There's Something Not Quite Right About the Role-Playing System That's Refreshed Every Week

So far, I think the portrayal of the heroine Ai Yao has been very successful, and it has successfully made the male protagonist look like a scumbag. With the current portrayal of Ai Yao, I am afraid there will be a Shura field in the future, and whether the novel is good or not will change in time.                                                                                             Reviews Not bad, the key is that golden fingers are like pressure valves, they come too often in a week.

I stayed up all night to catch up on it for four days, finished it, and reviewed it The evaluation is above the fairy grass, if it is plentiful and well-written, it has the qualifications of a small god (this track is a god) In the systematic daily campus love novels, what you have written is considered to be great 👍 It needs to be systematic and systematic, emotional and emotional, pulling and pulling, abstract and abstract. I kept up with it all night long and couldn't sleep at night. It felt like I was back in my youth in high school 😭 Compared with the abstract book about systems, I personally feel that this book is not as day-to-day as that one. Most of them are about emotional scenes and promoting the progress of system tasks. When I read the abstract book, he would often write several short stories. He writes dryly about daily life, systems and abstractions, and does not write about emotional scenes 😐 Compared with him, I personally feel that the level of abstraction you write is comparable to his, and it is also abstract but also contains emotional drama, so that people will not be disgusted by the monotony 😁 According to me personally, this book you wrote, the author, is the most interesting track I have read after the book on systematic abstraction and the book on Jiang Nian (both completed), and it made me regain the feeling of youth Finally, it has been solemnly confirmed, and 6 monthly tickets are given. I look forward to the update, and I hope everyone knows (The above is purely personal opinion, no bad guidance)

The introduction and the first chapter [Character: Cowherd] - [Character: Altair], because Cowherd of Cowherd and Weaver Girl was involved in violations, resulting in a lot less recommendations these days... I really have no choice Hehehe, I must live on.

Let me go first, have you ever had a system? Some things are written randomly, I take it for granted😋

Very well written, currently Xiancao As long as your update can surpass that guy, we will make you the new leader

The writing is quite nice, but the author is too short.

It's a bit too much. Changing roles in role-playing is the same as changing people. Adding the role of a holy monk will completely eliminate all emotions and desires. It gives me the feeling of changing the protagonist every week.

