhere 5. The theme of college is to use new research to catch bad guys before your sophomore year. , Join the club and do the task outfit 13. After junior year, you will become a researcher to analyze the essence of magic, make life-saving alchemical weapons, create magic circles to travel, go to other worlds to study elements and the underlying logic of living things, and then travel to various worlds to explore the absorption, transformation and application of natural energy. By the way, you can enter the magical world, join the plot line, make friends and recruit disciples. If you don't write enough, you can also go to Hogwarts to join the martial arts fairy tale.

You just saw the latest chapter in one breath and stopped updating? 😰

Are you the only extraordinary person? Then isn't this just your pretentious style? It's not interesting!

I cried when I saw the part about the bionic limbs. I support you!