A unified reply to the incident in Chapter 8 about Qin betraying the entire class, resulting in the confiscation of more than 20 mobile phones: I have actually seen campus bullying, more than once, in the same class. Cold violence is very common. My high school is a provincial key school in Zhejiang, but the two best classes here have such targets. 80 among students is very simple. As long as someone is outside the big group, and has a few behaviors that make others a little bit unhappy, plus a popular group initiator, it can be triggered, but the scale varies. From junior high school to high school, I went to the best private school in our county and the second best public school in our county. I can only say that 80 is not uncommon. Even in junior high school, I almost became the target of being 80-my grades have always been among the top ten in my class, and I have a good relationship with my teachers. Fortunately, I have relatively good friends, and I have never done anything outrageous, so I was spared. I have seen someone in my class who had better grades than me get 80% off, and even brought it to the principal's office. The entire grade knew about it - it should be said that everyone at this age participated in 80% off to a greater or lesser extent. In the end, the whole class went to watch a psychology lecture on The Shape of Sound. Good grades are never a panacea. At most, some bullying that is not so bad in nature will be exempted, but for such outrageous behavior as reporting every student with a mobile phone in the class... I can only recommend transferring to another school. No matter how good your grades are, you are destined to be unable to integrate into your classmates. Imagine that one of the people who was reported had a particularly radical mentality and directly made the matter public and told everyone about it. Then, people in the entire grade, or even the entire school, may become your enemies and your potential targets. Students can be said to be one of the most irrational groups, especially those who live on campus. Any minor flaws in life will be magnified. For example, if you have a roommate who you don't like, you will think that all his behaviors are displeasing to you. But you can't get rid of him. Day after day, conflicts accumulate, and then either break out or reconcile, but they tend to break out. Once you don't like it, it's hard to reconcile. So campus bullying does not have to be called 80 until it causes depression, transfer of schools, collapse or even suicide. The real campus bullying is: a person who dislikes you brings a group of close friends together and talks coldly behind your back. It then progressed to the point where he and his friends looked down on you, made sarcastic remarks together, and pulled their friends to hate you. At this stage, many people who were originally indifferent will have to make sarcastic remarks to you in order to fit in with you - middle school students are so irrational. A class is only so big, and the scope of students' activities is so wide. You know they are talking about you, but you can't really explode. It's useless to explode. They are just being cold and violent. No matter how great a teacher is, you cannot force others to treat you well. And most importantly, reporting this behavior is particularly egregious. This is betrayal! It is one of the most unacceptable behaviors of human beings. There is no doubt about the importance of mobile phones to middle school students. It is no exaggeration to say that mobile phones are their lifeblood. Your mobile phone was confiscated, even if you just made a suggestion at the beginning and did not participate later, middle school students will not care. Confucius once said: "The one who started the work has no consequences?" This causal relationship can even affect a school-wide 80-I am not exaggerating. Think about it, you are a middle school student in a different class. Maybe you brought a mobile phone, maybe you didn't. But no matter what, you are a student, and you will always do some things that are inconvenient for teachers to know, such as bringing extracurricular books, writing novels and drawings in class, bringing playing cards, MP3 players, and mobile phones... You will treat the students as your own family, your own collective, and your own class. At this time, you suddenly heard a primary school classmate with whom you have a good relationship (he is in the next class) complaining that his mobile phone was confiscated by the teacher because of a girl's slander. What do you think when you see him filled with resentment? Do you feel a chill in your back? When you see the girl you are talking about, are you afraid that she will "stab" you in the back at some point? Do you think that if she knew your secret that the teacher should not know, she would also take credit from the teacher? She can betray the collective once, and she can betray the collective a second time; she can betray other people's secrets, and she can betray your secrets. Okay, after knowing the above information. When you see the girl who reported the whole class in the public opinion, will you approach her? Won't. You are also afraid that she will report your secret. When you see your friend trying to get close to that girl, will you stop your friend? It will. It is the bounden duty of brothers to advise their friends to stay away from sources of danger. When you hear your friend slandering that girl, will you agree or just agree in your heart? It will. A girl can do the shocking thing of backstabbing the entire class, how can she be a good person? Since she is not a good person, she must be at fault for this matter. When you and your roommates are chatting at night and the other roommates all slander the girl, will you defend her? Won't. Even if you remain rational in your heart, you won't go against the grain and stand up for her—unless you want to antagonize your roommate. Public opinion is like this. Betrayal is the most intolerable act. In the eyes of middle school students, there is no essential difference between betraying a classmate's cell phone and a traitor betraying national interests. You can betray your classmates now, and during the Anti-Japanese War, you can betray your nation. "The True Story of Ah Q" is a very good work that describes the mentality of middle school students. They are very similar. Ah Q had a kind of ill will toward some vulnerable groups, such as little nuns, which he didn't know where he came from. Sometimes, people just have evil that comes from nowhere, and they will tilt this evil into a "moral depression" (cesspit). Adding insult to injury is just a convenient behavior, and most people do it consciously or unconsciously. Campus bullying occurs naturally. Besides, a class like this can receive more than 20 mobile phones. It is no exaggeration to say that everyone should have brought it. In reality, it shouldn't be a class that can get you into a key university. The quality of students should be lower than what I experienced. I'm not being alarmist. If you do something like this, transferring to another school is already the best arrangement.

There's a lot of trash talk, and some of the plots are too old. It feels like it's not suitable for today's cities, and it feels more like it was from a few years ago. Also, the plot is rather awkward. The rumors about the heroine's scandal are outrageous, especially in an urban campus. It's actually okay for the gangster to mention it once, but it's weird after all. There is no male protagonist fighting in the latest campus, and it feels like it's not handled well at all. There is no need for this if the heroine is too beautiful. It would be more interesting if it were in a class of gods, just like the college entrance examination book. Three female protagonists are actually a bit less. Like College Entrance Examination and Reignited, there are three female protagonists, because they can draw more plots, and three characters don't feel long... The protagonist is also a bit of a genius, and he relies on the system to learn and make money. He is a bit of a pure tool person. It seems that without a system, the protagonist is a pure waste. I hope that the next plot will not be too old, and try to change it. [Purely personal opinion] Okay, let's talk about the advantages. I compared the book on the College Entrance Examination and Reignited. Everyone should know the scores of these two books. In short, even if this book has problems, it is still a masterpiece

This deceptive plot is really boring. I don't know what the author thinks. It's interesting to write about a profession where the protagonist changes from a normal character with personality to a person who talks nonsense. The key is that everyone else knows that the protagonist is lying. Is it really interesting that the protagonist continues to lie?

No? Isn't that guy from a foreign school Chapter 50 still unexplained? Keep your diaphragm to deal with people?

I feel like the author is very spiritual, but don't always make it seem like the male supporting characters care about the slutty heroine in the future. This is actually quite shocking.

Great, as expected, only a virgin can write about this feeling of first love.

The plot is okay, but the details and logic are not good, and you have to throw away the brain. The test paper adds 100 points, and it turns out that the answers are automatically modified. It is purely a rule. This pit cannot be buried at all. It is too outrageous. If you publish a theoretical experiment test paper by yourself, doesn't the world view directly explode, and the protagonist directly becomes the country's protected talent?

I thought something was wrong. I was playing the role of Abin, Gao Yi. If you wrote it like this, you would definitely be popular.

To be honest, water is not the original sin. The slow progress of playing bad jokes is actually understandable. But with daily updates, the problem becomes infinitely larger. Now, reading just one chapter a day is not enough, and I haven't seen any changes in the plot for several days. A small thing can back and forth for several days (real time) In fact, the writing is quite good, but it is too torture to keep up with the updates. If this continues, I really have to keep reading.

Sorry, I chose a holy monk and actually shaved my head. The second character was too difficult to hold up. He was just like a monk. Who watches monks in youth campus novels...

The current page design is really stupid, simple becomes more complex.

But your absolute strength value setting, the answer automatically modified, and the report from the squad leader are really abstract and a bit lost in your mind.

The more than 60 chapters are quite satisfactory, and the plot progresses slowly. The most important thing is that there are two books written before you. If you read them compared to those two books, they are neither abstract nor sweet.

And the author, you have written so many female protagonists. Don't waver. You want to refine the readers by writing later and go the route of a single female protagonist. Otherwise, according to my more than 10 years of reading experience, you will probably not get good results when you write like this (really, I have read many books before, and they all collapsed like this, wavering. After multiple female protagonists were changed to single female protagonists, readers were lost, and then the book collapsed. , They just don't know what the basics of the books they write are. Author, please don't do this. This is equivalent to throwing away your own basics, and it is equivalent to the monarch listening to the slander and abandoning the country. Moreover, if you write a female protagonist later, it will make readers feel that the character has been let down, or is being underestimated, and those in the book circle will be scolded 😥) Now that the protagonist has a system, so many heroines have been written, so many emotional debts have been incurred, and he is capable, why should he still let him down? Does the protagonist care so much about worldly opinions? Author, if you really don't know how to deal with the ending, there are actually two non-solutions. 1. Like a certain book, everyone achieves a de facto marriage but does not get a certificate and becomes a de facto couple 2. Create multiple time and space love lines, write multiple if lines, etc. (It is best to only write extras, otherwise you will be scolded later) These two methods can be used together. Method 1 is used as the happy ending line, which is the backbone of the plot. The second method is a side story, which is a branch of time and space (the side story can even be written with a single girl, choose any two girls, any three girls, any four girls, any five girls, a hatchet ending, a widowed ending, an unsystematic ending, etc. Such expansions can not only cheat monthly tickets, but also take care of some non-main characters. For online readers, it is even more confusing, but the prerequisite must be to write that the extra line is not the main time and space line, but a branch or parallel line of the time and space line. It is just a possibility of thousands of futures and has nothing to do with the main time and space, so that the main line readers of the basic disk will not affect the sense of substitution) 😏

Brother, this quality only has this data, it feels like it's been rigged. As a very picky reader, being able to read the last chapter says it all. I hope friends who click in can support the author.

One look at the author and I know that he is a little virgin, not a little virgin. I can't think of such a good relationship 🤓

Can you push the emotional drama faster? It's the same as not watching it every day. There is little progress for the three heroines now, and they are about to add more characters 😅

The author writes very well, with a more realistic high school feel, and a strong youth style. The writing is humorous when it should be, and it is also very beautiful when it should show literary talent. However, it may feel a bit too high school, resulting in the plot being rather daily and bland. The time for love and Shura field is occupied by studying, so maybe it is just an average read? As a daily novel, it is very good, but as a romance novel, the progress is slow. Recently, several more characters have appeared. I hope the author can Try to arrange each character line as much as possible, give out more sweets or let the protagonist have some enlightenment, and then use holidays and other time points to arrange more events to speed up the progress of the characters. Otherwise, I don't know how long it will take to finish writing several characters. I feel that I am almost going to college. The right way to spend my college time on dating. However, the author has his own rhythm, and doing so will really ruin the rhythm. However, the author's updates are not optimistic. I have little motivation to read after finishing it within a few days, and I am afraid of dying. Therefore, I should lock the author in a dark room for 10,000 chapters a day. Overall, this is a very comfortable book to read. The characters have distinct characteristics. Liu Yulin is so perfect!

According to this progress, the story should end after the college entrance examination. After that, they will go to different schools to go their separate ways, each with their own social life and life. The male protagonist will probably use the system's abilities to pursue a career and improve himself. Many years later, everyone will probably be married and have children, each with his or her own family, and the protagonist will probably still be single, probably relying on the system to become invincible and ascend. When everyone thinks back later, they may feel nostalgic for their youthful self, or feel relieved, and occasionally smile foolishly, because they can no longer return to that innocent age, and bread and milk are the necessities of life. I think this is a relatively perfect ending. After all, this is just high school. Everyone has young love, but they have to return to reality. Either accept them all or accept none.

The protagonist is too weak, so some abilities that are generally within human rights cannot be permanent?

This Xin is really stupid and makes me feel uncomfortable just looking at it.

Xin Ruyu

Viewed to 48, too many negative comments, not emotionally involved